Recent Comments

10/3/20, 7:42 AM
well I can't wait to see where this goes
10/3/20, 7:36 AM
Most of what you read before is gone for now. I've been working on recreating the original storyline that I butchered in an attempt to make it fit in under the 10k word limit. This is only the first chapter of many that are on the way as soon as I get them finished. I have bits and pieces of future chapters that are already written, and I just need to get all the pieces necessary for the next chapter in line completed. I'm currently working on completing my entry for the pandemic challenge, but I'll get back to this story once it's published.
10/3/20, 6:20 AM
well that was interesting tho i really hope Cozbi gets caught or something in the end
Oct 2, 2020
DD
10/3/20, 4:16 AM
This is a great first piece of writing, and English isn't your first tongue? Well done :) Hope to see more.
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
10/3/20, 1:36 AM
Your English is better than mine, if there were any mistakes I was too turned on to notice them, excellent story. Looking forward to more from you.
Oct 2, 2020
10/2/20, 9:16 PM
awesome story
10/2/20, 7:58 PM
was rereading and i'm pretty sure a good chunk of the story is now missing
10/2/20, 7:13 PM
Congrats for finishing this! Now I can't wait for more of Casey and Rock!
Oct 2, 2020
10/2/20, 6:51 PM
I really liked this one! Good job for your first story
10/2/20, 12:40 PM
love it, great job, hoping for more
10/2/20, 12:22 PM
Really enjoyed this. Makes me wish there was a brotherhood like this one.
10/1/20, 5:16 AM
Interesting story I can't wait to see if theres a 2nd part
9/30/20, 5:22 PM
I want to know the same as Bobby. I kind of want them not to be working with each other but it's just an unexpected thing from Travis's perspective that he just went with.
9/28/20, 6:09 PM
More, please. Really enjoying watching Ian's descent into total submission ... and conversion.
9/27/20, 4:22 PM
ughhh its so good. I kind of hope you're a dom top and i can send you fotos you can blackmail me with. Please sir.
9/27/20, 3:25 PM
i cant get enough! This is so good and i need more!
9/27/20, 1:01 PM
arghhh... Are Travis and the master working together? This story drive me mad with anticipation!!!! So goooood!!!
9/25/20, 8:45 PM
I'm excited to read more of this! Your stories are very well-written. Can I ask if you have any inspirations for the stories you've written?
9/25/20, 7:14 PM
I've wondered if Travis is oblivious to how Andy is benefiting from Travis's subliminal messages. Another hot chapter!
9/25/20, 7:32 AM
I wonder what is Travis's goal for Ian and if Andy isn't in the way. The cooking Ian made for Travis is making my mind go wild over the possibilities...
9/25/20, 5:41 AM
I'm loving it! Cant wait to see whats next!!
9/24/20, 5:36 PM
Looking forward to the next chapter, in which Ian ... ... ends it with his girlfriend ... takes up smoking ... gets his head shaved ... moves in with Master Andy ... realizes he no longer needs/wants his "white noise" ... embraces his identity and destiny
9/24/20, 10:58 AM
fucking love it. Exactly what i'm looking for
9/24/20, 5:59 AM
A good start to an interesting story. One technical note: It's a bit odd the story is written in present tense, considering it's written like a diary which I think is a great way to present the transformation. Since he'd be writing these entries after the fact, I think past tense would fit better.
9/24/20, 1:52 AM
Awesome first chapter! I look forward to what happens next.
9/24/20, 1:27 AM
Your writing is impeccable as always! I'm gonna follow this story now like I do with Casey's Dog Life.
9/24/20, 12:18 AM
wow...thank you. that story is very very hot to me...I enjoyed it thoroughly
9/23/20, 8:01 PM
Super excited to see what develops from here, and thought this chapter was really well-written!
9/23/20, 6:34 PM
Please tell me there's more. I'd love to learn more about the white noise machine, Travis, and see how Andy trains Ian.
9/23/20, 6:31 PM
chapter 2 please. that was a great set up