Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/3/18, 11:29 AM
Now, I just want a happy ending for these boys.
BostonSatyr
9/3/18, 11:05 AM
an excellent offering. given the nature of this site, it'd be interesting to take this further, and see how these wishes may corrupt the Master, get out of hand so the the genie is overcome, etc. Really encourage more installments.
Corinthian
9/2/18, 8:40 PM
Well, this was genuinely one of the better stories I've read on this site, and that's a lot of stories. Economically drawn credible characters, a fluid narrative arc, a warm tone. Whilst it didn't actually get me off, I truly don't care, it was such a good story - many thanks. I love the genie!
Anonymous
9/2/18, 6:41 PM
Really hoping Rada tries to take advantage of the situation and that it backfires on him, becomes addicted to sex with his master
Anonymous
9/2/18, 8:43 AM
Thought at first that this was basically going to be "Consent" the fable jammed with pc (I know this is always important in sex but it just doesn't harmonise well with a story involving mind control for obvious reasons). But you are such a fantastic writer that it works well and you are left with a story that does not simply fulfils your kinks but also leaves you cute and warm inside. Quite a rare and amazing story and kudos or achieving it.
Anonymous
9/2/18, 4:07 AM
Man, I usually like kinkier shit but this was just such an interesting mix of very sweet and very hot. I really... don't want Jack to get fucked over by Rada, even though I usually like my "wishes you end up regretting" stories. It's good to have some happy, sweet, positive ones in there too.
Anonymous
9/2/18, 1:52 AM
This one story as raised my expectations for this entire site. Please continue this story
Anonymous
9/1/18, 8:03 PM
Very hot. Please continue. Let Jack outwit Rada and let them enslave each other.
diddle kid, protector of diddleville
9/1/18, 8:00 PM
I usually don't like friendly consensual sex stories but this was awesome. You did so well that I was actually hoping it would stay friendly and consensual, which never happens for me. Bravo
Anonymous
9/1/18, 6:17 PM
Above the author says that chapter 4 hasn’t been released yet. Does that mean one was written?
9/1/18, 4:20 PM
Thank you guys. I'm happy the things I was trying to express came through clearly. I don't have a sequel immediately planned but I do have some thoughts for a future continuation. I've been letting this story cook for quite a while and I reached the point where I had to set it down and make some decisions before I could figure out where else it might go.
LongtimeFan
9/1/18, 3:53 PM
AMAZING! This story was phenomenal in every way: a kind, thoughtful protagonist, a wish that didn’t immediately ruin people’s lives (clever and sweet!), an achingly hot muscle worship bit, and a sex scene so amazingly hot, so perfectly written, that I felt like I was right there (I almost always skip the sex scenes, but this was PERFECTION). Amazing job!
Anonymous
9/1/18, 3:53 PM
Oh this is good!
Danny
9/1/18, 2:57 PM
I love that, whether he knows it or not, Jack's wish has made having sex with him more addictive than any drug ever could be...
9/1/18, 1:46 PM
Loved it! I hope there is more!
9/1/18, 1:44 PM
Wow. That was really hot! Smart, kind wish, followed by smoking hot sex. Are you planning a second wish story?
Matt
9/1/18, 1:40 PM
More!!! Oh dear god more of that!! Love to see Finn come back sheepishly wanting to feel what he felt here!! Damn, well done!!
Apr 4, 2017
Daniel
8/27/18, 1:25 PM
Very detailed, well written, solid characters, brave, romantic....hot! The way it wrapped up got me a bit emotional, great job dude ! I. J. S.
Daniel
8/6/18, 12:00 AM
Nice job- wish I could've met a 'Xander' in high school I. J. S.
Anonymous
4/19/18, 4:30 PM
Please write more
2/9/18, 12:55 AM
Thanks very much, Mdlftr. Maybe Martin will have to add an icon/rating for tears? :)
Mdlftr
2/8/18, 4:11 PM
I just reread chapters 7-8 -9 and cried all over again. They are happy tears and ones of tribute to a well-written, emotionally complex, compelling, positive story. Thank you!
9/29/17, 11:41 PM
Bluemohawk: Thanks so much for your comments. It's nice to know this story has touched so many people.
Bluemohawk
9/29/17, 11:18 PM
When I read exceptional stories like this, I feel like I am witnessing a great talent unfold. I am 55 and related to so much in this story. This is easily one of my favorites online or in print. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with the world, and keep writing!
Jun 25, 2017
screamingmoist
8/27/17, 5:06 PM
@bateriam glad you enjoyed it!
Jun 25, 2017
bateriam
8/25/17, 10:46 PM
Man! Read it in two sittings - one dressed and hard . . . and now naked and bating. Just gotta say, "Thanks!"
Apr 4, 2017
bateriam
8/13/17, 7:18 PM
Man! Great transformation draw out. Had me good and hard reading it! Thanks for the effort writing it . . . though I'm sure you were also nicely stimulated while doing so!
Jun 25, 2017
Anonymous
6/30/17, 11:56 PM
Absolutely rad to see a TF story as well done as this with a nice stout short bear sub as the end point. Don't see enough of those so it's damn nice to read.
Jun 25, 2017
Johnnyadams
6/28/17, 6:07 AM
Great story! I couldn't look away
Jun 25, 2017
screamingmoist
6/27/17, 1:58 PM
Thanks for reading and the kind words! Glad people are enjoying it so far.