I was tricked into catching feels and sobbing while trying to jerk off. This is truly a fantastic piece of work. Would have paid to read it.

That was beautiful. I can't wait to see more of your work. You won a very loyal fan. I will read everything you write from now on!

I'd been reading this series every step of the way, and I love it! thank you for creating it and sharing it with us!

where is the rating for tears ive cried geez this is amazing writing though 💖

An excellent ending to a fantastic series. I lost count of how many times I jerked off to stories in this series. Hot as hell and very well written. Thank you.

This has been a great read - really love the story. Great character development with sexy erotica. I don't suppose we have any chance of a sequel following Josh and the twins handling the curse with Willem and Jake in supporting roles. I could definitely see some seriously sexy shenanigans with a trio of bottoms!

I typically prefer stories with unhappy and twisted endings haha, but it's rare to find a story on this site that satisfies more than just the itch for smut. I genuinely feel like I just finished a good, thoughtful mini series or something. I would love to see what you might write if you held a bit more sadism for your characters...

Aside from the sex this has all read like a quality YA novel. I don't read the stories here for the romance normally but your balance between romance, eroticism and plot is deftly weaved. I'll definitely be rereading my favorite chapters.

This was a good, hot story and very well written. I hope to see more from you down the road.

I'm truly honored and thankful that we have this story on GaySpiralStories. This is most certainly one of the best series this site has ever been allowed to publish. Thank you for that. Your writing is amazing, one can tell that you're a professional writer, and I'm humbled by your skill and way with words. Also how you can evoke emotions in the reader. I wish I could do that! Parts of your story reminded me of a VN I've recently discovered which has made my cry multiple times. It has almost no smut, but so much struggle and romance that it's really heart breaking. I can only recommend it to anyone who loved this series. And it's also free. It's also very long, you need about 10 hours at least for one playthrough. I rarely do any promotion but in this case I'd like to make an exception: [Aaryn Reese's "Straight!?" on itch.io](https://aarynreese.itch.io/straight)

Thank you for this series and for finishing it. I have been very emotionally invested in these characters and I'm thrilled at the sweet, romantic ending. I also like the lack of fanfare in the ending. they are together and living their lives. What a perfect end for them after such a journey.

This story was amazing, and the ending certainly did not disappoint. You're an incredibly talented writer; thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

Oh. My. God. AMAZING. I've been checking the site every day (multiple times, even!) for this finale...and it did NOT disappoint. Everything about it was gorgeous, but most of all the note Jake wrote and the coffee shop scene. I also loved Bussy's scene with Willem--it showed the heart under her magic (and chicken cutlets!); Willem's mother's lines, too, were perfect: the hinting at "It's OK if you're gay" was spot on. You also tied together every other thread beautifully (the politician's destroyed campaign, Jeffrey's curse, etc.). I also want to applaud you for diving into the thorny issue of love, sex, and the blurred line between them; Willem's identity, sexual orientation, and physical attraction are complicated topics, but you dove into that complicated issue with grace and open-mindedness. Most of all, though, this story speaks to a larger narrative in the gay male community--the loneliness we face. Your description of the emptiness was so spot on...it put into words how I've felt about someone for a long time. It can never be enough, but all I can say is...thank you. You have a true gift.

i like humiliation and twilight zone-esque curses and twists of fate, but at heart i'm a sentimental fool who needs a little romance and loves a happy ending. on a similar note, i had some struggles with internalized homophobia when i was first figuring out my sexuality, so i really like those stories where (via transformation or mc shit) someone hits rock bottom, is forced to come to grips with themselves, and walks away from the experience wiser. and with a lotta the stories on this site (understandably so, this isn't a dig) you don't usually get to enjoy all of those elements. but wow, this fucking DELIVERED!!! the sex was hot, the physical transformations were great and the mental ones had a wonderful gradual build up, and the writing was absolutely fantastic. the characters felt real with genuine depth, and i found myself seriously invested in their relationship (would it have made sense to flash forward to these two being like. happy and in love at their wedding in 4 years? no. did i still kinda want it? ...yeah). there were emotional highs and lows that really hit home in each chapter and the story as a whole had plenty of twists and turns before, ultimately, resolving itself in a very satisfying way. i'm glad i checked this site every night like a madman to keep myself updated, this brought me a lot of joy. very very excited to see what you come up with next :)

I doubt you will even read this, the ending was amazing but i do wish there was an epilogue of just Willem and Jake and to see them flourishing in there love. I too was wanting the vivid imagery you portray to be that of there life after Willem discovered his true love. I will always love this story but the moment in the coffee shop where Willem told Jake he'd try and wanted to try to be his everything was my favorite part

