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7/23/21, 6:27 PM
Firstly, seriously, love this story. So very cool. Sam going over the book and seeing older changes is brilliant. I was honestly thinking about that so it was cool that it was added. I think a fun little element could be the two going over it and together changing or fixing any of those elements that they see as not super fun. (Another option is they could add a line at the start of the book that things that were crossed out dissapear, in order to clean up the book, that could be interesting.) The self-lubricating sexy bubble butts is super hot. How it appeared is also super cool. I do kind of wish we got to see Kevin getting fucked into mindless bliss, but obviously with Sam as the pov character it didn't happen. Speaking of that, I am not super a fan of the whole us not knowing what Gabe wrote. Like I get why you did that but I liked seeing things get written at the time and so us not seeing that feels like an editing let down. Its the one thing so far that I was a little less than super happy about. That said this was a super hot chapter. This is an amazing story and I look forward to reading more of it. Also, I feel jealous towards Nutiper and MonsterMash62 for them helping contribute. hehe Seriously though, super sexy story. Really love the antics going on. I also like the slow and steady change of what it means to be straight and stuff. Oh, and the whole thing of him remembering how he did not have the bubble butt before while also remembering he did was a nice description.

7/24/21, 3:11 PM
Glad you're enjoying it so far! @Heru Kane
7/24/21, 7:14 AM
This series just gets better and better. The Sam's obliviousness to the change was really hot and made the pay off when he realised what was up with his bubble butt even better. I also love the fact we don't get to see what Gabe wrote. Since the story's written from Sam's perspective the idea of him being taught a lesson but not knowing what's going to happen is super hot. I'm looking forward to finding out if he can figure out what's changed!
7/24/21, 12:21 AM
This story is truly exciting so far, very fresh takes, and a bit of a slow burn, but still extremely sexy. I hope that when Sam is truly remade into some kind of hypersexualized iteration of himself, that you spend a few chapters with some extended sex scenes and antics. The slow build up is very sexy, but the narrative focus with Sam keeps us from getting exciting scenes like Kevin getting pounded out by Gabe. Once that flips I'm hoping you can add more sexual content to compliment the excellent writing and concept.

7/24/21, 12:32 AM
Thanks! There are enough small changes that have built up to a critical mass at this point. Expect more action in future chapters! @brium
7/23/21, 11:53 PM
also, if you're taking requests, would love to see some exploration of straight men have big sensitive nipples and pecs. Tease. ;)

7/24/21, 12:17 AM
Glad you like the story! I'm not taking requests as such, but obviously people are free to share ideas! I have some nipple play in one of my other stories, [Pan-Galactic Human Fan Club] @gotacoolname
7/23/21, 11:21 PM
absolutely amazing. Most exciting story on this site in a long time! The editing of this straight guy is brilliant.
Anonymous
7/23/21, 8:21 PM
Everything about this chapter is unbelievably hot. Very excited to see what the most recent changes are. Keep up the great work!
7/23/21, 6:39 PM
well, let see how things change by tomorrow
7/23/21, 3:53 AM
so sexy. I love strippers!
7/22/21, 5:30 PM
So while I don't at all agree on making teachers students I do think making older teachers Dilfs and younger ones sexy and all intelligent and good focused teachers could be fun. Like maybe while the two want to have sex they also want a good education and so they boost that. But yeah sexy teachers could be great! As an aside the two twinky boys would be fun to see again. Maybe in sexy positions. Honestly, I love this story.

7/22/21, 6:25 PM
@Heru Kane I agree with that, I also suggested making one of the coaches fall in love with one of the teachers of the art departament

7/22/21, 6:48 PM
@darkblade2814 The idea of having a jock-ish coach fall in love with an art department teacher sounds awesome. A little bit of teacher romance to showcase things changing. But even more the whole physical focused person (coach) dating a mental focused person (art teacher) is one of those things I super enjoy in fiction. The pairing is great. So yeah, this would be cool.

7/22/21, 7:21 PM
@Heru Kane thanks, when I made the suggestion on the first chapter, I also said I wanted the coach to be the sub bottom of the relationship

7/22/21, 7:50 PM
@darkblade2814 Oh I'm all for that. Subby bottom coach/jock and dom top nerd/artist is great. He could be a big dude and the art prpfessor smaller but its him who is in charge. This does get a little off track though it is totally fun.

Nutiper
7/22/21, 9:32 PM
@Heru @darkblade This sounds like it could be a fun offshoot series that you guys could write together! Do either of you write or collaborate? It's not really my kink, but I feel like, if the two of you wrote that story that you're brainstorming together, it'd be fun to read! I'm pretty excited to see how @blue will continue this story — I really like his particular style and approach (and his kinks! haha) so I'm excited to see what he comes up with. Plus there's still that unresolved and mysterious antagonist who showed up hunting for the textbook... and the question of Marc's magic dick, and how that will play into things... *and* the brick joke where Sam just *keeps* making changes without thinking through their consequences... and the way that the definition of "straight" keeps slipping more and more toward fairly homo behavior... There are already a lot of plates spinning, and personally I wouldn't want all those elements to get dropped in pursuit of stuff that's not even in the story, and isn't what this story is about... I want to read @blue's version! But there's definitely no reason you couldn't write the offshoot together, it could be fun...

7/22/21, 9:44 PM
@Nutiper that begun with me telling a suggestion I made on the first chapter and things escalated, I want to see how things go