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Anonymous
9/19/21, 3:36 AM
i was gonna wait until the whole thing was done to start this, but it looked too exciting and i couldn't help myself. and man, i'm glad i jumped in!! i think i just have too soft a spot for plot, really, especially slightly wild ones. and this story is doing a great job depicting a wishes-gone-wrong scenario that starts really ripping reality apart. there's a sort of worldbuilding through destruction that i really enjoy here. i also have a soft spot for sam's progression. he doesn't feel like a regular guy being thoughtless to me so much as like. somebody who's had so many compounding mental changes that continue to bump into each other that he's not really... capable of thinking things through so to speak. it's not an iq drain practically, but functionally that's what happens when you're extremely sexually keyed up all the time and haven't been able to adjust to fundamental changes to your psyche. and so it makes him more likely to rush into things which makes the whole situation worse. and if there's one thing i like in reality bending stories, it's Difficult Cycles To Work Your Way Out Of. I understand the other feedback and think they would also make for very interesting versions of this story, but personally I like where this is heading a lot. Really excited for part 2 of the chapter, and for the rest of the story in general!!!

9/19/21, 4:06 AM
Thanks! I think that's a really good explanation of how Sam's probably thinking (or failing to think). The next chapter will post sometime next week! @
9/19/21, 2:11 AM
This story is much more chaotic than most stories I prefer, but I actually really like it! It's so different with all the wild unpredictability. To me, it really makes it fun and sexy. Marc is my favorite character and I just want to slap Sam and make him give in to the massive, kind muscle stud. But it is hard to get over those long-built up rivalries in your mind. And the fact that so many edits seem to be making Marc even more powerful in various ways, I love it! My only nitpick, I would really appreciate some sort of indication of just how BIG Marc and Gabe are. Sam constantly comments on how big and muscular they are, can we get a stat or two? Height and/or weight? Or the size of their cocks? :) Thanks for a great and unique story.

9/19/21, 2:38 AM
Thanks, it's planned chaos, I can assure you! And I'm enjoying adding edits pumping up Marc into an irresistible force of nature. I'm *terrible* with picturing what specific height/weight combos look like. I know what the characters look like it my head, but my brain doesn't naturally think to assign specific stats. I imagine they're not *impossibly* huge, just pushing the edge. Don't hold me to these numbers, but rough ballpark, above 6' 6" but under 7', and over 250 lb but under 300 lb? Cocks maybe between 11 and 13 inches long? @dredlifter

9/19/21, 3:40 AM
@bluesuedewho Thanks for the insight! I do bodybuilding myself so I love stats. I completely understand your on the weight. Truthfully, as muscular guys get taller and taller their weights increase a lot faster than you would think. A really big 6'6 bodybuilder would weigh around 300 lbs. A 6'6 muscle jock would be around 250-270. For the sake of your story, just sticking with heights is more than sufficient to help us fill in the gaps, thank you! I also enjoy things like relating their heights to objects. A typical door is 6'8. If they have to duck through the door that gives us an idea of how huge they are! If you ever want some help determining height and weights for big guys in your future stories I'd be happy to help on request! :)

9/19/21, 4:05 AM
Thanks! That's very helpful for someone like me who loves muscle, but is bad with both spatial awareness and measurements. I really like stats when characters are into stats (I can recall reading some really hot measuring scenes) but I don't have much real world experience to inform myself! I figured my weights were more likely to be off than heights. I know muscle is significantly heavier than fat, so a big muscular guy is going to weigh a lot more than height/weight tables would suggest. @dredlifter
9/19/21, 3:00 AM
I've been really drawn to this story, I enjoy the somewhat chaotic progression of the reality edits, the ways that the poorly conceived edits bounce off each other. Many of the individual edits are very very sexy, and I even enjoy the subtle way we're being introduced to the idea that Sam is getting kind of stupid. So I disagree with the more negative comments. But I seriously wish there were more moments of actual, gay, penetrative sex, between two gay men. I'm with everyone else who is eagerly awaiting Sam and Marc finally fucking, but I wish you would slow down a bit, let some of the changes breathe a bit and show us how these wild changes impact Gabe and tertiary characters. The pole dancing major was a fun and sexy idea, but hurrying past this for more and more changes and hurtling toward plot development is a mossed opportunity - this is just one example. Would you ever consider chapters or longer asides that are not from Sam's perspective?

