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4/7/21, 11:34 PM
Fun, but I felt bad for Jake at the end.

4/8/21, 12:21 AM
Trust me, Jake is very much a long term part of this story! @Derek Williams

4/8/21, 2:50 AM
@Freckleman64 Awesome! Looking forward to reading more :)
4/8/21, 1:38 AM
Awesome first chapter! I'm happy to hear that Jake will remain part of this story.
4/6/21, 7:13 AM
more chapters like this so hot!
4/5/21, 1:46 PM
Thank you for your comment. Yes, there's been a lot of plot to cover, but now that it's all explained, and the Pharaoh has returned more powerful than ever, we are back to the fun of the slow breaking of the will. Thank you for your suggestions too.
4/5/21, 1:38 PM
I'd stopped reading this series, just because the plot got a little too convoluted for me. But the description for this chapter caught my attention, and I'm glad I read it, because I was turned on by the President's relatively slow conversion and the way he was seduced by the promise to "Make Egypt Great Again" (so to speak). I hope that in subsequent chapters we get more detailed imagery of the men taking off their normal street clothes to don the Egyptian loincloths, because I think that's a really hot detail.
3/31/21, 4:33 PM
My kinda story, Dude, even though I'm not into feet. Helped my wank.
Martin
3/21/21, 1:49 PM
Lovely break of the 4th wall! So rare and this one is really good!

3/31/21, 4:00 AM
@Martin Glad you enjoyed this (and thanks for the ability to hide my name and reply). I originally came up with this idea three years ago as a response to certain stories and tropes they use. This contest was just the motivation i needed and i wrote it in about three days right before the deadline, so thanks for that as well. It was originally going to focus more on Spider-Man himself, but Deadpool has a way of taking over. When he did it was natural to have 4th wall breaks, and I'm happy they worked for you. Honestly they (and the font styling) were the things i was most worried about, so hearing you compliment that puts my heart at ease.
3/31/21, 3:04 AM
I'll take much more of this any day!
3/26/21, 5:38 PM
Jon deserves to be punished for this transgression. Maybe be Theo's servant for a week and call him sir when they are alone in the room.
Anonymous
3/24/21, 4:51 PM
its from his tumblr "slutty naughty jock". he has been reposting the stories from there.