Recent Comments

10/25/20, 7:45 AM
you better keep writing, you have a real gift, i cant wait to see where your mind goes next
10/24/20, 4:55 PM
wow, you really write well and pace the story and the delivery of the facts beautifully. one of the best written and conceptualized stories I've read anywhere. i found myself wanting to be Slave Ian throughout the storyline. and you really turned me on mentally and physically, my dick was throbbing and i couldnt leave it alone while i was reading! i hope you plan on writing a lot more, i did read your other story listed here too, also very good.. you may be my new favorite!
10/18/20, 1:07 PM
I'm not sure if im confusing this with another story, but it seems this one has been edited since it was published and is missing most of the story i read the first time
10/12/20, 12:44 AM
Please continue this as a series.....what becomes of the brotherhood? Who is this mysterious entity at the end? Why are they in opposition?
Apr 4, 2017
10/11/20, 3:56 PM
This remains one of my favourite stories. Very compassionate and touching. Especially for anyone whose lost a loved one. Wonderful work
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
10/11/20, 11:34 AM
Or was Jason calling Matthew "Jessica" a momentary slip from his old life, while still adjusting to his new love life forever with Matthew. It would be interesting to see you continue this story to where they head back and Jason's former girlfriend Jessica is perplexed to see he has left her for Matthew.
Oct 2, 2020
Anonymous
10/11/20, 11:25 AM
Love the story, you write beautifully and speak English better than some people whose native tongue is English. I have one question though at the end right here" > I whined in protest, but I already felt him wiggling out from under me. Suddenly I was cold. I looked up at him as he was putting on his clothes. > “Jessica.” he started. “Uhm… They’re. They’re probably worried sick by now. We have to go back.” When Jason calls Matthew "Jessica", is that a typo and you meant to write "Matthew" and not the name of Jason's former GF, or did Matthew switch bodies with Jessica and become her in body and mind and so he's now Jessica, or is Matthew still Matthew but in Jason's mind he's Jessica? If you could clear that up for me that would be great. Keep on writing man.
10/11/20, 3:53 AM
I'm really excited to read this when it continues!
10/5/20, 5:35 AM
Great story right to the end! Very hot and very fun!
10/4/20, 1:30 PM
My favorite story so far.