Loving how this story developed so far, and can't wait for the next chapter.

I always enjoy your writing, Dace! Thanks for sharing this very hot story.

Well, this series continues to be a delight. Keep it coming!

This is incredibly sweet - and I love the historical setting too! Well done!

I LOVED IT!!! The text is short but your writing felt amazing to read, loved the pace and the details here and there, really refreshing. Thank you lots <3

Very impressed with this series! Actually re-read through it for the listed wishes and I've been seriously impressed with the through line of the story (not to mention the off the charts smut scenes). The dumb jock unintentionally orchestrating their own fall is always a delicious scenario and I have a weakness for reality change/transformation/magic themes. Since it's been a minute since the last update (no judging, that stint of an update every 3 days with quality as good as you guys put out was nuts) I brain stormed a bit myself. It seems that an upcoming scene is the art classroom with Sam modeling. I think it would be fun to have him model with another person. Maybe Mark ;) (maybe too soon for your time line but just saying lol). And since sex acts are common place in the locker rooms now, maybe the 'pose' the art teacher tells them to assume is the everyday-yawn-worthy event of Sam giving his 'buddy' and apology bro-job. Since they're in the gym they should naturally be in only their jocks. Maybe the whole time Marc is whispering is his gravely voice for Sam to take slow deep breaths with his nose pressed against his jock pouch, on all fours, arched back showing off his straight boy ass (to entice all the sexy ladies drawing him of course). Things are mostly under control until a student complains that they can't properly see the details of Marc's Adonis belt with his jock and so the teacher asks them to fully strip "For the Art!". Another student asks if Sam can get more into the act and actually take Marc into his mouth. Cue magic-dick-induced-throat-gasms with Marc ordering Sam to slowly go deeper and "show me how straight you are" and finally how all the best straight bros swallow every drop so their buds don't need to clean up after. Right before Marc cums a water break is called (possibly with the teacher commenting how she doesn't wants Sam to get dehydrated from all his slick). Sam comes back to him self and with another crisis of personality, he summons the textbook and makes a change making it so his new urges are totally straight bro (Dealer's choice), then resume for the climax. Again, just some quick scribbles, but it's yours to use if you guys haven't plotted out that far yet.

you should write a book

Thanks to all the readers who gave feedback on how Gabe seemed to be acting out of character in this chapter. I just submitted an edited version that more clearly represents the dynamic between Gabe and Sam. Hope you like it!

Lucky Sam. Keep him small and slutty while everyone else gets BIG .

Oh man, this series... I echo some of the above comments about Gabe coming off as a bit of a jerk more than a dumb bro, though that's a minor quibble. The important thing is, can I tell you how excited and satisfied I was to see Sam finally get in on some sex? Because I was! My only wish is that Gabe gets to enjoy blowjobs again, because for my personal taste, reading how much he wasn't loving it kind of kicked me out of how much Sam was loving it. The way I interpreted Sam's edit, he was just going to love giving blowjobs more than any gay guy would love receiving them, not that the gay guy would actually enjoy them less. Regardless, I love how you worked in the previous edit in the book about throatgasms, too - very nice continuity. Overall you do such a great job of living in Sam's head and unspooling this story; it's just a joy to witness. Please keep the chapters coming!