I loved this story. Throughout my writing one thing I have always struggled with is crafting that balance of real, human emotion, character development, and filthy sex. I admire you so much for doing something that I have been striving towards. I'm partially jealous, but also inspired to push myself further in my own writing. I think one key strength of your writing is your ability to show, rather than tell. An example being Willem's parents' reaction towards him - you never once say "Mom is like this towards Willem, Dad is like this.", but just through their dialogue you understand their personalities and relationships. I hope you continue writing, and I would love to chat more about the "craft" if you'd be willing. I feel like I could learn a lot from you. -SC (Also the fact that you wrote 11 chapters in 1 month is just mind-boggling to me, I don't know how you do it!)

this was such a great story and I loved reading it

They certainly can. There already are many who have joined our ranks all over the world. We are taking over the rest of Egypt to make it our base of operations. Then we will spread around the rest of the unconquered worldwide.

Excellent story, one of my faves on here now. Thanks for the fun ride!

Bravo! this ending was pretty damned perfect and read like the ending to a series...everyone got what they wanted and a new set of the curse leads to a possible sequel. I'm so glad Jake and Willem are happy...I would have liked to see Willem parents reaction, but I think we already know the foreshadowing seeing as how it was 2 months, his mom already suspected from a previous chapter and there was no nervousness from the conversation about meeting them. Bravo darling, well done!

Such a great ending to such an enjoyable story! Theres a strong emotional core to your writing (ahh, the heartache at the beginning of this chapter) along with a really excellent playfulness. I really enjoyed this series!

❤🧡💛💚💙💜🤎💓💞💟

Finally the end is here and it's a happy ending thank goodness! I have been so stressed about how this might end that I've actually dreamed about it twice. I'm so glad that Jake's and Willem's love won in the end, and that Willem got his ass from the curse back! I'll admit I had been hoping the ending would be a little more romantic and mushy, something that could make me cry but the lack of anything more than tearing up on my part could be because it's 3 something in the morning and I just woke up less than half an hour ago from a weird dream, and checked to see if this was posted on a whim when I checked the time, and then I had to lay here with my heart pounding in my chest in a mix of anxiety and excitement for a minute before reading because I was nervous and scared this could have a bad ending to it. I do wish we could have seen when Willem introduced Jake to his parents, but I am glad that poor Jeffery was somewhat spared from his curse, even if it seems that he still has a little bit of work to go in regards to his personality (Then again, a bit of a whininess can be cute in some people) and it would have been nice to have seen Willem and Jeffery recognize each other and spoke but that's just me I guess. I also love the fact that Willem's asshole friends look like their going to finally get their comeuppance, and it gives me hope that he may gain them back as friends at some point, because it was honestly sad that he lost his one friend who had been his best friend since childhood. I'll be honest I'm still not sure how I feel about Bussy, because they seemed petty sometimes, and selfish and uncaring sometimes as well, but they also obviously have some kindness and mercy in them seeing as how they helped Willem realize he truly loved Jake regardless of his sexuality, and they showed mercy to Jeffery and ended his curse early (Which raises the question of why they didn't help Willem skip having to sleep with his uncle, unless they didn't have the knowledge of how to at the time) But yes this was truly worth the ride, and honestly if you were to ever write an actual book or e-book and sell it, I most definitely would buy it...well, as long as it's gay that is haha.

What a cute and satisfying end! I agree with previous comments who said this read like a screenplay almost, the romance of the final chapter felt very cinematic, in the best way! You've warmed my heart & my dick with this series, a real treat from beginning to end

This is brilliant. You have a talent for really weaving the emotional journey of these characters and putting the tension in their lives on display. Seriously, great work, and thank you *so fucking much* for sharing it with us!

I'll echo the screenplay comments. Reads like a movieand a good one! This was such an enjoyable series, you're a fantastic writer. Thanks so much!

this is a nice reprieve from the other stories with a focus more on the protagonists personal growth over time. This story things me of another story "Chip Off the Old Block" on mcstories. i truly hope this has a happy ending, but i guess i can settle for something bittersweet.

Thank you for following. Very soon all of Egypt will once again be under the Pharaoh's command!

i always love seeing more of this story :D

This ended up so sweet! Great tempo from set-up to conclusion! The sex was wild and the love tender. I would love to see a bunch of vignettes of the couple traveling the world at different eras.