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Anonymous
9/25/21, 4:26 PM
The anal play being hinted at finally LMAO curious to see how Sam is going to explain this being straight

9/25/21, 4:38 PM
I think the question is if he’ll be able to reconcile what he wants with how he defines himself (straight). He can easily make it totally straight to get fucked, but even Sam is starting to think about whether or not that makes sense to do.

Anonymous
9/25/21, 4:42 PM
@MonsterMash62 I totally thought of that option, but I love this story so much that I wish it played out a little longer lol and I love that the premisse is a straight guy going nuts around hung masculine dudes and trying to explain everything that happens

9/25/21, 4:58 PM
Me too definitely. This is one of my favorite stories recently by a mile. @Anonymous
9/25/21, 3:53 PM
Man,Tanner is devious, I love it and I'm intrigued by bean angel
9/22/21, 1:09 PM
Just keeps getting hotter! Can't wait for them to capture Robert, the chase just makes it better :) thanks for posting!

9/25/21, 3:07 PM
@tenser13 Thanks a lot! something tells me you're gonna LOVE the next chapter!
9/25/21, 2:59 PM
Thank you very much S.Q.Neemie. I have waited impatiently for the next chapter. Checking the site for updates every day. It is by far the best story on this site right now. I must admit that the sudden change in pace took me by surprise. After the small changes in the first chapters I had imagined the pastor's decent into perversion would have been more gradual. On the other hand it is nice to see Tanner really flex his mind control-muscles and you described the pastor's grand fall wonderfully. I do hope that the pastor can learn to enjoy his new feelings instead of feeling repulsed all the time. I would like to see him actively encourage Tanner in his work with the guys to serve his own perverted needs. I do not know how I feel about the ending. I imagined that Tanner was just a "regular" mind controller targeting the congregation for the fun of it, but it seems like there might actually be a fight between good and evil going on. I did not think the story would need that element. Like Piko said. It is sad for the families, but I do hope Tanner wins.
9/25/21, 2:11 PM
This is one of the hottest series on this site right now. Each time I log on, I'm looking for the newest chapter. I hope this story goes on forever. Keep up the amazing work!
9/25/21, 11:53 AM
Absolutely worth the wait! I love the suggestion that there may be a happy ending but I can't wait to see what other misadventures they all get up to before then!
9/22/21, 7:51 AM
Really good stuff! It fits really well on both sites. Best of luck in the contest!

9/25/21, 10:05 AM
@Norismo Thanks! Your story is also really good! But honestly, so few people posted for this contest, the result won't mean all that much... Math_Reez told me once he was surprised i didn't publish more on this site, given the fact a lot of my mind control stories have feel good and fluffy scenes, so yeah... I guess I'm just not used to putting the romance front and center. I'm kind of proud of how often I get 4 or 5 for the ideas rating, tho.
9/25/21, 9:01 AM
The drawn-out change each step significant and a corruption as to narration Thanks for taking time to get Peter from one place to another. Coming to loathe tanner. The minor bits made him annoying. But this was repulsively unfair. But can appreciate his tastes. wonder what do next
Jonanator
9/25/21, 2:18 AM
hot. can't wait for more.
9/23/21, 12:41 AM
This one was very hot to me. While it's something best confined to fiction - I must confess I find the father/son incest stories immensely arousing.

9/23/21, 4:51 AM
@amul I concur. I don't know but the older/younger pairings are very hot to me, especially if the older is submissive or a bottom leaning partner.

