Recent Comments

7/24/21, 12:21 AM
This story is truly exciting so far, very fresh takes, and a bit of a slow burn, but still extremely sexy. I hope that when Sam is truly remade into some kind of hypersexualized iteration of himself, that you spend a few chapters with some extended sex scenes and antics. The slow build up is very sexy, but the narrative focus with Sam keeps us from getting exciting scenes like Kevin getting pounded out by Gabe. Once that flips I'm hoping you can add more sexual content to compliment the excellent writing and concept.

7/24/21, 12:32 AM
Thanks! There are enough small changes that have built up to a critical mass at this point. Expect more action in future chapters! @brium
7/23/21, 11:53 PM
also, if you're taking requests, would love to see some exploration of straight men have big sensitive nipples and pecs. Tease. ;)

7/24/21, 12:17 AM
Glad you like the story! I'm not taking requests as such, but obviously people are free to share ideas! I have some nipple play in one of my other stories, [Pan-Galactic Human Fan Club] @gotacoolname
7/23/21, 11:21 PM
absolutely amazing. Most exciting story on this site in a long time! The editing of this straight guy is brilliant.
Anonymous
7/23/21, 8:21 PM
Everything about this chapter is unbelievably hot. Very excited to see what the most recent changes are. Keep up the great work!
7/23/21, 6:39 PM
well, let see how things change by tomorrow
7/23/21, 3:53 AM
so sexy. I love strippers!
7/22/21, 5:30 PM
So while I don't at all agree on making teachers students I do think making older teachers Dilfs and younger ones sexy and all intelligent and good focused teachers could be fun. Like maybe while the two want to have sex they also want a good education and so they boost that. But yeah sexy teachers could be great! As an aside the two twinky boys would be fun to see again. Maybe in sexy positions. Honestly, I love this story.

7/22/21, 6:25 PM
@Heru Kane I agree with that, I also suggested making one of the coaches fall in love with one of the teachers of the art departament

7/22/21, 6:48 PM
@darkblade2814 The idea of having a jock-ish coach fall in love with an art department teacher sounds awesome. A little bit of teacher romance to showcase things changing. But even more the whole physical focused person (coach) dating a mental focused person (art teacher) is one of those things I super enjoy in fiction. The pairing is great. So yeah, this would be cool.

7/22/21, 7:21 PM
@Heru Kane thanks, when I made the suggestion on the first chapter, I also said I wanted the coach to be the sub bottom of the relationship

7/22/21, 7:50 PM
@darkblade2814 Oh I'm all for that. Subby bottom coach/jock and dom top nerd/artist is great. He could be a big dude and the art prpfessor smaller but its him who is in charge. This does get a little off track though it is totally fun.

Nutiper
7/22/21, 9:32 PM
@Heru @darkblade This sounds like it could be a fun offshoot series that you guys could write together! Do either of you write or collaborate? It's not really my kink, but I feel like, if the two of you wrote that story that you're brainstorming together, it'd be fun to read! I'm pretty excited to see how @blue will continue this story — I really like his particular style and approach (and his kinks! haha) so I'm excited to see what he comes up with. Plus there's still that unresolved and mysterious antagonist who showed up hunting for the textbook... and the question of Marc's magic dick, and how that will play into things... *and* the brick joke where Sam just *keeps* making changes without thinking through their consequences... and the way that the definition of "straight" keeps slipping more and more toward fairly homo behavior... There are already a lot of plates spinning, and personally I wouldn't want all those elements to get dropped in pursuit of stuff that's not even in the story, and isn't what this story is about... I want to read @blue's version! But there's definitely no reason you couldn't write the offshoot together, it could be fun...

7/22/21, 9:44 PM
@Nutiper that begun with me telling a suggestion I made on the first chapter and things escalated, I want to see how things go
7/22/21, 7:38 PM
Some fun ideas! I don't know how practical it would be to fit all of them into *this* particular story, since it's written in the 1st person and pretty much all of the main characters Sam interacts with have already been established. There might be some stuff going on in the background of scenes that are focused on Sam and Gabe -- there are definitely lots of newly-hung DILFs (and other gay guys) that exist on campus even if they aren't at the center of this story's action.
7/21/21, 8:00 PM
Fun, neat story! Solid entry to the contest :)
7/21/21, 6:51 PM
Lets change the faculty a bit as well