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5/9/21, 5:36 AM
This ended up so sweet! Great tempo from set-up to conclusion! The sex was wild and the love tender. I would love to see a bunch of vignettes of the couple traveling the world at different eras.

5/10/21, 3:46 PM
@CyberSatyr Thank you so much. I put a lot of effort into getting the pacing just right (and of course making the sex hot) so it's always great to have that acknowledged. I didn't actually have the ending planned out before I started writing, so I was kind of surprised myself. Afterwards, I *was* actually thinking that if I came up with more ideas, these two would be fun to have adventures with, kind of like a snake-y version of The Old Guard.
5/10/21, 2:50 AM
My heart x_X I'm glad that Willem got his old dick size back, even if the cost was his bubble butt haha, but just...god I need the next chapter asap, I need the resolution to this. Also, hopefully you'll let us know what happens to poor Jeffery, because I feel like he'd have a lot more trouble with having to bottom 1,000 times, and what that could do to his brain.
5/9/21, 11:47 PM
Goodness, the Karens in the comment section over politics. Go over to Bdsmlr and you'll be caterwauling and protesting all over their blogs themed with red versus blue gay porn. Seriously, this chapter had nothing to do with political brainwashing, so what's the deal?! I know, because I'm into that kind of smut and I've read most of the "political" tagged stories on this website (I'm horny for hypnothrill and Ethan White) I enjoyed this chapter. I'm on a wave of locked up horniness and have no idea when it can be relieved. When I'm truly desperate, i don't mind being called gay pejoratives or given female pronouns; so this chapter really got me in a submissive headspace needing to be used like Willem, by someone I vehemently disagree with their political ideology.
4/16/21, 9:10 AM
Oh, I like the ending of this chapter. I'm curious as to how Will is going to react when he realizes that he's no longer completely straight, assuming he has any attraction to girls left after all of this. I've been reading some of the comments on other chapters, and I'm going to be the contrarian here, I hope that Will gets his original body and dick back when the curse breaks (which I hope it does break), maybe a bit improved with it being more toned, him keeping the bubble butt, and him having like, a shorter refractory period. Or even better, he ends up becoming more muscular then he was before and with a bigger dick, but he still vastly prefers bottoming, but would top occasionally. I personally feel like there's way to many stories where guys end up reduced to extremely slim, stupid to borderline brain dead, slutty bottom twinks. But that's just my personal feelings, and I'm sure that whatever direction you take this story in will be good.

5/9/21, 10:52 PM
@TaylorGuy Your comment about not being totally straight by the end reminds me of the story on the mind control website. https://mcstories.com/ChipOffTheOldBlock/index.html I enjoy stories where there happens to be a significant change of heart in the central figure in a story, especially one for the better of their humanity.
Anonymous
5/9/21, 5:29 AM
This is an awesome story - perfectly blending erotica with romance. I'm sorry to see it leading up to a conclusion, even if it's a happy one (I'm a bit of a sadist in that I think Willem should have gotten a much stiffer dose of humiliation before the curse ended).
5/9/21, 3:27 AM
Glad to see you back at work on this series; looking forward to reading more of it.
5/8/21, 6:58 AM
i really love it, its so well written but it makes me feel very alone

5/8/21, 10:48 PM
@Cdawg Loneliness was definitely something I was channeling when writing this series. But I am also a relentless optimist and hopeless romantic, so hopefully the conclusion leaves you feeling uplifted! <3
5/8/21, 12:51 PM
Hurray!! I spat out a mouthful of water I'd just drank when I saw this was posted. So excited to read this next installment!

5/8/21, 8:32 PM
@Rock Creek Werewolf Awww! I'm glad to give you a little treat today! Enjoy!
5/8/21, 7:35 PM
Loving this series about as much as Tim loves getting railed by Aed. Can't wait for the next chapter!
5/8/21, 1:41 PM
Always happy for another Dace story! This was a very hot scene.
5/7/21, 3:06 PM
Nice! I enjoyed the retro feel, you really captured that. It was also really romantic. Thanks!

5/8/21, 3:11 AM
@Uncle Arctos Thanks! Trying to adopt a style like that can be challenging so I'm very happy you think it worked.
5/7/21, 10:59 PM
Really enjoyed this - vivid storytelling with a fantastic balance between eroticism and romance. Well done.

