Recent Comments

1/17/21, 6:24 AM
Great beginning! I look forward to more of this story.
1/17/21, 3:08 AM
A truly beautiful piece of writing and a great story. Very nice shifting of the perspectives between the wolf and the hunter that sets up the relationship between the two. I don't think there will be mind control in the story; it's more about the bond between the hunter and the wolf-man. I'll be looking forward to the next parts of this fairy tale.
1/17/21, 2:20 AM
Well written and interesting. I'm curious to see how this goes. There's some spelling errors, but still a good read. Definitely looking forward to the next segment! (For example, "waste" is filth. You meant "waist" as about the hips on a body)
1/17/21, 2:16 AM
this is delightful to read, can't wait for the next parts!
1/16/21, 10:41 PM
Excelente...
1/16/21, 6:56 PM
I really love the style of writing. Waiting for the MC part.
1/14/21, 12:29 PM
@valestrian, neemie and Dace: thank you so much! @Buster Red: well, don't keep me waiting in suspense - what did you think of the rest of it? @gayeplfan: you win 10 Internet Points for making probably the most unexpected connection to a Broadway show in GSS history.
1/14/21, 4:27 AM
I can't help but think of the scene from "Annie Hall" in which Alvy Singer is in bed, post-coital, with a woman (Carole Kane, I think) who says, in a totally deadpan voice, "Making love with you is a Kafkaesque experience. I mean that as a compliment."
1/13/21, 4:02 AM
I've yet to get a second to tuck into this, but can i just say "wow if the description didn't entice the hell out of me"!!!
1/12/21, 7:14 PM
Oh, *delightful*, well done Noam!
1/12/21, 1:30 PM
Clever, clever, clever...not just the writing, which is on par as usual, but the way you've deftly sidestepped bugsex. This is, very likely, the cheeriest Kafka spoof in existence. Awesome stuff.
1/12/21, 8:02 AM
Totally bizarre but exquisitely written. You've struck a really fun balance of context/storytelling/smut, which, given the prompt, is no easy needle to thread! You've quickly become one of my favorite authors here. The Metamorphosis but make it sexy indeed!
Dec 24, 2020
1/11/21, 11:29 PM
Very cute!
1/6/21, 10:51 PM
Very unike! Congrats to You! J.J.Z.
1/6/21, 2:14 PM
Thanks so much for all your kind words! I'm glad you folks like this one and are having as much fun reading as I did writing! Your feedback really encourages me to keep writing! I honestly was just as surprised when Griffin decided he was going to seek out and fuck the Kraken xD in my first draft.
Dec 31, 2020
1/6/21, 1:42 PM
Awww, I loved Noel's unerring confidence and kind demeanor in this story, and the very hot results of that. It's a very sweet and wholesome sexy story, through and through.
Dec 31, 2020
1/6/21, 1:36 PM
I loved getting a peek into all these different multiverses and I became really invested in seeing who would wind up together! It made me think of a short story called "Happy Endings". Really well-written!
1/6/21, 1:31 PM
I love the character dynamics you set up so quickly and deftly in each scene. You could feel their reputations in the school coming through in the crowd's reactions. I also loved the way you used enemy-to-lovers here -- it felt way better than actual revenge would have and they make a very sweet couple. Incredibly well-written and super hot!
FantasyWithKinks
1/6/21, 4:54 AM
*"Let's talk consent and boundaries"* the kraken says... I don't think I've ever laughed so hard at porn as I have at this.
1/5/21, 6:08 PM
Wonderful! The reality shifts were great!
1/5/21, 3:15 PM
Weird, original and wonderful. And the thought of Jörmungandr - oh gods.
1/5/21, 2:34 PM
This is brilliant and I love it.
1/5/21, 2:22 PM
I think you've outdone yourself with this one. The whole way through reading it I was theorising about how things would end up, but you still managed to both surprise me and keep that feel-good tone that I just can't get enough of. I still can't help but hope that Griffin's parents hold the key to some obscure immortality for pairs in true love - but that's the hopeless romantic in me... Anyway, this is a truly inspiring creative work (and any story that has a kraken come out of left field is just... *chef's kiss*).
1/5/21, 1:13 PM
There are some stories on this site that go way beyond fap material, and this is without question one of them. (While still being excellent fap material, let's be clear.) The writing is just magical. The way you describe that little tea shop in the beginning is beautiful, the way Coiirei catches feelings for Griffin is so sweet and tender, and the way you describe their relationship evolving is so, so, so well done. There's so much to appreciate here, from the way you describe the 'energy' that Coirrei gets from having sex to the blisteringly hot first time they hook up to the little pet names they come up with for each other as the years go by. I'm rambling, but this deserves to be rambled over. Excellent, excellent work, Time!
Anonymous
1/5/21, 5:00 AM
Very sweet in its own way. I quite enjoyed it!
1/5/21, 4:32 AM
Such a unique combination of the supernatural and romance! Enjoyed this story.
1/5/21, 12:31 AM
An extremely hot, well-written story!
1/4/21, 1:04 PM
NOAM, you champ! This turned out better than I could ever have hoped. Everything about this - from the use of awareness and obliviousness, to the solo/duo time stop sections, to the poor beleaguered Mr. Barton... it all comes together into a delicious, sexy cocktail. Who ever said wishes didn't get you anywhere? Champagne work. Will be returning to this in the future, mate!
1/4/21, 12:57 PM
Loved this subtle evolution of bully-to-lover and the mechanic of the timestop for making the changes. Gave me a bit of blue balls at how close we kept getting to a climax, for that matter! Well done!
1/4/21, 12:23 PM
wow so jot.