Recent Comments

9/10/21, 1:48 PM
Your writing is so fluid! It reads smoothly; it’s descriptive; your vocab range is wide and it shows. I’m enjoying the fluffy romance—it’s pleasant and sweet. That you tease at it through Razz brushing it away over and over again keeps the idea of it in the reader’s head while not over-expositing, and there are so many other subtle ways their chemistry appears. The one thing I’ll say is that the wording of some of Razz’s self-reflections feel somewhat clunky, but everyone writes clunky wording sometimes, so it’s not a mark. I’m also typically not the biggest on mind control, so I like themes where things happen naturally even though the characters could use powers. It’s sweet to see the unexpected happen to someone who can do anything they expect. And a delicious sex scene! The gradual progression of Derek getting more and more eager was great. It seems like you really have a grasp on how sex works, and I found myself wishing that bottoming would feel that good for me, too. Keep up the good work. I’m on to the next!
9/9/21, 7:43 AM
I really enjoyed this story! Your characters are well written and I like this dynamic of having the hypnosis without the usual aggression that comes on GSS. I think you ought to continue this story with at least another chapter or two. Both this site and GSS would benefit from your particular style of writing. I'm glad that you found the courage to post this, and while I'm only one reader, I really think this is hot! I definitely got off on it. Please write and post more of your stuff!

Conversion Enthusiast
9/10/21, 5:06 AM
@Jack thank you! will have to get started on the next portion soon then
Martin
9/9/21, 9:31 PM
Aww.... I see myself there... the wanna-be bottom, it's me. I want so much to feel more when being fucked, and I'd love to be a slutty bottom boy... So this resonated with me a lot. So would you come visit me, please, Razz???
Jonanator
9/8/21, 10:30 PM
Hot story. Are you planning to do more?

Conversion Enthusiast
9/9/21, 4:25 AM
@Jonanator hoping to if i can get some of a plotline going. i have a couple chapters bouncing around in my head but making them a continuous timeline might be weird and make me wanna edit down the road. I'm glad you liked it though =)

Jonanator
9/9/21, 9:14 PM
@Conversion Enthusiast you welcome. take your time.
Martin
9/9/21, 6:00 PM
Razz, you are allowed to crosspost this story on GSS if you want to. Soren Fitz has done the same. The demon does qualify this as far as I'm concerned.
9/9/21, 3:38 PM
cannot wait for more!!
Martin
9/8/21, 8:46 PM
That's just so romantic, it should be posted on gaycupid, too!

9/8/21, 9:22 PM
@Martin - not sure if you meant all the series or just this chapter. And if is only this chapter, did that count as an option? even if the other aren't that romantic (well I think Edward chapter could be romantic too)

Martin
9/9/21, 6:07 AM
@Math_Reez 💙 It's always the whole series. And I think the whole series qualifies!
9/9/21, 2:29 AM
Absolutely in love with this series. The slow-burn is perfectly paced and the writing is exceptional. I can't wait to hear about how the boys' fathers get integrated into their group, even if it's just through them relaying their experiences at home to each other. Also hoping to hear about one of Pastor Pete's initially guilt-ridden but ultimately explosive masturbation sessions with his big dong!
Jonanator
9/8/21, 10:03 PM
hot so far. can't wait for more.