9/25/21, 12:22 AM
@JoSmith That is 100% what i love about your stories.
9/24/21, 11:37 PM
Love this one. Great story!
9/24/21, 11:35 PM
Oh my! Are you in my head? How could you write something so close to my favorite fantasies?? Deep sexual corruption of a father into a sex-craving incestuous son-lover is my most favorite kind of erotica! And you wrote it perfectly! You hit ALL the right buttons. I loved and enjoyed every bit of this chapter, and I know that I'm gonna revisit it *for many years to come*. This sensual fall into the abyss is being superb! I'm sorry for their community but I hope Tanner wins. Thank you so much for creating this series! It's among the best things I've read in the last few years.
9/24/21, 11:19 PM
never seen this stuff before and very excited to binge them all
Anonymous
9/24/21, 10:09 PM
Another extremely hot entry! I've been waiting with bated breath for more. Can't wait to see what other dads get up to with their sons!!!
9/24/21, 4:30 PM
You hit so many of my kinks so well here. gonna have to look out for your future stuff.

9/24/21, 6:28 PM
That’s great to hear! I’m curious what they are! (I just looked at your story repertoire and it definitely seems interesting; I’m certain I’ll take a look.) Are there any of your kinks that I need to add on to the tag list? @Tyrol

9/24/21, 7:03 PM
@Soren Fitz i liked pretty much everything! do you mean in terms of future story? I like the frat setting, the mind stuff, the inflation. all

9/24/21, 7:12 PM
I mean in terms of, are there any specific kinks you noticed that I didn’t tag in the current tag list? (Aaaalso, if I check out your stories will I find some cum inflation? I’m kind of addicted, lol.) @Tyrol

9/24/21, 7:21 PM
i didn't notice any untagged kinks. and yes i do believe you would find quite a few of mine with cum inflation haha. I'm also addicted to that. it seems to be getting more popular on this site recently for some reason

9/24/21, 7:30 PM
Hell yeah! That’ll be fun to check out. It had better! I’m starting a damn movement. New requirement for every story, lol. There’ll be much more of it throughout this series! I can’t do a scene without it, haha. Thanks for the feedback. @Tyrol

9/24/21, 7:33 PM
perfect. i confess I've been slacking hardcore so now i might have to get back in

9/24/21, 8:51 PM
Hey, write when you want! If you like it, do it. If you don’t have any ideas dragging you into writing, give it some time. Until then, I’ll enjoy your current material. @Tyrol
9/22/21, 8:59 AM
Say, this is a really interesting story! There are all sorts of tantalizing plot threads: Gwen's magic, Nick's "zone" (which also seems to be some kind of enchantment), the evolution of sub/dom relationships...plus it's nice to see an author acknowledge both the fluidity of sexuality AND the importance of consent (Darius refusing to be intimate with a drunk Nick). I can't wait to see what happens next!

9/24/21, 3:17 AM
Thank you for the comment! I Can't wait to share the next chapter!
9/23/21, 8:41 PM
I loved Tumblr stories. Good to see they're alive and kicking. This is great

9/23/21, 9:11 PM
Thank you @Test!
Sep 22, 2021
9/23/21, 1:54 PM
You writing is so good! Your descriptions flowed so well; you chose vivid words; it felt like art. And it was hot the whole time (or I’m horny…?) but it’s definitely a fun set-up, especially for vignettes. (If I ever wrote a vignette for it, can I include cum inflation? =P)

9/23/21, 2:46 PM
@Soren go for it! I'm happy to inspire :
9/23/21, 2:05 PM
I haven’t read it all yet, but I wanted to say I love how you blend modernity with fantasy. It’s always fun to hear about universities and credit cards at the same time as advanced magic.
9/23/21, 2:27 AM
Continuing to enjoy this story and looking forward to more. I'm especially curious as to what awaits Jasper in his future training. Great story!

9/23/21, 1:07 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much! It's great to know what parts of the story have you curious!
Jonanator
9/23/21, 1:02 AM
hot. can't wait for more.

9/23/21, 1:06 PM
@Jonanator thank you! we look forward to writing more!
Sep 22, 2021
Jonanator
9/22/21, 11:51 PM
Nice story. Will there be more to it?
9/22/21, 11:48 PM
This story shows great promise with extremely likeable characters and the start of some interesting plot lines. Looking forward to where you take the story next!
Jonanator
9/22/21, 11:31 PM
Ooo. I can't wait for more. Hope a part two is coming.
Sep 22, 2021
Martin
9/22/21, 8:42 PM
very intriguing,. Are there more parts coming?
9/9/21, 6:31 PM
It's pretty rare that I tear up when reading a story on these sites. But this is one of them. Kudos to Soren Fitz for effecting a change not only in the subject, but in the person that's trying to change him. Very rewarding story!

