I loved this story. Throughout my writing one thing I have always struggled with is crafting that balance of real, human emotion, character development, and filthy sex. I admire you so much for doing something that I have been striving towards. I'm partially jealous, but also inspired to push myself further in my own writing. I think one key strength of your writing is your ability to show, rather than tell. An example being Willem's parents' reaction towards him - you never once say "Mom is like this towards Willem, Dad is like this.", but just through their dialogue you understand their personalities and relationships. I hope you continue writing, and I would love to chat more about the "craft" if you'd be willing. I feel like I could learn a lot from you. -SC (Also the fact that you wrote 11 chapters in 1 month is just mind-boggling to me, I don't know how you do it!)

this was such a great story and I loved reading it

They certainly can. There already are many who have joined our ranks all over the world. We are taking over the rest of Egypt to make it our base of operations. Then we will spread around the rest of the unconquered worldwide.

Excellent story, one of my faves on here now. Thanks for the fun ride!

Bravo! this ending was pretty damned perfect and read like the ending to a series...everyone got what they wanted and a new set of the curse leads to a possible sequel. I'm so glad Jake and Willem are happy...I would have liked to see Willem parents reaction, but I think we already know the foreshadowing seeing as how it was 2 months, his mom already suspected from a previous chapter and there was no nervousness from the conversation about meeting them. Bravo darling, well done!

Such a great ending to such an enjoyable story! Theres a strong emotional core to your writing (ahh, the heartache at the beginning of this chapter) along with a really excellent playfulness. I really enjoyed this series!

❤🧡💛💚💙💜🤎💓💞💟

Finally the end is here and it's a happy ending thank goodness! I have been so stressed about how this might end that I've actually dreamed about it twice. I'm so glad that Jake's and Willem's love won in the end, and that Willem got his ass from the curse back! I'll admit I had been hoping the ending would be a little more romantic and mushy, something that could make me cry but the lack of anything more than tearing up on my part could be because it's 3 something in the morning and I just woke up less than half an hour ago from a weird dream, and checked to see if this was posted on a whim when I checked the time, and then I had to lay here with my heart pounding in my chest in a mix of anxiety and excitement for a minute before reading because I was nervous and scared this could have a bad ending to it. I do wish we could have seen when Willem introduced Jake to his parents, but I am glad that poor Jeffery was somewhat spared from his curse, even if it seems that he still has a little bit of work to go in regards to his personality (Then again, a bit of a whininess can be cute in some people) and it would have been nice to have seen Willem and Jeffery recognize each other and spoke but that's just me I guess. I also love the fact that Willem's asshole friends look like their going to finally get their comeuppance, and it gives me hope that he may gain them back as friends at some point, because it was honestly sad that he lost his one friend who had been his best friend since childhood. I'll be honest I'm still not sure how I feel about Bussy, because they seemed petty sometimes, and selfish and uncaring sometimes as well, but they also obviously have some kindness and mercy in them seeing as how they helped Willem realize he truly loved Jake regardless of his sexuality, and they showed mercy to Jeffery and ended his curse early (Which raises the question of why they didn't help Willem skip having to sleep with his uncle, unless they didn't have the knowledge of how to at the time) But yes this was truly worth the ride, and honestly if you were to ever write an actual book or e-book and sell it, I most definitely would buy it...well, as long as it's gay that is haha.

What a cute and satisfying end! I agree with previous comments who said this read like a screenplay almost, the romance of the final chapter felt very cinematic, in the best way! You've warmed my heart & my dick with this series, a real treat from beginning to end

This is brilliant. You have a talent for really weaving the emotional journey of these characters and putting the tension in their lives on display. Seriously, great work, and thank you *so fucking much* for sharing it with us!