9/19/21, 3:18 AM
Thank you! The chaos is definitely intended to be a feature! Sam was a bit dense at the beginning -- it's not so much that he's getting dumber as the story progresses, he just has lots of sexy distractions from edits. Penetrative sex is going to happen soon (although Sam will still insist that he's "straight"). Some changes, like the pole dancing edit serve multiple purposes! In this chapter, it's meant to show that Sam's edit had immediate unintended consequences, but that change will also definitely ripple forward into future chapters! Sam's pole dancing major is a major feature in a future installment. On the subject of asides, I have at least two "bonus" chapters in drafts, one from Marc's perspective. No ETA on those, but they're in the works! @brium
9/19/21, 3:00 AM
What a lovely surprise to see another chapter of this story! I'm quite intrigued by the plot that's developing. What's up with the black suits? What kind of magic does Alice have? What happened to Gabe at the end? I personally love how much more complex the plot outside the two guys has gotten, while Gabe and Sam are continuing to edit the book without a care in the world. I do kind of hate how we don't find out Gabe's edits right away, though. I want to know what he changes, but I guess that's the problem (if you can call it a problem) with following the perspective of only one character. One of my favorite things about this was the description of just how infatuated Sam is becoming with Marc. Especially the description of Marc's bicep. Yum. I could picture it so clearly in my mind. I also liked Marc's "disguise." It felt very Clark Kent and it makes me want Sam to be his Lois Lane. I'm still hoping they get together. Or if nothing else, that Marc gets a happy ending. He's so sweet and I might be more invested in his story than I should be. The only complaint I have, really, is that even though the chapter ended with a nice cliffhanger, something felt missing. I can't put a finger on what, though. I think it might have been a lack of sex? Either way, great chapter, and I eagerly await more.

9/19/21, 3:11 AM
Thanks! Next chapter will be out soon and answer at least one of those questions! It will also be heavier on the sex (I realize this chapter just has some masturbation/light oral). Maybe I should have left the whole chapter in one chunk, it was just *so* long and had so many different scenes that I thought it would be a good idea to let the plot reveals breathe a bit. Maybe let readers speculate a bit. The next chapter (and sex scene) will be soon! @Proteus
9/19/21, 2:27 AM
love it. dive more into the mind control aspect of the necklace.
9/19/21, 2:12 AM
Thanks for the comments!! Tell me what you want to see or ideas (no promises if I use them)...Right now I'm kind of winging it lol
Anonymous
9/18/21, 7:35 PM
Again, this story is so intriguing and fun. The slow burn and culmination of all previous edits coming together makes this extremely enjoyable to read. If every single edit that the main characters made was 100% intelligently thought out there would be no story to speak of. The ever increasing horniness and rash decisions are what make it so interesting to see because you can never know exactly how it will play out. Keep up the fantastic work and I can't wait for more!

9/19/21, 1:52 AM
Thanks! I've always loved wishes gone wrong stories, so I figured I'd give it a go! I also can't resist the urge to plot and worldbuild, so it's nice to see readers enjoying elements coming together! @
Anonymous
9/18/21, 7:47 PM
im obsessed with marc and sams relationship! cant wait for the next one

9/19/21, 1:50 AM
I've had a lot of fun writing it, even though I'm not much of a romance writer! Next chapter will be sometime next week! @
9/18/21, 7:16 PM
To me, the story is just getting better and better. I don't know why negative people can't just keep their non-helpful, non-constructive posts to themselves.

9/19/21, 1:48 AM
Thanks! It's a slow burn, but I'm hoping people enjoy all the threads coming together! @thequirkyone
9/19/21, 12:29 AM
This story continues to be one of my favorites on this site. This chapter has some *incredibly* hot sequences and just.... delicious descriptions of Gabe and Marc's new bodies (mmm...), but it's also becoming clearer and clearer the farther we get into the story that *paying attention to small details is rewarding for readers*. There are these little hints that something isn't quite right, and recurring side characters and names which keep coming up... Sam himself is too distracted being horny (who could blame him lol) to really notice most of it but it's so impressive and exciting how much thought you've clearly put into all the little plot details, and I'm so excited to see where it goes from here!!

9/19/21, 1:47 AM
Thanks! This is definitely my most developed story on GSS in terms of time spent brainstorming, world-building, plotting, and taking notes on. @Anteros