Recent Comments

7/18/21, 3:28 PM
Wow. Great story. Like Nutiper and others, I loved the dynamic between the two friends and loved that the POV character is the straight one. I’m excited to read more and see how they screw things up :)

7/19/21, 1:29 AM
Thanks! The friendship and fun rivalry is definitely the heart of my idea for this story. @MonsterMash62
7/18/21, 1:27 PM
L:over the story so far. I missed a lot of the reality altering stories and this one seems to have a lot of layers going on. Can't wait to read more.

7/19/21, 1:25 AM
Thanks! Reality altering stories are some of my favorites! @Cadek
Anonymous
7/18/21, 10:12 AM
great work...really enjoyed!!

7/19/21, 1:25 AM
Thanks! @
7/18/21, 7:33 AM
Great work on this story. Hope we don't have long to wait to find out what happens next!

7/19/21, 1:24 AM
Thanks! The next chapter is already coming together. @Ruffcub
7/18/21, 4:37 AM
Love this idea, can't wait to see more.

7/19/21, 1:23 AM
Glad you like the idea! I'm hard at work on the next chapter. @Drake Nightstorm
7/18/21, 4:03 AM
This is fun. Looking forward to seeing how Marc's newly magic dick impacts reality!

7/19/21, 1:22 AM
Nice catch! I definitely have some plans for how Sam's poor choice of words affects the story. @Derek Williams
Ng5
7/18/21, 2:07 AM
I am enjoying this a lot more than I thought I was going to. The dynamic between the two is comedic and relatable, and I really want to know what happens to them next. I did cringe at first when they started writing in a textbook seemingly without prompt (mostly from IRL experiences with textbook rentals and the need to keep them in top condition to avoid fees), but now I wonder what will happen when there is no more writing room left...

7/19/21, 1:21 AM
Glad you're enjoying it! Since the textbook was already heavily marked up when the main characters got it, I figured they wouldn't be too worried about adding their own graffiti. @Ng5
7/18/21, 12:59 AM
I hope to see more

7/19/21, 1:20 AM
I'm hard at work on the next chapter! @darkblade2814
Nutiper
7/18/21, 12:38 AM
I always enjoy that the trope of a reality-altering book, and the premise of it being restricted to a textbook is *great* — but, even more than a fun premise, this is just such a fun *story*, and a fantastic interpretation of the trope. I love the character dynamic between Sam and Gabe, and I think that making the story's main character straight (while his roommate and best friend is gay, and everything around him gets gayer and gayer) is a great idea. Sets up a really fun tension where *we* know how a story with a straight protagonist will end, if it's a GSS story I mean... even if Sam is convinced that he's hetero for life! I'm definitely looking forward to future chapters of Sam and Gabe's escapades.

7/19/21, 1:20 AM
Definitely planning on playing around with what "straight" means when the main characters can edit reality. @Nutiper
IvorySilk
7/13/21, 8:11 PM
Great start! Looking forwards to seeing more! I'm especially curious about how this memory altering technology will factor into the story. :3

7/18/21, 9:29 PM
@IvorySilk 💖