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LongtimeFan
10/30/18, 4:55 AM
Another great chapter! The theory about Mike the Spike being all of the world's actors is great, and Blu's new personality is fun, too (I would love to meet an adorable little twink like that!). Love it all! And finally, the theatre nerd in me has to ask--was the "wouldn't it be awesome if it were true" a direct reference to "Cat on a Hot Tin Roof?" I love Tennessee Williams, so the line jumped out at me. :p
TheGreatStoryTeller
10/23/18, 5:59 AM
Love how Pierce was acting as their fairy godfather for this whole experience! That comment he made about being a minority and fitting in, resonated so hard with me. As a fellow gay/unique minority dude, it's easy to see the appeal. While it makes me wish I could try some mariposa, it also makes me appreciate me for being me. Thanks for writing such a great story.
Anonymous
10/23/18, 12:24 AM
Pierce is an arrogant POS and needs to be humbled.
LongtimeFan
10/22/18, 11:26 PM
Fantastic! Even though this was the "exposition" chapter, I love how you still made it into a character study of Pierce as well. You truly are one of the best writers on this site. :) And hooray for your mantra! I feel safer about Todd now. Can't wait to see what happens next...but take your time writing! Do what YOU like at your own pace. You'll always have at least one reader!
10/22/18, 10:26 PM
My motto as a writer: No Character Left Behind. I knew this was going to be a heavy exposition chapter -- it's basically a two-man one-act play -- but this seemed like a logical place to break it before the action of Day 3 really kicks in.
10/22/18, 8:56 PM
...and please don't forget Todd. :)
10/22/18, 6:37 PM
I love this story! This is kind of the "explanation" portion, but Pierce is such an amazing creation. He's endlessly fascinating - I just love reading about him. I look forward to the end of this story, but I strongly encourage you to keep Pierce in your arsenal in case he has other friends he wants to treat in a royal way.
10/20/18, 11:57 PM
I totally agree with "LongtimeFan." I love this series, but after this installment, my empathy totally went away with the hedonistic newlyweds and landed with poor Todd. He was dropped so suddenly that I hope that he's picked up again. Maybe he ends up with Pierce and the latter brings him out of his shell.
LongtimeFan
10/20/18, 5:48 PM
P.S. Out of everyone, I feel the worst for Todd...I hope he gets a happy conclusion in the story!
LongtimeFan
10/20/18, 5:46 PM
Ha ha, I knew it! I guessed that Pierce was using Mariposa to keep an eye on his friends. But I only figured it out because of your amazing writing, Cris, and how you scattered clues throughout the story. Fantastic stuff! Thank you for always producing such incredible stories. :)
Anonymous
10/20/18, 4:11 PM
whyyyy didn't Charles and Chico have sex, such a missed opportunity to drive the plot forward and include some real sex
Anonymous
10/20/18, 3:51 PM
beau w pierce? wow haha
Anonymous
10/20/18, 3:43 PM
This such a great series. I don't know many authors on this site that evoke such emotions; hating Pierce and Chico, and empath for Derek and Charles still trying maintain their monogamy even with their changes. My only problem is I feel blue balled from waiting for the next update. Please keep it up!
Anonymous
10/20/18, 9:53 AM
Plot Twists? In my local gayspiralstory? It's more likely than you think
10/18/18, 12:16 AM
Thanks for sharing that Daniel.  I'm glad the story connected with you! 🐻  Got more biker Bear stuff on my blog. 🐻
Daniel
10/17/18, 10:19 PM
Never would have thought a narrative that opened so dangerous, would turn out to be sweet enough to bring a tear to my eye...I dated a biker on the DL in the early 80S, One of the most challenging, rewarding relationships I' ve ever had....sometimes the flame can be too hot....I.J.S.
Mikelg
10/16/18, 10:37 AM
it's a lovely story, thanks :)
10/15/18, 1:50 PM
I'm so into this story a tear actually welled up in my eye when I read the portion where Charlie asks Todd the probing question. Maybe Charles can give Todd (I liked the name Iowa more :) ) a half-bottle of the Mariposa? :)
Anonymous
10/13/18, 6:05 PM
A dumb punk AND a dumb jock, both excellently written? Great and hot stuff, super excited to see where this is going!
bikerbro
10/13/18, 4:17 AM
I don't think I've read a hotter punk transformation than what Derek's going through - the dumbing down, loss of vocabulary, the accent, attitude, aesthetic...God, it's perfect. You got a gift, man.
10/12/18, 11:38 PM
Cris, you are doing an excellent job with the vivid characters, realistic dialogue and funny, often awkward and relatable situations. I can't wait to see where this story goes!
Anonymous
10/12/18, 9:35 PM
This story is making me really sad but also hot at the same time... it's conflicting. I hope things do end up working out for Chuck and Derek.
10/12/18, 3:55 PM
Wow this is moving toward an interesting conclusion. Please continue.
Anonymous
10/12/18, 3:34 PM
Slipping further into the headspace of a dumb punk...love it!
Anonymous
10/12/18, 1:30 PM
I'd love to see a mariposa story where one of the bottles turns the guy into someone with a phimosis foreskinned cock, a tight foreskin suddenly that they have to learn to navigate! Or conversely, an uncut guy becoming cut and needing to figure out the new sensations!
Thegreatstoryteller
10/12/18, 12:55 PM
i love how charlie is finding a sense of belonging! also i love the hamilton and dear evan hansen references :D hope todd can get his hands on some mariposa!
LongtimeFan
10/12/18, 11:55 AM
Another amazing installment! You have such a gift for characterization--I absolutely love Todd and Beau, because they feel like whole people. Your descriptive language, too, makes me see and even feel every scene. Thank you for such an incredible story! :)
Anonymous
10/7/18, 8:54 PM
I love the subtle humor in the writing: “You SURE things are totally okay between you and your ‘buddy’?” Derek shrugged off the damaged wall. “What, that? No, that’s…that’s nothing. He’s a…totally different person today.”
TheGreatStoryTeller
10/5/18, 6:47 AM
I have a feeling Pierce has been keeping an eye on these two for a while now ;) Also, I wish Chico got to have the drink he was looking for! I have high hopes for him