9/22/21, 6:36 PM
Oh my god, that’s sweet—I didn’t realise my story had that potential to evoke emotion on that level, although I’ll admit I felt something too when I wrote the moment he ran for the picture on the wall. I’m all about growth for all the characters involved—so I’m glad that shined through. Thanks for reading! @nycboot
9/9/21, 9:12 AM
Well, now I'm over here wondering when I'm going to get *my* big-dicked muscle husband! Very hot sex scene, I loved the quantity of cum, and I cannot wait to see your next story. You have fantastic writing abilities, and this story is a HUGE boost to GCS.

9/22/21, 6:30 PM
I’m wondering that too! Crossing my fingers for both of us. Trust that I’ll keep that cum coming, and in fact, I just released The Prince and the Frat Boy with *tons* of it. It really does make me happy to be told my writing abilities are “fantastic”—especially after years thinking smut wasn’t “good writing”—so, thanks a ton! @Jack
9/21/21, 2:40 PM
Wow! This is a really creative setting!

9/21/21, 11:25 PM
@bluesuedewho That’s high praise to me, knowing how cool your ideas are, too! I can’t claim it as entirely my own—I developed it with friends a year or so ago and have been fleshing out ever since. I’m excited to explore it with y’all and I hope you continue to enjoy the ideas!

9/21/21, 11:45 PM
I'm particularly intrigued by Firecrackers! :eyes: I've re-read this a couple times to make sure I'm getting all the world-building clues about the different castes (or whatever the in-universe term is for the different types of guys). Hopefully we get to see more of Johnny in future chapters! @Soren Fitz

9/22/21, 7:26 AM
@bluesuedewho You’re a good reader! Trust that your efforts to get clues are not in vain. I’m no Steven Erikson, but I still like giving the readers some ideas about what’s coming next before I explicitly explain it. Also, I’m over the moon that you reread it! 🥰

9/22/21, 6:06 PM
Okay, I read it again and I have a bonkers theory about Firecrackers based on Robbie seeming to disappear and reappear. I think Firecrackers can temporarily turn the guys they fuck into cum? (Which has cleaning properties, hence "treating" the house). Then the guy reforms after some time? Looking forward to the next chapter! @Soren Fitz

9/22/21, 6:25 PM
You are *so* close. However, there’s a part of it that I changed a little later that I unfortunately forgot to clue in as part of this chapter, so the full answer will be revealed soon… But your bonkers theory is so close to right that I’m screaming, heh. @bluesuedewho
9/22/21, 3:30 PM
I loved this chapter, even with no super crazy edits making an impact it was very interesting to see a sort of glimpse into the possible other magical forces of this planet with Alice. The scene with Marc using his magic dick for good was also amazing! I loved the cliffhanger with Gabe disappearing and I also wonder what Gabe's edit was that he made in the bathroom. Keep up the awesome work!
9/22/21, 1:41 PM
Well, Alice was an unexpected delight. "Cattywampus," I mean, honestly. I will admit that I was missing the sex in this chapter, but overall I'm still very invested in how all of this plays out. I'm intrigued as to how the tutoring edit affected reality to the point that Gabe was no longer beside Sam after he made that (retroactive) change. My guess is he's giving or getting tutoring, and had a session booked in his schedule, and now he has two sets of memories for the same time frame (seeing Marc go all superhero at the book store, and having sexy tutor time), which will only confuse things further.

9/22/21, 3:23 PM
The next chapter (posting this week, fingers crossed) has a lot more sex that this chapter sets up. I wanted to let the plot reveals breathe a bit. @Noam de Pluma