Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/1/18, 3:53 PM
Oh this is good!
Danny
9/1/18, 2:57 PM
I love that, whether he knows it or not, Jack's wish has made having sex with him more addictive than any drug ever could be...
9/1/18, 1:46 PM
Loved it! I hope there is more!
9/1/18, 1:44 PM
Wow. That was really hot! Smart, kind wish, followed by smoking hot sex. Are you planning a second wish story?
Matt
9/1/18, 1:40 PM
More!!! Oh dear god more of that!! Love to see Finn come back sheepishly wanting to feel what he felt here!! Damn, well done!!
Apr 4, 2017
Daniel
8/27/18, 1:25 PM
Very detailed, well written, solid characters, brave, romantic....hot! The way it wrapped up got me a bit emotional, great job dude ! I. J. S.
Daniel
8/6/18, 12:00 AM
Nice job- wish I could've met a 'Xander' in high school I. J. S.
Anonymous
4/19/18, 4:30 PM
Please write more
2/9/18, 12:55 AM
Thanks very much, Mdlftr. Maybe Martin will have to add an icon/rating for tears? :)
Mdlftr
2/8/18, 4:11 PM
I just reread chapters 7-8 -9 and cried all over again. They are happy tears and ones of tribute to a well-written, emotionally complex, compelling, positive story. Thank you!
9/29/17, 11:41 PM
Bluemohawk: Thanks so much for your comments. It's nice to know this story has touched so many people.
Bluemohawk
9/29/17, 11:18 PM
When I read exceptional stories like this, I feel like I am witnessing a great talent unfold. I am 55 and related to so much in this story. This is easily one of my favorites online or in print. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with the world, and keep writing!
Jun 25, 2017
screamingmoist
8/27/17, 5:06 PM
@bateriam glad you enjoyed it!
Jun 25, 2017
bateriam
8/25/17, 10:46 PM
Man! Read it in two sittings - one dressed and hard . . . and now naked and bating. Just gotta say, "Thanks!"
Apr 4, 2017
bateriam
8/13/17, 7:18 PM
Man! Great transformation draw out. Had me good and hard reading it! Thanks for the effort writing it . . . though I'm sure you were also nicely stimulated while doing so!
Jun 25, 2017
Anonymous
6/30/17, 11:56 PM
Absolutely rad to see a TF story as well done as this with a nice stout short bear sub as the end point. Don't see enough of those so it's damn nice to read.
Jun 25, 2017
Johnnyadams
6/28/17, 6:07 AM
Great story! I couldn't look away
Jun 25, 2017
screamingmoist
6/27/17, 1:58 PM
Thanks for reading and the kind words! Glad people are enjoying it so far.
Jun 25, 2017
Anonymous
6/27/17, 5:00 AM
So good!
Jun 25, 2017
Anonymous
6/27/17, 4:07 AM
You are officially my favorite author on this site! Love all your stories
Jun 25, 2017
Anonymous
6/26/17, 10:54 PM
Always a treat. Looking forward to the next installment!
Jun 25, 2017
ChaoticDjinn
6/26/17, 7:31 PM
Absolutely amazing story. I love how you mix light ambient horror into your stories but don't pull any punches on the changes or sex scenes. Really made me think of Rose Red or Betrayal at house on the hill, but you know, smexy :3. Always love seeing your name on the front page.
Jun 25, 2017
Drepanididae
6/26/17, 11:17 AM
I loved the transformation aspect of this story. The characters' development was interesting to follow and the ending was sweet.
Apr 4, 2017
Anonymous
4/9/17, 12:51 AM
Really liked the way this tied up! Made me cum
Apr 4, 2017
Anonymous
4/8/17, 4:44 AM
What we do for passion
Apr 4, 2017
David
4/7/17, 10:45 PM
Oh, HELL yeah! This is one hell of a hot story!
Apr 4, 2017
Anonymous
4/7/17, 7:24 PM
Nice story! Really hot
Apr 4, 2017
JamieTi684
4/5/17, 10:14 AM
This is amazing!
Apr 4, 2017
Anonymous
4/5/17, 10:01 AM
very hot!
3/29/17, 11:58 PM
I remain so gratified by the response to this story. I don't do a huge amount of online reading, so I wondered if anyone had suggestions for other gay-friendly fiction websites which might be interested in posting it. It'd be nice to reach readers who might appreciate this story but aren't visitors of this site. All ideas are welcome! Feel free to post comments here or drop me an email at citizencriskane@yahoo.com. Thanks!