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9/21/21, 6:06 PM
This was really nicely written -- hot, kept up the pacing, delivered on the exposition of the world. Great work! I look forward to more!

9/22/21, 1:07 AM
@time.to.occur Hey, I really appreciate that! I worked hard on the pacing and I’m glad I kept it hot. I’m also glad the exposition worked out—I wanted to keep things readable without revealing everything, but also providing what readers really needed. I hope to deliver with the next chapters!
9/22/21, 12:26 AM
The last scene really nails the balance between sweet and hot! I loved it!
9/20/21, 8:31 AM
Ah, just as good as I remember 😂. Definitely intrigued to see what happens next.

9/21/21, 10:44 PM
@Norismo Thanks for reading it again! And I’m always happy for comments. I’m looking forward to writing more and evolving this story in great directions. Thanks for the help, too!
9/20/21, 7:59 PM
I could not disagree more with the folks who feel like this story has lost its way. I am enjoying every chapter more than the last! The way the edits are spiraling out of control as Sam gets deeper and deeper into gay horny 24/7 territory is brilliant, and the worldbuilding and backstory you've created is masterful. I want to know more about the government(?) agency that's investigating this stuff, about the matching shawl crew who all used the magic textbook together, about the deeper ramifications of the existence of these reality altering objects. I love the slight turn it's taking toward the end game of Sam accepting turning gay, with Gabe nudging him with support, but I also love the resistance he continues to put up. I know it's partly hyperbolic chest thumping when he declares himself the straightest dude on campus, but I also like to believe it's true and exactly the reason he keeps getting whammied so fucking hard. The straighter the dude, the more the edits hit him, and Sam is straighter than anyone. ;) Anyway, I will keep reading this story for as long as you want to keep writing it!

9/21/21, 4:56 PM
Thanks! The next chapter is mostly the sex scenes set up in this one, but there's definitely more plot reveals on the way! @Curiosity
Gambit
9/21/21, 4:08 PM
OMG!!! what a tease. really enjoying the story line. Looking forward for the next chapter.
9/19/21, 9:50 PM
Super sexy and fun story. So many elements of it had me going "ooh yeah!" So yeah, great stuff. Looking forward to seeing more in the story. There is much here that hits the stop!

9/21/21, 3:40 PM
@Heru Kane I’m glad it hit the spot for you. It definitely hits it for me and I had a ton of fun writing it! I hope you enjoy all the rest, too.
Jonanator
9/19/21, 8:59 PM
Awesome story. My main question is, will Marco fall in love with Prince Ariel when he comes? I hope I don't have to wit to long to find out. Can't wait for the next chapter.

9/21/21, 3:11 AM
@Jonanator I’m glad you liked it! Things aren’t going to be resolved so easily, unfortunately—but I think it’ll be fun reading, and there won’t be long-term unresolved drama. I can’t wait to finish and publish the next one! (Except I can, because I have to in order not to write it badly.)

Jonanator
9/21/21, 3:22 AM
@Soren Fitz ok then. can't wait
Anonymous
9/20/21, 10:52 PM
Love Steve's oblivious transformation so far! Looking forward to part 3!
9/20/21, 11:32 AM
It would be so cruel and funny if Melanie had already been turned gay due to the earlier edits when Sam goes to date her. Although this makes me wonder a few things about this world. Obviously it leans towards making people gay, but how are bi and trans people affected?

9/20/21, 1:42 PM
More people realize that they're bi with experimentation being more common. I haven't thought much about how trans people would be affected since none of the characters are trans, but presumably they'd be more likely to be gay or bi in this reality. @RainbowMika91
Jonanator
9/16/21, 9:53 PM
Nice story. I loved it.

9/20/21, 12:05 PM
Thanks, @Jonanator

Jonanator
9/20/21, 12:07 PM
@BobbyBlobfish welcome. it was awesome. I hope to post today, so be on the lookout. Hope to see more Stories like this. I'm a huge fan of you.