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EntrancedGay92
9/5/21, 2:18 PM
Having grown up Southern Baptist and participating in some of the "Father Son Days", I can already tell I am going to love this story!!
Anonymous
9/5/21, 12:23 PM
such a tease
Elm
9/5/21, 4:34 AM
Nice! I hope the boys end up being the tops, cant wait to see what they would do to their stuck up daddies
9/5/21, 1:31 AM
Y'know Neemie, sometimes the cues indicating something is wrong can be just as exciting as a sex scene. Wonderful start and looking forward to more!
Jonanator
9/4/21, 4:52 PM
Can't weight for more.
9/4/21, 3:47 PM
I'm hooked already! Bring on the rest!
9/4/21, 1:23 PM
Such a great build up. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapters. Well done.
9/4/21, 1:03 PM
Awesome beginning! I look forward to future chapters.
9/4/21, 12:01 PM
Excited to see how it goes. Great job!
9/4/21, 9:34 AM
Great start! Excited to see where this story goes next.
9/2/21, 2:21 AM
Loving this story and the interplay between these well-developed characters. Looking forward to what happens next.

9/2/21, 7:31 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! We love hearing your thoughts! At this point, the story has caught up to where we had written, so I'm excited to discover what will happen alongside you!
9/2/21, 3:07 PM
Please don't let this story die, the entire set up is one of my favorites I've seen on this
9/1/21, 2:06 AM
Ahhh, great! I wasn't expecting another instalment of the Weregorilla saga. It was hot and romantic, a very sweet way to end it.
Jonanator
8/31/21, 7:23 PM
hottt. hope more is to come.

8/31/21, 9:43 PM
@Jonanator thank you so much! definitely more coming!

Jonanator
8/31/21, 9:47 PM
@time.to.occur Great, it's my favorite story. I do have on question, and you can choose to answer it or not, does Rhys actually love Jasper?

8/31/21, 11:52 PM
@Jonanator aww, thank you! And I think I'd answer that question this way: Rhys does have very strong feelings for Jasper but I don't think even he knows yet whether he loves him! Here's what Cuddle-switch says: "Rhys isn't stopping to think about what his feelings are. If you were to ask him, he would say that of course he isn't in love. If he were to stop and think about it, he would wonder because he does have strong feelings. In my mind, I haven't firmly decided if he's in love or just interested and infatuated. Who knows where those feelings will take him?"

Jonanator
8/31/21, 11:57 PM
@time.to.occur Well, then I'll have to wait for more to see if it leads to a romantic love or not. I'm loving this. you two have done a really great Story. Can't wait. I'm a die hard fan now.

9/1/21, 12:05 AM
@Jonanator We're both so glad to hear to hear that and look forward to writing and posting more!

Jonanator
9/1/21, 12:08 AM
@time.to.occur Great. can't wait. Enjoy your night.
leonardoPT
8/30/21, 9:30 PM
I love the story since I made it up to this chapter. But if I understand correctly, I must go to another site (paid?) to read the further chapters. That seems mindfucking in (commercial) practice. At least say that at the start of a series.

8/30/21, 11:04 PM
@leonardoPT Hi. Thanks for your comments and thanks for the feedback. Further chapters will be posted here in the future (Next chapter will probably be posted between this weekend and next weekend), but yes, the paid site will stay ahead of the story. To be perfectly honest, I lost my job a year ago and paying readers have been one of my sources of income to keep on going.

leonardoPT
8/30/21, 11:29 PM
@Lookintomyeyesboy I sympathize with your position, and writing stories for fellow kinksters is a real honorable way to help in making a living. And it adds beauty to the world. But i feel mislead when you write halfway the series: "If you want to know what comes next, you can find the rest of the story in my Patreon " What read like that you cannot know what comes next unless you go to Patreon. It might be seen as walking over the edge, but for me it is not respectful to the readers and GSS. My suggestion would be to say straightforward (at the start of the series) that it will be published in GSS, but those who support you in Patreon, have a head start and perhaps other privileges. Success wih your writings.

Martin
8/31/21, 3:39 PM
I agree with Lenonardo, that it would be better to mention that the chapters will be released here some time later as well.

8/31/21, 6:39 PM
@Martin Got it. Let me think of the wording and I'll put it in all the chapters here.
Aug 27, 2021
8/30/21, 4:30 PM
Varlance, this was a great story, man! It was hot, it was romantic, and I definitely would love to see more chapters to see where it goes. Thanks for adding the visuals, as well. I know that it's more work for you, but I really appreciated it. You've got a great handle on creating a scene and dialogue, both of which are sorely lacking in a lot of romance/porn stories. I hope to see more of your work in the *near* future. This site could use more excellent authors like yourself!