5/8/21, 3:11 AM
@HunkLover Thanks! appreciate it.
Nimbus
5/8/21, 12:05 AM
i just found this. Is that you? come through to me.
5/7/21, 11:32 PM
Major kudos to the beta readers that helped edit and polish this into its final form!
5/7/21, 2:46 PM
Very nicely done! I especially appreciated the whimsy of your line, "after a raid using their wits and athleticism, as well as some well-placed bribes, a grappling hook, and a reliably rowdy camel. To say nothing of the sex, which, hot :D

5/7/21, 5:36 PM
@Noam de Pluma. Thank you! I was trying to catch a little bit of that fun pulp feel before the intense stuff started. The camel ended up being more significant than originally planned, ha!
5/6/21, 11:47 AM
Crying. Absolutely CRYING. When I tell you my heart leaped when I saw this post...and it was worth it. The contrast between the two sex scenes was amazing: the final time between Willem and Jake made me understand why it's called *making love.* And the confession scene between the two...it hurts. Willem's actions admittedly raise my hackles a bit ("If you really loved me"--terrifying line, that), but overall this has been an amazing story that's left me unsure of what conclusion I want. Could Willem be happy being gay? Is it wrong for him to "turn gay" because of a curse? I am so eager to see what happens. Thank you for this gift. :)

5/6/21, 1:09 PM
@Feed Your Head my heart fluttered too. this is such a great story from the beginning. I never come to this site for the plot, but this one tugs at my heart a bit.

5/7/21, 12:18 AM
@Feed Your Head I feel like there's definitely something cathartic in Willem's admission that he doesn't want to be gay. I think especially for bottoms, there can be a lot of shame and self loathing involved because they do want some normal things in life, but their desires make those things harder. However, unlike most gay guys, Willem might actually get to make a choice. And if he doesn't it will be entirely relatable. We'll have to see.

5/7/21, 3:49 AM
@randomcreativename It's definitely a powerful moment, especially because it shows the truly strange dichotomy among our people. To have wild, unprotected anal sex with total strangers? That we accept. But to love someone of the same sex? To kiss them and romance them? No, THAT's gay. I can't understand that...I mean, I get it logically, but I don't UNDERSTAND it. Also, I'm curious as to what you mean by bottoms "wanting some normal things in life." Bottoming is totally normal! I don't like to conflate "typical" with "normal," if that makes sense...
5/7/21, 1:45 AM
Oh my stars, *Dace*, this ticks so many of my boxes I can't even. I love the unique characterization you gave to all the wolves, the aborted sex scene was blisteringly hot while it lasted, the emotional connection between Tim and Aed resonates... ugh, this is amazing work.
5/7/21, 1:21 AM
Ooh, I *like*. Not sure why it took so long for me to read this, but I'm sure as hell glad I got to it at last!
5/7/21, 12:48 AM
LOVE this story! I look forward to how you conclude it and hope for the best for Jake and Willem.
Max
5/7/21, 12:14 AM
I love stories that have some love between the protagonists; especially with the whole arc of Willem's self growth. I personally love happy endings, but please continue the great work with the finale.
5/6/21, 6:52 PM
Hot, heart-wrenching... amazing. Amazing work. Bring it all home next chapter! (Also: I expect some resolution to the B-plot of Willem's new wardrobe that's designed for a giant bubble butt. Don't think we've forgotten *that* bit of storyline :P )

5/6/21, 6:58 PM
@Noam de Pluma personally, I think Jake has the final say in the curse...fingers crossed, after all its because of him Willem got cursed to begin with
5/6/21, 2:41 PM
loving the story hope to read mire real soon. keep the seed spreading !
5/6/21, 10:02 AM
Truly a nice change of pace to have a romantically centred story. I love this one! Can't wait to read the finale.
Evan
5/6/21, 6:50 AM
I love this series but it hits me hard in the feels. Poor Jake. Heartbreaking. Cautiously optimistic for the last chapter.

5/6/21, 7:19 AM
@Evan
Cen
5/6/21, 7:07 AM
Daamnn, so invested in this story. If this was like a book trilogy, I'd read the shit out of it.

5/6/21, 7:18 AM
@Cen some of these stories would make a great tv series or movie...this story reminds me a lot of queer as folk with a curse instead of chance.
Hopelessgay
5/6/21, 7:05 AM
Jesus, can't believe I'm reading this for the romance. Very well paced
5/6/21, 5:45 AM
so good!!
5/4/21, 12:06 PM
Love the smoldering, almost fairy-tale-esque storytelling, the play of desire and denial, the beautifully rounded characters, the burgeoning world-building. Amazing work, my dude.
5/4/21, 6:46 AM
I liked this chapter a lot, although I wish we could have seen more of the father recruiting Hazim.
5/3/21, 12:06 AM
wow this is just so hot, and so much fun! i really cant wait till the next chapter!