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4/10/21, 3:30 PM
Super hot!
4/10/21, 1:44 PM
Loving this story! Very hot.
4/10/21, 12:12 PM
Great chapter! Came three times while reading the chapters. You're a natural...write more!
Anonymous
4/10/21, 5:41 AM
This is amazing! So so so hot! Please write more as soon as you can!!
4/10/21, 4:45 AM
You got me leaking on that one! I could actually visualize the teacher's cock pounding Willem's ass. Great writing, keep going!
4/10/21, 4:32 AM
One down, 99 to go! Can't wait, gotta read more! Very creative writing skills are apparent; keep up the great work with a lot more chapters!
4/10/21, 2:05 AM
Another great chapter. Keep it up!
4/10/21, 12:21 AM
I love it
4/9/21, 2:14 PM
What a fascinating story. I love the peek into how the typical "straight bro" mind works, and the loneliness/alienation that comes from "Whir, blur, thank you sir" is perfectly captured. Great work!
4/9/21, 1:34 PM
This was just great. Super hot. I too felt bad for Jake, but am hoping he comes out on top in the end : ) Thanks... LLOYD
Anonymous
4/9/21, 12:51 PM
This was hot! He should go home and run into his dad....
4/9/21, 12:25 PM
incredible. really hot story so far.
4/9/21, 10:25 AM
This series is really fucking hot. Please keep it up.
Anonymous
4/9/21, 4:17 AM
This was so hot!! I'm looking forward to the next one.
4/9/21, 4:13 AM
Keep em coming!
Anonymous
4/9/21, 12:52 AM
oh im so excited! it's a classic setup, but i can clearly see your own voice/special spin on it so none of it feels stale. plus all the character voices are really distinctive and fun, and in addition to being really hot the moments of comedy definitely had me giggling. this is exactly up my street, and i'll be waiting with baited breath for more!!!
4/9/21, 12:05 AM
This was fantastic! Loving this
4/8/21, 8:46 PM
Really fun story, and well done! Super interested to see where you take it next.
4/8/21, 4:00 PM
Heres to another 99 chapters! ;)
4/7/21, 11:34 PM
Fun, but I felt bad for Jake at the end.

4/8/21, 12:21 AM
Trust me, Jake is very much a long term part of this story! @Derek Williams

4/8/21, 2:50 AM
@Freckleman64 Awesome! Looking forward to reading more :)
4/8/21, 1:38 AM
Awesome first chapter! I'm happy to hear that Jake will remain part of this story.
4/6/21, 7:13 AM
more chapters like this so hot!
4/5/21, 1:46 PM
Thank you for your comment. Yes, there's been a lot of plot to cover, but now that it's all explained, and the Pharaoh has returned more powerful than ever, we are back to the fun of the slow breaking of the will. Thank you for your suggestions too.
4/5/21, 1:38 PM
I'd stopped reading this series, just because the plot got a little too convoluted for me. But the description for this chapter caught my attention, and I'm glad I read it, because I was turned on by the President's relatively slow conversion and the way he was seduced by the promise to "Make Egypt Great Again" (so to speak). I hope that in subsequent chapters we get more detailed imagery of the men taking off their normal street clothes to don the Egyptian loincloths, because I think that's a really hot detail.
3/31/21, 4:33 PM
My kinda story, Dude, even though I'm not into feet. Helped my wank.
Martin
3/21/21, 1:49 PM
Lovely break of the 4th wall! So rare and this one is really good!

3/31/21, 4:00 AM
@Martin Glad you enjoyed this (and thanks for the ability to hide my name and reply). I originally came up with this idea three years ago as a response to certain stories and tropes they use. This contest was just the motivation i needed and i wrote it in about three days right before the deadline, so thanks for that as well. It was originally going to focus more on Spider-Man himself, but Deadpool has a way of taking over. When he did it was natural to have 4th wall breaks, and I'm happy they worked for you. Honestly they (and the font styling) were the things i was most worried about, so hearing you compliment that puts my heart at ease.
3/31/21, 3:04 AM
I'll take much more of this any day!
3/26/21, 5:38 PM
Jon deserves to be punished for this transgression. Maybe be Theo's servant for a week and call him sir when they are alone in the room.
Anonymous
3/24/21, 4:51 PM
its from his tumblr "slutty naughty jock". he has been reposting the stories from there.
3/24/21, 3:47 PM
The typos were a little distracting, and some of the descriptors used felt a little lazy and awkward, but the story was really fun and compelling nonetheless. I definitely came hard. I can't wait to read more, and hit me up if you need an editor, okay?