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9/23/21, 2:05 PM
I haven’t read it all yet, but I wanted to say I love how you blend modernity with fantasy. It’s always fun to hear about universities and credit cards at the same time as advanced magic.
9/23/21, 2:27 AM
Continuing to enjoy this story and looking forward to more. I'm especially curious as to what awaits Jasper in his future training. Great story!

9/23/21, 1:07 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much! It's great to know what parts of the story have you curious!
Jonanator
9/23/21, 1:02 AM
hot. can't wait for more.

9/23/21, 1:06 PM
@Jonanator thank you! we look forward to writing more!
Sep 22, 2021
Jonanator
9/22/21, 11:51 PM
Nice story. Will there be more to it?
9/22/21, 11:48 PM
This story shows great promise with extremely likeable characters and the start of some interesting plot lines. Looking forward to where you take the story next!
Jonanator
9/22/21, 11:31 PM
Ooo. I can't wait for more. Hope a part two is coming.
Sep 22, 2021
Martin
9/22/21, 8:42 PM
very intriguing,. Are there more parts coming?
9/9/21, 6:31 PM
It's pretty rare that I tear up when reading a story on these sites. But this is one of them. Kudos to Soren Fitz for effecting a change not only in the subject, but in the person that's trying to change him. Very rewarding story!

9/22/21, 6:36 PM
Oh my god, that’s sweet—I didn’t realise my story had that potential to evoke emotion on that level, although I’ll admit I felt something too when I wrote the moment he ran for the picture on the wall. I’m all about growth for all the characters involved—so I’m glad that shined through. Thanks for reading! @nycboot
9/9/21, 9:12 AM
Well, now I'm over here wondering when I'm going to get *my* big-dicked muscle husband! Very hot sex scene, I loved the quantity of cum, and I cannot wait to see your next story. You have fantastic writing abilities, and this story is a HUGE boost to GCS.

9/22/21, 6:30 PM
I’m wondering that too! Crossing my fingers for both of us. Trust that I’ll keep that cum coming, and in fact, I just released The Prince and the Frat Boy with *tons* of it. It really does make me happy to be told my writing abilities are “fantastic”—especially after years thinking smut wasn’t “good writing”—so, thanks a ton! @Jack
9/21/21, 2:40 PM
Wow! This is a really creative setting!

9/21/21, 11:25 PM
@bluesuedewho That’s high praise to me, knowing how cool your ideas are, too! I can’t claim it as entirely my own—I developed it with friends a year or so ago and have been fleshing out ever since. I’m excited to explore it with y’all and I hope you continue to enjoy the ideas!

9/21/21, 11:45 PM
I'm particularly intrigued by Firecrackers! :eyes: I've re-read this a couple times to make sure I'm getting all the world-building clues about the different castes (or whatever the in-universe term is for the different types of guys). Hopefully we get to see more of Johnny in future chapters! @Soren Fitz

9/22/21, 7:26 AM
@bluesuedewho You’re a good reader! Trust that your efforts to get clues are not in vain. I’m no Steven Erikson, but I still like giving the readers some ideas about what’s coming next before I explicitly explain it. Also, I’m over the moon that you reread it! 🥰

9/22/21, 6:06 PM
Okay, I read it again and I have a bonkers theory about Firecrackers based on Robbie seeming to disappear and reappear. I think Firecrackers can temporarily turn the guys they fuck into cum? (Which has cleaning properties, hence "treating" the house). Then the guy reforms after some time? Looking forward to the next chapter! @Soren Fitz

9/22/21, 6:25 PM
You are *so* close. However, there’s a part of it that I changed a little later that I unfortunately forgot to clue in as part of this chapter, so the full answer will be revealed soon… But your bonkers theory is so close to right that I’m screaming, heh. @bluesuedewho