8/30/21, 6:08 PM
@Jack Thanks Jack! Actually most of the pictures came from the good people on Discord. Glad you liked it!
8/29/21, 9:41 PM
lol I feel like I'm ms Ruth reading this story 😂 really hope Sam ends up with Marc tho, he seems like such a sweet guy 😊 also, I was so sure that keeping that position was going to end with Sam accidentally impaled on Marc lol 😏 guess there's always next time

8/29/21, 11:05 PM
Oooh! Haha, now I wish I had done that instead... I probably shouldn't go back and edit it... @Botbot
8/27/21, 7:00 PM
Also, since when couldn't partial edits be made? I'm pretty sure that was allowed. So he should totally be ae to cross out "magic dick" but keep the rest. One of the frustrating elemebts of us following the "straight" guy is we never get to enjoy the sex scenes as the top or to completion. I wish marc's cock slipped into his while they were posing.

8/28/21, 11:43 PM
@Heru Kane It's not so much they can't make partial edits, as they're both too panicky and too sex-addled to think through all the myriad variations, so they don't even try.

8/29/21, 12:03 AM
Exactly! Gabe and Sam are horny dumbasses who aren't thinking 100% logically about how the book works. @HyperMuscleDirk

8/29/21, 12:12 AM
@bluesuedewho I miss the logic of the starting chapters. They were quite enjoyable. Now its thoughtless decisions rather than the ones where they were smart enough to protect the book and to make sure they couldn't write themselves out of reality and such.

8/29/21, 12:48 AM
I'm not sure either Gabe or Sam are especially logical thinkers! Gabe might have been a bit more relatively thoughtful about edits (and Sam has the occasional lucid moment), but both of them are mostly just thinking about getting off at the end of the day. Not that there aren't smart edits planned for future chapters -- just expect most of the drama to come from wacky changes! @Heru Kane

Anonymous
8/29/21, 2:05 AM
@bluesuedewho @Heru Kane I mean, I personally kind of *like* the fact that they aren't making perfectly logical decisions. It lets things spiral out of control and create... you know, conflict, drama, intrigue. One of the fun things about this story for *me* specifically is that things don't go as planned, and we get to watch two well meaning sex motivated idiots warp reality and scramble to deal with the consequences. I'm not sure if the early chapters were really "more logical" so much as just... things hadn't escalated as much yet, there wasn't horny juice in the water supply, and the two of them were a bit more cautious about using the book. Idk! I've loved this story a LOT so far and I trust bluesuedewho to create an interesting plot without needing it to come from Sam and Gabe's direct intentions. Nothing has felt out of character really for me so much as just a natural progression from where we started given the changes so far.

8/29/21, 9:42 PM
@Anonymous agreed! this has been fun while not throwing away previous plot points like Marc being into Sam or the people in
8/29/21, 12:46 AM
i don't know about anyone else, but I imagine Bussy with the voice of Jiz https://youtu.be/xAK108u2xAs
8/28/21, 11:33 PM
Great story and character development. Thought there would be some great sex. May be next chapter. Luv where this is going.....
8/28/21, 11:23 PM
FIrst time (virgin) reading one of your stories. I'm hooked and need to read more. Your detailed descriptions of the characters are great and keep me hard & leaking. Keep up the great work as I read on....
SC Walker
8/28/21, 7:03 AM
As always, an excellent chapter. Your sex scene descriptions are so illustrative and hot, I love how you can use words to really paint a picture of what is happening. I wish you could teach me how to write like that lol I'm really intrigued by the "black suits" subplot. My guess is that it's related to another one of your stories ;) The mystery is very intriguing and I have tons of theories about the female teachers... Maybe it's the big softie in me, but I love how caring and attentive Marc is. I actually kind of ship him and Sam. Not sure if that is your intention. I agree with the other reader that more than anyone I want Marc to have a happy ending. Sam and Gabe both can act like jerks, but Marc has consistently been portrayed as a very sweet, but extremely horny and gifted, stud. I will say, though, that tension and anticipation and build up are good, but sometimes too much build up can lead to disappointment if the end result isn't worth it. by that I mean, I hope by the end of the story what all your readers are likely hoping for will happen to Sam. I can be patient (and intrigued), but it also makes me nervous that I'm going to end up disappointed.

Nutiper
8/28/21, 7:37 AM
@SC Walker Oh! What are you hoping will happen to Sam? Like, a happy ending? Or are you thinking something more specific (like anal)?

