Recent Comments

TheGreatStoryTeller
10/5/18, 6:47 AM
I have a feeling Pierce has been keeping an eye on these two for a while now ;) Also, I wish Chico got to have the drink he was looking for! I have high hopes for him
bikerbro
10/5/18, 3:53 AM
Holy shit, this is easily one of the hottest stories I've read on here, and that's no mere feat! Easy-going surfer dudes, red-headed fratbros, and rage-riddled punks, all with natural chemistry and a unique concept. Much love for this story, man.
Anonymous
10/5/18, 12:59 AM
Great changes and good cliff hanger at the end! Party on, dudes!
Anonymous
10/5/18, 12:43 AM
Great humor and great writing! I'm enjoying this honeymoon!
Anonymous
10/4/18, 9:19 PM
Excellent Great Thanks
Anonymous
10/4/18, 6:43 PM
Love the personality changes!
10/4/18, 6:21 PM
Confirms my suspicion that the best stories don't depend on sex but on good story-telling. Excellent so far!
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10/4/18, 3:52 PM
I like the age regression idea!
LongtimeFan
10/4/18, 8:09 AM
What a great chapter! Plenty of sexy transformation (I have a thing for hot, chilled out, dull-minded frat bros AND hot, chilled-out, drawling surfers, so...), and great plot advancement, too. I can't help but worry for Chico, though...two punks running around is a recipe for a comedy of errors (wink wink). Amazing job!
9/30/18, 7:16 AM
I enjoy Werebear transformation. I enjoy romance. If you like those things too then seek them out, they're on the net.
9/29/18, 11:39 PM
Wonderful! I hope more transformation stories are coming.
Hogbreath
9/29/18, 4:00 AM
Really good. i'd like to come see a series, heavy on erotic forced transformation.
m greene
9/28/18, 11:23 PM
I really enjoyed this - thank you for writing it!
9/28/18, 2:25 PM
A suspense story that winds up being a love story. Very sweet. :)
Ruffcub
9/28/18, 12:36 PM
Awesome!
Donnie
9/26/18, 1:32 PM
ahh! cris this is amazing... i am so hoping there are some more race changes in the coming chapters :-)
9/25/18, 6:49 PM
Chapters 1 and 2 were posted as a single entry: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/272199 You should just be able to click "Prev Chapter" at either the top or bottom of Chapter 3 to go there.
nolanspice@gmail.com
9/25/18, 6:41 PM
I can't find Chapters 1 & 2...
9/24/18, 6:46 AM
Amazing work! I can't wait to see them change again!
9/24/18, 4:08 AM
AUTHOR'S NOTE: for everyone's enjoyment, please try not to post spoilers in the comments after each chapter. Hope you find the story to be a fun ride. Thanks!
Derek Williams
9/24/18, 1:16 AM
Nice, didn't figure we'd get another chapter with that tf - cool! Sent you an email tho, cuz I got a guess about spoilers.
Anonymous
9/24/18, 12:14 AM
very good plot, but cannot wait to see what the next chapter has to offer for the next tf
9/23/18, 8:06 PM
I appreciate the nice feedback. If I could ask a favor, please try not to post comments or speculation that might be regarded as spoilers, at least until the whole story has been posted. Thanks! CK
Anonymous
9/23/18, 6:56 PM
Very well written, funny and interesting! Great premise=magic drinks on your honeymoon!
9/23/18, 4:19 PM
A cliff hanger worthy of Victor Hugo! You've got such a vivid imagination! This is turning out to be a wonderful story - I'm not sure any sexual activity can counteract the narrative. Great going, and looking forward to more!
Thegreatstoryteller
9/23/18, 3:37 PM
ah! Always leaving us on a cliff hanger! brilliant job with this story though. love where its going
Anonymous
9/21/18, 12:44 AM
I love this, cannot wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
9/20/18, 1:46 AM
So glad you rebooted this series, its still my favorite. Keep it up!
9/19/18, 6:24 PM
Can't wait for the next part... but I will happily.
9/19/18, 1:24 PM
Just a reminder that every bottle of Mariposa causes a different change. Just because the first two bottles made the guys bigger doesn't mean the rest will. Who knows what's next? (Pssst: I do.)