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9/21/21, 2:40 PM
Wow! This is a really creative setting!

9/21/21, 11:25 PM
@bluesuedewho That’s high praise to me, knowing how cool your ideas are, too! I can’t claim it as entirely my own—I developed it with friends a year or so ago and have been fleshing out ever since. I’m excited to explore it with y’all and I hope you continue to enjoy the ideas!

9/21/21, 11:45 PM
I'm particularly intrigued by Firecrackers! :eyes: I've re-read this a couple times to make sure I'm getting all the world-building clues about the different castes (or whatever the in-universe term is for the different types of guys). Hopefully we get to see more of Johnny in future chapters! @Soren Fitz

9/22/21, 7:26 AM
@bluesuedewho You’re a good reader! Trust that your efforts to get clues are not in vain. I’m no Steven Erikson, but I still like giving the readers some ideas about what’s coming next before I explicitly explain it. Also, I’m over the moon that you reread it! 🥰

9/22/21, 6:06 PM
Okay, I read it again and I have a bonkers theory about Firecrackers based on Robbie seeming to disappear and reappear. I think Firecrackers can temporarily turn the guys they fuck into cum? (Which has cleaning properties, hence "treating" the house). Then the guy reforms after some time? Looking forward to the next chapter! @Soren Fitz

9/22/21, 6:25 PM
You are *so* close. However, there’s a part of it that I changed a little later that I unfortunately forgot to clue in as part of this chapter, so the full answer will be revealed soon… But your bonkers theory is so close to right that I’m screaming, heh. @bluesuedewho
9/22/21, 3:30 PM
I loved this chapter, even with no super crazy edits making an impact it was very interesting to see a sort of glimpse into the possible other magical forces of this planet with Alice. The scene with Marc using his magic dick for good was also amazing! I loved the cliffhanger with Gabe disappearing and I also wonder what Gabe's edit was that he made in the bathroom. Keep up the awesome work!
9/22/21, 1:41 PM
Well, Alice was an unexpected delight. "Cattywampus," I mean, honestly. I will admit that I was missing the sex in this chapter, but overall I'm still very invested in how all of this plays out. I'm intrigued as to how the tutoring edit affected reality to the point that Gabe was no longer beside Sam after he made that (retroactive) change. My guess is he's giving or getting tutoring, and had a session booked in his schedule, and now he has two sets of memories for the same time frame (seeing Marc go all superhero at the book store, and having sexy tutor time), which will only confuse things further.

9/22/21, 3:23 PM
The next chapter (posting this week, fingers crossed) has a lot more sex that this chapter sets up. I wanted to let the plot reveals breathe a bit. @Noam de Pluma
9/22/21, 11:28 AM
I'm excited for this to debut, you've been so enthusiastic about it on the Discord! This is hot as hell and I'm very *very* excited to see more of it! Well done, man!

9/22/21, 1:56 PM
@Dace I’m excited about your enthusiasm! (The italics on “very” really took the cake for me.) It warms my heart to know you find it so hot. I’m looking forward to getting everyone more!
9/22/21, 4:05 AM
Since this is the 4th edition of "Sexuality," I'm wondering we'll get a prequel/sequel with the 1st-3rd/5th edition :) *crosses fingers*
9/21/21, 6:06 PM
This was really nicely written -- hot, kept up the pacing, delivered on the exposition of the world. Great work! I look forward to more!

9/22/21, 1:07 AM
@time.to.occur Hey, I really appreciate that! I worked hard on the pacing and I’m glad I kept it hot. I’m also glad the exposition worked out—I wanted to keep things readable without revealing everything, but also providing what readers really needed. I hope to deliver with the next chapters!
9/22/21, 12:26 AM
The last scene really nails the balance between sweet and hot! I loved it!
9/20/21, 8:31 AM
Ah, just as good as I remember 😂. Definitely intrigued to see what happens next.

9/21/21, 10:44 PM
@Norismo Thanks for reading it again! And I’m always happy for comments. I’m looking forward to writing more and evolving this story in great directions. Thanks for the help, too!
9/20/21, 7:59 PM
I could not disagree more with the folks who feel like this story has lost its way. I am enjoying every chapter more than the last! The way the edits are spiraling out of control as Sam gets deeper and deeper into gay horny 24/7 territory is brilliant, and the worldbuilding and backstory you've created is masterful. I want to know more about the government(?) agency that's investigating this stuff, about the matching shawl crew who all used the magic textbook together, about the deeper ramifications of the existence of these reality altering objects. I love the slight turn it's taking toward the end game of Sam accepting turning gay, with Gabe nudging him with support, but I also love the resistance he continues to put up. I know it's partly hyperbolic chest thumping when he declares himself the straightest dude on campus, but I also like to believe it's true and exactly the reason he keeps getting whammied so fucking hard. The straighter the dude, the more the edits hit him, and Sam is straighter than anyone. ;) Anyway, I will keep reading this story for as long as you want to keep writing it!

9/21/21, 4:56 PM
Thanks! The next chapter is mostly the sex scenes set up in this one, but there's definitely more plot reveals on the way! @Curiosity
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9/21/21, 4:08 PM
OMG!!! what a tease. really enjoying the story line. Looking forward for the next chapter.