Recent Comments

Jonanator
6/11/21, 12:05 AM
Nice story. Hope there is more to come.

6/15/21, 4:22 AM
@Jonanator Thank you! and yes already started on the second part!
6/14/21, 5:56 PM
Hey y'all, hope you liked the story! I wanted to reach a firm conclusion, as I see too many stories on here whose overarching stories get snarled up in episodic formats until the author gets bored and never finishes. Hopefully this was a satisfying conclusion, I'm a sucker for a happy ending. :)
6/13/21, 2:18 PM
Hey, I think the story is good, but the formatting really through me off. It kind of looks like things got screwy maybe when it was copied and pasted. It was tough to read. If you can switch the bullets and dashes for quotations, it would all the difference.

6/13/21, 2:31 PM
@The Influencer Thanks for the heads up, let me see what I can do.
6/13/21, 6:03 AM
Again, LOVE this series. Please post the rest! Also, saw the new chapters on the other site. Love it!

6/13/21, 6:56 AM
@Frapsity Thanks! I will be posting new chapters regularly, until I catch up with McStories, then I will follow the same pattern of posting.
6/13/21, 1:05 AM
Hit me up if you want someone to take an editing pass at the next chapter
6/11/21, 11:51 PM
Grammer could use some clean up, but otherwise you did pretty great! The story is almost entirely erotic. I like the fantasy are massive muscular men being hypnotized by smaller guys! I Hope you write more.
Martin
6/11/21, 9:32 PM
Yes, please let us know how this goes on... how both the boys succumb to their master...
Martin
6/11/21, 9:21 PM
Very promising... I'm really looking forward to read more of this!
6/11/21, 1:29 PM
As much as I like pure smut, this does scratch that itch in me for more of a narrative to make the smut that much more enjoyable! More so, I am obligated to add some applause to the attention to "Master's" cock and the cock trance idea, cock trance is underrated, thanks so much for havin' it!!! can't wait for more!
6/11/21, 12:16 AM
I loved this first chapter and your setup, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it next!