Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/15/20, 2:03 PM
Really needs editing as sentences run on or stop abruptly with periods, commas and semi-colons mixed up. First paragraph makes no sense... There might be a great story in there but my brain hurt trying to get through the first lines and gave up.
7/6/20, 6:06 PM
Really cool world and story you cane up with, and great character motivations. It all came through very clearly. Great job!
Martin
7/6/20, 5:07 PM
I agree with the previous commenters. What a beautifully crafted and written story. Even the sex scene, as short it is, is written beautifully and full of romance and love. I really enjoyed reading your story and thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Pup Rex
7/6/20, 6:54 AM
love it!
Martin
7/1/20, 2:49 PM
Great written story. Not really my thing as a kink, but the twist at the end was really nice and hot, too. Spiders already wrote everything there's to say from an intellectual pov, better than I ever could!
7/1/20, 2:18 AM
Truly, unexpectedly beautiful writing. A little masterpiece.
6/30/20, 12:09 AM
I kinda love the super natural elements peppered throughout. would love to see how things happen next!
Eric Roesch
6/25/20, 10:24 PM
The story is great, and I really enjoyed the characterization.
Doug
6/25/20, 10:13 AM
I agree with Oxstorm
6/24/20, 9:43 PM
That was awesome I hope it continues