SC Walker
8/28/21, 12:52 PM
Yeah, I'm hoping eventually Sam will get fucked. I think the story is getting there, but I'm not 100% sure. Maybe it's just me being inpatient but I could never write a story with this much teasing haha. @Nutiper

SC Walker
8/28/21, 12:56 PM
To be more specific, the goal of this chapter seemed to be humiliating and embarassing Sam, which isn't that appealing to me. I just feel bad for him. I enjoy it more when Sam is enthusiastic and enjoying it, not when he's cumming against his will, humiliating himself in front of people. @SC Walker

8/28/21, 2:13 PM
Thanks for the compliment! Revise, revise, revise is my best advice! The first draft was done a while ago, but I've been tweaking it with Nu and MM's help for weeks. Coming back to something you wrote the next day (or a couple days later) is helpful, I think! I won't spoil anything with teachers and blacksuits, but there's definitely a lot more plot mixed in with the porn in future chapters. Hopefully Gabe and Sam aren't coming across as *too* jerky. I'm trying to write them as (other than pushing each other's buttons) horny college guys who are really making an effort to be "ethical sluts" -- eager to try new things with new people without hurting anyone's feelings -- and it comes a little more naturally to Sam who's a bit of a people pleaser, even if he always has sex on the brain. @SC Walker

8/28/21, 2:17 PM
Some of that I included because I like a little light humiliation, but *also* every time Sam gets embarrassed (or potentially embarrassed) it pushes the plot/changes forward because one of his defining characteristics is his need to maintain his "straight" reputation -- even if it gets a little ridiculous! @SC Walker

SC Walker
8/28/21, 2:35 PM
I totally understand that, sorry if I came across trying to dictate your story to you. I think you've put in alot of effort into making Sam likeable sure he's a dumbass , but as you said he is just trying to enjoy himself. Creating such syampathetic character is a win in itself @bluesuedewho

8/28/21, 6:49 PM
Oh no, you're good! I was just worried things were still coming across as darker than I intended. @SC Walker
8/27/21, 8:44 PM
the way how this story has a strangle hold on my cock and orgasms... I love it so much!

8/28/21, 2:03 PM
Thanks! What a compliment! @Thexshxboi
Aug 27, 2021
8/28/21, 4:05 AM
Hot, sexy story with a lot of group sex...my kind of story! Excellent writing...you felt like you were there in the shed with all the guys (wish I was). The hairy boss sounded super sexy, the character descriptions were great and the sex scenes had me hard an leaking the hole time. Keep up the great and write more!

8/28/21, 8:24 AM
@MuscleSon69 Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
8/28/21, 2:02 AM
I do hope Sam can accept that he likes doing "gay stuff" eventually.
8/28/21, 1:04 AM
I love the story, and I especially love the interactions between Gabe and Sam. I can definitely see that Sam and Marc are being pulled together with the edits made, but I hope that even if Sam eventually succumbs to Marc magic dick he doesn't lose his relationship with Gabe. No matter what happens, this is a fantastic story, and I'm super excited to see what changes and events you write in future chapters, keep up the awesome work!

8/28/21, 1:47 AM
Thanks! I try to avoid spoilers (although I'm probably bad at it...) but I will say that Sam and Gabe are still close friends at the end of the story! @Jacker
8/28/21, 12:12 AM
I wasn’t expecting another chapter so soon — great surprise! The tension between Marc and Sam is my favourite part of this whole deal, though Gabriel and Sam is a really fun dynamic too. I’m a little worried for Sam. At the rate this is going, I suspect bottoming might become a straight dude thing. And there aren’t that many straight guys left on campus! I’m seriously curious what’s up with the black suits. I sure hope nobody pranks them by replacing their bottled water with tap water.

8/28/21, 1:45 AM
It was originally one massive chapter, but I thought splitting it up and polishing both bits would be a smoother read! The black suits plot thread definitely starts moving faster in the next chapter. @Derek Williams
8/27/21, 10:46 PM
This series is just an absolute gift. So hot and funny and heartwarming. Thanks again for posting.

8/27/21, 11:04 PM
Thanks! And you're welcome! @tenser13
8/27/21, 7:56 PM
The entire art class scene was super hot, especially how Sam's ass kept making it harder and harder for Marc to hold on, inadvertently leading to near sex between them right in class. I'll admit to hoping hoping they would fuck, but I'm guessing you're saving that for a future chapter. The descriptions of the sex in the bathroom, as well as Sam's reactions to it was super hot. I also loved how Marc was still there to make sure that Sam was okay. I like Marc a lot and want to see him have a happy ending. I grow more intrigued by the black suited people and that some of the teachers might know about the book. Or they at least know of magic being a thing. I do think the teacher angle is a little out of left field, but maybe there were hints I missed because of the heat in previous chapters. Guess I might have to go reread them. I'll also echo MonsterMash in that I enjoy that Sam's idea to keep himself straight continues to make himself gayer, while still thinking everything he does is only for straights. I'm also impressed by the last edit Sam made. It was remarkably smart and not made out of lust. I'm looking forward to finding out how this story is going to unfold. And what other sexy shenanigans Sam is going to find himself in.

8/27/21, 8:31 PM
Thanks for the detailed comments! They make writing silly smut worth it! @Proteus
Anonymous
8/27/21, 7:53 PM
I absolutely love everything about this series, the build up is insane and every single scene is extremely hot. This has been my favorite series to read in years, keep up the amazing work!

8/27/21, 8:26 PM
Thanks! It definitely helps that I'm getting editing help and brainstorms from two people! @