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Apr 4, 2017
8/14/21, 2:14 AM
This story is really something. At times I wasn't sure where it was going and I certainly was unprepared for where it ended up but the characters and storytelling were genuine - Both Roger and the narrator have faults but importantly they have redeeming qualities and that's what really hooks me as a reader.

8/15/21, 4:25 AM
@amul I really wanted this to be a story about a man who is sincerely trying to make the young man better, and to join with his lost love in the best possible way. Not a death of personality, but an enhancement though joining. It really should go over to the new Cupid site, I think. Most of my stuff probably belongs there.

Martin
8/15/21, 6:08 AM
@Papa Werebear You can simply use the edit function to publish any of your stories on Cupid. Just select it as an addition publishing site!
8/14/21, 2:34 AM
You're a gifted writer. The personality merging that you write about in your stories has a completely different tone from everyone else's mind control stories. I hope you write more stories that explore this theme.

8/15/21, 4:28 AM
@amul It's how I like to write merging. Mutualism rather than parasitism.
8/14/21, 3:25 PM
Please give these boys a happy ending.

8/15/21, 1:21 AM
We'll see @amul! :)
8/14/21, 11:08 AM
Wow! What a chapter! Your skill in characterization extends to the other people in the story, I see (I love Eric's passive-aggressive commentary). Plus the sex scene in the car was achingly hot. I love the hints of magic and mystery in the tale, too. 10/10 all around! :)

8/15/21, 1:20 AM
Thank you so much! @Feed Your Head
Aug 12, 2021
8/14/21, 11:33 PM
Wish I was the guy rimming. hehe Honestly, good stuff!
8/13/21, 5:55 AM
Thanks for all of the comments guys! They're all greatly appreciated. I'll be uploading Part 3 tonight!
8/12/21, 10:50 AM
This is the sweetest, cutest thing!
8/11/21, 7:50 PM
All the previous comments are dead on. Can't wait to see where you take the story.
8/11/21, 12:33 PM
Came for the smut, staying for the story!
8/11/21, 10:47 AM
I totally agree with Amul! You're amazing at telling the story and getting me invested!
8/11/21, 3:31 AM
OK, first off: the sex scene was top quality. Top quality. That was some seriously good smut. As for the story that's developing and the characterization of Ronny, who is by turns a sexbeast but then regretful and vulnerable, and Fin who is putting up a good struggle against the transformations - well all I can say is that it leaves me wanting to know what will happen next. Not just wanting you to crank out some more smut, but I actually care about your characters now. So that's just awesome. Good job.
8/10/21, 10:56 PM
This story is great! I love the muscle growth transformation, and the sex scene is ACHINGLY hot, but it's the humanity in the characters--especially in their post-coital talk--that makes the tale truly special. There are so many stories of cocky "alphas" (a term I hate) having their way with guys and showing no emotion beyond dominance and cruelty. You clearly distinguish between the lusty Ronnie and Fin and their true selves. Fantastic work!
8/10/21, 9:55 PM
Really looking forward to part 2.
8/10/21, 9:43 PM
Great follow up, I really enjoyed the uncontrollable lust they both experiment while at it, followed by the more tender afterglow. Ronny is quite intriguing now!
8/10/21, 5:35 PM
Enjoyed this chapter, including its surprise ending!

8/10/21, 5:48 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! The next chapter is almost finished, and I'm looking forward to sharing Julian with you all :3!
8/10/21, 10:53 AM
Such a great series
8/10/21, 10:32 AM
Excellent beginning! You're a fantastic writer.
8/10/21, 7:04 AM
just great really, can't wait to read more
8/10/21, 6:17 AM
Thank you everyone for the kind comments! Definitely encouraged me to keep going. I'm writing part 2 right now and have some ideas as to where the story is headed. And don't worry, Ricardo and Eric will be included in parts to come!
Anonymous
8/10/21, 2:50 AM
Hope we see more of Ricardo and Eric in the follow up!
8/9/21, 11:44 PM
Please continue this!
8/9/21, 9:41 PM
Great story! Length was just right, everything built to the climax -- which was a big one! Please give us more of this world.
8/9/21, 12:59 PM
This just keeps getting better! I love how you write Jared and Matt together, such a sexy and sweet sub/dom relationship. Would love to get a glimpse of their friendship as well (e.g. how they bonded initially) but mostly looking forward to watching Luke turn >:)
Ohiobuck47
8/9/21, 11:28 AM
I echo Grant Spiral's comments. Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/9/21, 11:21 AM
This was excellent, particularly for a first story. Impressive. I enjoyed your characters and the mind-control aspect was well-handled with a good slow build-up.
8/9/21, 10:02 AM
Great first story! Can't wait to see where this is going :) welcome to the club ;)
Jonanator
8/9/21, 7:03 AM
Hottt. hope more is to come for Matt and Jared. Keep it up.
8/9/21, 6:50 AM
Congrats! You’ve written a splendid first story!!! If I had to nitpick then there’s like one or two grammatical things that could be better, but the flow and character development is great!!! Good job :)
Jonanator
8/8/21, 7:50 PM
Nice story. hope there is more to come.
8/6/21, 2:53 AM
Loving how this story developed so far, and can't wait for the next chapter.

8/6/21, 3:51 AM
Thanks! New chapter should be out soonish. @Dreamweavr