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joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/23/19, 4:18 PM
continue please, I hope to see a guy became a Muscular Power-Bottom
JockPupTraxxx
8/23/19, 12:11 PM
I think I'd like this club.
8/22/19, 3:16 PM
Lovely; could use a wrap-up chapter
8/22/19, 2:35 PM
This was quite imaginative, and you took the step of writing from Erica's perspective. Well done.
Anonymous
8/22/19, 6:09 AM
hot!
Martin
8/17/19, 7:24 AM
What a fun story! You have such a kinky weird fantasy and you describe it so vividly, it's really amazing. 5 for writing and idea!
Apr 4, 2017
8/14/19, 5:04 AM
Thank you all. I made the revisions to the story because I felt it lacked a certain level of detail and completeness. Thank you for reading!
Apr 4, 2017
Rex
8/14/19, 12:55 AM
hot as fuck
Anonymous
8/12/19, 11:10 AM
More please!
Mdlftr
2/3/19, 5:42 PM
I agree with "Longtimefan" that you really have a talent for stories about a character's journey of self-discovery. Instead of mind control, it's, more like mind enlightenment! Great series from a terrific writer. I loved the humor!
Dec 29, 2018
Mdlftr
2/3/19, 4:53 PM
Sweet transformation story. Their exteriors changed, but they were still the same people inside. Very inspiring - muscle growth without dumbing down, or becoming a bully. Good job! Thank you for writing this! Loved the Spiderman homage kiss at the end.
1/7/19, 6:07 PM
LongtimeFan: "And the fact that you offer these amazing stories to everyone just so we can enjoy them…it’s incredible." Guess I just don't believe people would bother to read them if they had to pay.
Apr 4, 2017
Cal
12/31/18, 10:08 PM
Beautiful story!! Very glad to find a papa werebear story I hadn't read before. Thank You, BT!!
Dec 29, 2018
12/31/18, 2:04 AM
Thanks for the kind words. Hoping all of your New Year's wishes come true. (That's not a thing.)
Dec 29, 2018
Cutlerfan
12/30/18, 11:38 PM
Loved this story. Very sweet and sexy!
Dec 29, 2018
Anonymous
12/30/18, 12:10 PM
cute story! love how the spider puns never disappear, even after their nickname change. they're still nerds, but now with muscles!
Dec 29, 2018
Anonymous
12/30/18, 10:02 AM
Excellent work
Dec 29, 2018
Aardvark
12/29/18, 10:52 PM
Great job on this Cris. A lovely story and still hot!
Dec 29, 2018
Anonymous
12/29/18, 10:32 PM
The description of Tobe warmed my dick, but the overall story warmed my heart. Thank you, Cris!
Dec 29, 2018
Anonymous
12/29/18, 9:56 PM
Such a sweet story.
Dec 29, 2018
12/29/18, 9:49 PM
Well, there's no tag for #supposedlystraighttogay. Bonus points if you realized Benjy was dressed as the Chris Pine version of Peter Parker.
Dec 29, 2018
Blindseer0
12/29/18, 9:33 PM
Great work. I liked the concept that these two were already platonic life partners, but they were using it as an excuse to stay the same and never improve. When they both finally decided they wanted to change, their relationship changed with them. They were still basically the same people from what i could tell, but instead of giving excuses they took control of their lives. I also liked the ambiguity of how much was magic and how much was just them. Its labeled straight to gay, so we can assume magic, but its still vague on off they were both gay all along. Also, as someone who just watched (and loved) Into the Spiderverse, i appreciated how much Spiderman was in this. Especially that kiss at the end. Keep up the good work.
Dec 29, 2018
Anonymous
12/29/18, 12:04 PM
Really liked this story. You're such a great writer.
Dec 29, 2018
Anonymous
12/29/18, 9:25 AM
very cute story ;)
12/21/18, 6:01 AM
Infinity War with more butt sex sounds pretty awesome. :-)
12/20/18, 4:19 PM
Reply to thegreatstoryteller: I've already been thinking about a crossover called "Mariposa Anniversary", which would involve bringing Derek and Blu and Todd and O back for the grand opening of Pierce's club, which at least some of the original "Six Pack" characters would coincidentally happen to attend. A couple of drawbacks to the idea, though: about half of those characters have already been permanently changed by Mariposa, making them immune to changes from additional doses, and most everyone ends up in a happy relationship at the end of these stories, so I might have to break some of them up just to create drama and new couplings. Plus, juggling that many characters would inevitably make it even longer and more complicated than "Mariposa Honeymoon". "It'll be like 'Infinity War', only with more butt sex!" I don't think I'll tackle that idea for a while. I feel like I need to write some shorter pieces first, since it seems like most readers are coming to this site for a "quick fix" (so to speak). I'm not sure how many people have bothered to wade through all 19 chapters of this story.
thegreatstoryteller
12/20/18, 8:10 AM
I wonder what it would be like for the group from the first Mariposa story to meet our newly happy couple and the college crew. I imagine despite their vastly different personalities, they'd get along well.
12/17/18, 1:59 AM
Thanks to everyone who stuck with the story over the three months it took to write and post!
Thegreatstoryteller
12/16/18, 3:30 PM
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Thegreatstoryteller
12/16/18, 3:29 PM
astounding! Another series of mariposa finished andn beautifully written. I really appreciate all the work you put in to these stories. Everthing from the first chinese gymnast bottle to Todd's new form was incredibly described. i imagine todd looks like this:[](https://www.pinterest.com/pin/371265563008984108/#details?amp_client_id=GUi7t8EwVRQqZeIqUleMolk6lnBkqnw2ynmqkV26mlP5FulFJtFQj9DAboRr_bTb&mweb_unauth_id=3869716a4d3f4679a3fcacaab9910961) anyway, i do wish that todd and his new form got more time at the end. woudlve loved to see him interact with the new permanent blu, and him look like the older of the two. but what we had was still satisfying. thank you!