Recent Comments

Martin
8/16/21, 8:38 PM
Honestly, the way you write, you don't need no kink. This scene was amazingly hot. I'm really honored to have you aboard! Please share more of these stories from a "less kinky phase"!

8/17/21, 12:25 AM
@Martin :3 you're too kind! I've got some stuff in mind for GCS but I just need to get through some life stuff first!
Martin
8/16/21, 8:24 PM
All right, now we have some drama... Let's see where this is heading. Please go on!

Jonanator
8/16/21, 10:50 PM
@Martin thanks for the comment. I was actually just going to do star on the next chapter. I'm glad you like it. I think the direction I take this in might branch off to a sequel story, if it turn out good, so, more is on the horizon.
Martin
8/16/21, 8:21 PM
It's a difficult topic, a love story with a self-loathing homophobic closet case... But I like what you did so far. Let's see where this is going! I hope it'll have a goog ending... :)
Anonymous
8/16/21, 6:43 AM
Very hot, the way you do dialogue is a bit confusing though

8/16/21, 2:22 PM
I ha messed up the spacing, it should be fixed now. Sorry about that.
8/16/21, 9:42 AM
What may also happened is that Ronny, realizing Fin was his Beta, did whatever he could to get Finn to accept it. If his inner drives were so pumped I can see his own self-justification. He may not have wanted to be without a Beta. I would hope that as they mature in their relationship that they will become more loving and less sex-focused. Ronny said that they're both just two guys. I hope he can realize that he didn't really give Fin a choice and apologize. I think Fin would forgive him soon enough.
Jonanator
8/16/21, 6:09 AM
Hot. Can;t wait for more.
8/16/21, 1:14 AM
I'm glad they bonded but I'm not happy about Fin being Ronny's "bitch". Semantics I suppose but also he was drugged by the pre-workout drink so he had no choice to really decide. Yes, he could have left when Ronny explained about how Betas have choice but by that point he was addicted.

8/16/21, 4:12 AM
@Cutlerfan I'm glad you feel this way! I wanted to leave the outcome up to the reader's interpretation. Some may think it was true love while others may think Ronny was more devious than he let on.
8/15/21, 11:13 PM
I specifically requested a happy ending. A happy ending was had. You cannot beat this level of customer service.

8/16/21, 12:38 AM
Lol what can I say? I'm a giver @amul

8/16/21, 1:15 AM
@Beaux_a I'm just kidding of course, the story was going to go where you the author needed it to go but I just sensed (and hoped) that your delightful characters would find happiness together.
8/15/21, 12:38 PM
so hot, thank you!

8/15/21, 10:11 PM
@hairyartist I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!
8/15/21, 5:35 PM
I really liked this series. Do you have any plans for continuing this setting with other characters?

8/15/21, 10:11 PM
@Madoc Larkin Potentially! I haven't really decided what I want to do next, but I'm thinking of trying something else out, then returning back to this at some point.
8/15/21, 2:23 PM
What a wonderful ending. I like the mix of science and magic that explains the situation, and said explanation hits a sweet spot in terms of detail (not overly explained as to bog the story down, but also not so vague that it leaves a bunch of questions). It is hard to believe this is only your first story! You did a fantastic job. :)

8/15/21, 10:09 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words @Feed Your Head! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
8/15/21, 2:11 PM
Very excited to read more of how this turns out. Also curious to see what this "magic cock" we have been teased about does

8/15/21, 5:50 PM
Thanks! Marc's magic cock definitely makes an appearance next chapter. @ace_vage
8/13/21, 2:19 AM
Desperately waiting for the next chapter! Such a good read!

8/15/21, 5:49 PM
Thanks! Some real life stuff came up, but the next chapter is getting there! @italianstalian1987
Aug 12, 2021
Martin
8/15/21, 11:37 AM
What a wondeful story! It's a grace to this new site, thank you very much for posting it. The rimming scene is one of the most intense I've ever read! Once "GayCollarStories" will be up (should be a matter of two or three weeks from now), please make sure to crosspost this story there, too. It's rare that I have read such a sweet sub/dom story, and it will fit perfectly there as well.
Apr 4, 2017
8/14/21, 2:14 AM
This story is really something. At times I wasn't sure where it was going and I certainly was unprepared for where it ended up but the characters and storytelling were genuine - Both Roger and the narrator have faults but importantly they have redeeming qualities and that's what really hooks me as a reader.

8/15/21, 4:25 AM
@amul I really wanted this to be a story about a man who is sincerely trying to make the young man better, and to join with his lost love in the best possible way. Not a death of personality, but an enhancement though joining. It really should go over to the new Cupid site, I think. Most of my stuff probably belongs there.

Martin
8/15/21, 6:08 AM
@Papa Werebear You can simply use the edit function to publish any of your stories on Cupid. Just select it as an addition publishing site!
8/14/21, 2:34 AM
You're a gifted writer. The personality merging that you write about in your stories has a completely different tone from everyone else's mind control stories. I hope you write more stories that explore this theme.

8/15/21, 4:28 AM
@amul It's how I like to write merging. Mutualism rather than parasitism.
8/14/21, 3:25 PM
Please give these boys a happy ending.

8/15/21, 1:21 AM
We'll see @amul! :)
8/14/21, 11:08 AM
Wow! What a chapter! Your skill in characterization extends to the other people in the story, I see (I love Eric's passive-aggressive commentary). Plus the sex scene in the car was achingly hot. I love the hints of magic and mystery in the tale, too. 10/10 all around! :)

8/15/21, 1:20 AM
Thank you so much! @Feed Your Head
Aug 12, 2021
8/14/21, 11:33 PM
Wish I was the guy rimming. hehe Honestly, good stuff!
8/13/21, 5:55 AM
Thanks for all of the comments guys! They're all greatly appreciated. I'll be uploading Part 3 tonight!
8/12/21, 10:50 AM
This is the sweetest, cutest thing!
8/11/21, 7:50 PM
All the previous comments are dead on. Can't wait to see where you take the story.
8/11/21, 12:33 PM
Came for the smut, staying for the story!
8/11/21, 10:47 AM
I totally agree with Amul! You're amazing at telling the story and getting me invested!
8/11/21, 3:31 AM
OK, first off: the sex scene was top quality. Top quality. That was some seriously good smut. As for the story that's developing and the characterization of Ronny, who is by turns a sexbeast but then regretful and vulnerable, and Fin who is putting up a good struggle against the transformations - well all I can say is that it leaves me wanting to know what will happen next. Not just wanting you to crank out some more smut, but I actually care about your characters now. So that's just awesome. Good job.
8/10/21, 10:56 PM
This story is great! I love the muscle growth transformation, and the sex scene is ACHINGLY hot, but it's the humanity in the characters--especially in their post-coital talk--that makes the tale truly special. There are so many stories of cocky "alphas" (a term I hate) having their way with guys and showing no emotion beyond dominance and cruelty. You clearly distinguish between the lusty Ronnie and Fin and their true selves. Fantastic work!
8/10/21, 9:55 PM
Really looking forward to part 2.
8/10/21, 9:43 PM
Great follow up, I really enjoyed the uncontrollable lust they both experiment while at it, followed by the more tender afterglow. Ronny is quite intriguing now!
8/10/21, 5:35 PM
Enjoyed this chapter, including its surprise ending!

8/10/21, 5:48 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! The next chapter is almost finished, and I'm looking forward to sharing Julian with you all :3!
8/10/21, 10:53 AM
Such a great series