Recent Comments

Geo
4/16/21, 6:24 PM
I hate to over think a fun sexy story, but I hate when a lighthearted sexy story turns into a story where someone is blackmailed into outing themselves or forcibly outed. It just makes me not like the characters doing that, which is too bad for this story cause I kind of dug Jake and Willem up to this point. I can't help but hope the direction swerves with a twist that they don't end up doing that. Also ditto to Taylor about hoping he doesn't lose his muscles. I feel like way too many stories lean too far into sissification/twinkification.

4/17/21, 6:23 AM
@Geo Yay, someone who agrees haha. I mean, don't get me wrong some of those stories are hot and all but...I'm a gay guy that is into men, and a lot of them end up making them extremely feminine with such small dicks that they refer to them as clits, which is just...unfortunate. Granted, I don't really like the whole dick shrinkage thing to start with because the bigger a dick is the better imo, so. And I would normally agree with you about the blackmail thing, but in a case for someone like him...I'm ok with it. He is in a position of power and could help pass laws or encourage sentiment that could get people hurt, or killed, and from the way he treated Willem during their encounter, I feel as if he would eventually end up hurting, killing, or causing the death of someone with his actions, because I mean seriously he suggesting PNPing to an 18 year old that had never done anything harder then weed and alcohol, that...is dangerous. I do however worry that, based on how they had sex, that if they do release the video that he'll claim it was rape...because he was being ridden by Willem and not actively fucking him. Speaking of weed, I find it interesting that it hasn't been mentioned any about Willem smoking anymore since the foursome with his former friends.
4/17/21, 6:13 AM
Another great chapter! The last image in particular--of glass globes of memories shattering--is striking. Plus I love that Willem's character development is going at a reasonable pace: he maintains some of his homophobia and ignorance, and it gets better slowly, not all at once. Maybe true love will break the curse, and Willem will have to face his changed fate!
4/17/21, 4:31 AM
I love your writing style with its blend of sex and humor. It reminds me of Derek Williams'. Very hot chapter!
Anonymous
4/17/21, 12:58 AM
who would have thought we had so many republican or "trumplican" readers on this site? this is a very integral part of the story with Willem becoming something more than he was last chapter...aka more gay! thats the point of this story and this site. just because he wrote about a very real problem inside the republican party, it shouldn't take away from the rapid continuation of Willem's conversion in this story.
Anonymous
4/16/21, 7:05 AM
Attacking political parties I thought wasn't allowed. I think people forget how homophobic Democrats are. They only pander to gays when it suits them. Please don't post inflammatory political stuff.

Martin
4/16/21, 8:41 AM
@Anon: Just because the character is described as a "homophobic republican", the story doesn't imply that all republicans would be homophobic or that non-republicans couldn't be homophobic. I don't see the issue here.

Anonymous
4/16/21, 8:48 AM
lmao, trying to police other people's self-expression ain't a good look sis! Whatever happened to free speech? Also, the story didn't mention democrats even once?

4/16/21, 6:46 PM
Both parties are trash but only one actively tries to strip the rights and freedoms of our fellow LGBTQ+. Don't be daft

Anonymous
4/16/21, 7:12 PM
@ I don't see how it's an "attack" when Hicks is a fictional character and appears to be a composite of a number of Republican politicians who've expressed the exact same view points.

4/16/21, 10:10 PM
@ why should it mention another political party? Not everything has to be artificially bipartisan like the evening news. If the plot demands the takedown of a homophobic politician and you want some local realism, there's really only so many options.
4/16/21, 10:09 PM
This was fantastic, well done. Great pacing, good character work, and a hot scene. looking forward to more!
Anonymous
4/16/21, 12:35 PM
I agree that this doesn't seem to attack Republicans. If anything, it's just an overused and unoriginal stereotype of one of the American political parties.
4/16/21, 3:15 AM
Fuck, this is hot. I hoped that the trio of friends would come up again after their introduction in the first chapter and I'm excited to see our accursed bottom's development! Great job, and looking forward to more!
4/15/21, 9:05 AM
Like the other commenter said, an instant classic. Each chapter has been insanely hot & you've done a great job at balancing mind-bendingly erotic sex with plenty of personality in the writing style to make it feel unique and memorable. I know you've gotten feedback for changes in the comments, but honestly I'd say stick to your guns & stay true to your initial vision, what you've done so far has been fantastic & I can't wait to see how it pans out. My only sadness is it will be 10 chapters not 100!
KKA
4/14/21, 8:44 PM
feels like an instant classic, loving your development of these characters. looking forward to more, this curse will be a marathon for Willem AND you!