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9/9/21, 6:31 PM
It's pretty rare that I tear up when reading a story on these sites. But this is one of them. Kudos to Soren Fitz for effecting a change not only in the subject, but in the person that's trying to change him. Very rewarding story!

9/22/21, 6:36 PM
Oh my god, that’s sweet—I didn’t realise my story had that potential to evoke emotion on that level, although I’ll admit I felt something too when I wrote the moment he ran for the picture on the wall. I’m all about growth for all the characters involved—so I’m glad that shined through. Thanks for reading! @nycboot
9/9/21, 9:12 AM
Well, now I'm over here wondering when I'm going to get *my* big-dicked muscle husband! Very hot sex scene, I loved the quantity of cum, and I cannot wait to see your next story. You have fantastic writing abilities, and this story is a HUGE boost to GCS.

9/22/21, 6:30 PM
I’m wondering that too! Crossing my fingers for both of us. Trust that I’ll keep that cum coming, and in fact, I just released The Prince and the Frat Boy with *tons* of it. It really does make me happy to be told my writing abilities are “fantastic”—especially after years thinking smut wasn’t “good writing”—so, thanks a ton! @Jack
9/21/21, 2:40 PM
Wow! This is a really creative setting!

9/21/21, 11:25 PM
@bluesuedewho That’s high praise to me, knowing how cool your ideas are, too! I can’t claim it as entirely my own—I developed it with friends a year or so ago and have been fleshing out ever since. I’m excited to explore it with y’all and I hope you continue to enjoy the ideas!

9/21/21, 11:45 PM
I'm particularly intrigued by Firecrackers! :eyes: I've re-read this a couple times to make sure I'm getting all the world-building clues about the different castes (or whatever the in-universe term is for the different types of guys). Hopefully we get to see more of Johnny in future chapters! @Soren Fitz

9/22/21, 7:26 AM
@bluesuedewho You’re a good reader! Trust that your efforts to get clues are not in vain. I’m no Steven Erikson, but I still like giving the readers some ideas about what’s coming next before I explicitly explain it. Also, I’m over the moon that you reread it! 🥰

9/22/21, 6:06 PM
Okay, I read it again and I have a bonkers theory about Firecrackers based on Robbie seeming to disappear and reappear. I think Firecrackers can temporarily turn the guys they fuck into cum? (Which has cleaning properties, hence "treating" the house). Then the guy reforms after some time? Looking forward to the next chapter! @Soren Fitz

9/22/21, 6:25 PM
You are *so* close. However, there’s a part of it that I changed a little later that I unfortunately forgot to clue in as part of this chapter, so the full answer will be revealed soon… But your bonkers theory is so close to right that I’m screaming, heh. @bluesuedewho
9/22/21, 3:30 PM
I loved this chapter, even with no super crazy edits making an impact it was very interesting to see a sort of glimpse into the possible other magical forces of this planet with Alice. The scene with Marc using his magic dick for good was also amazing! I loved the cliffhanger with Gabe disappearing and I also wonder what Gabe's edit was that he made in the bathroom. Keep up the awesome work!
9/22/21, 1:41 PM
Well, Alice was an unexpected delight. "Cattywampus," I mean, honestly. I will admit that I was missing the sex in this chapter, but overall I'm still very invested in how all of this plays out. I'm intrigued as to how the tutoring edit affected reality to the point that Gabe was no longer beside Sam after he made that (retroactive) change. My guess is he's giving or getting tutoring, and had a session booked in his schedule, and now he has two sets of memories for the same time frame (seeing Marc go all superhero at the book store, and having sexy tutor time), which will only confuse things further.

9/22/21, 3:23 PM
The next chapter (posting this week, fingers crossed) has a lot more sex that this chapter sets up. I wanted to let the plot reveals breathe a bit. @Noam de Pluma
9/22/21, 11:28 AM
I'm excited for this to debut, you've been so enthusiastic about it on the Discord! This is hot as hell and I'm very *very* excited to see more of it! Well done, man!

9/22/21, 1:56 PM
@Dace I’m excited about your enthusiasm! (The italics on “very” really took the cake for me.) It warms my heart to know you find it so hot. I’m looking forward to getting everyone more!
9/22/21, 4:05 AM
Since this is the 4th edition of "Sexuality," I'm wondering we'll get a prequel/sequel with the 1st-3rd/5th edition :) *crosses fingers*
9/21/21, 6:06 PM
This was really nicely written -- hot, kept up the pacing, delivered on the exposition of the world. Great work! I look forward to more!

9/22/21, 1:07 AM
@time.to.occur Hey, I really appreciate that! I worked hard on the pacing and I’m glad I kept it hot. I’m also glad the exposition worked out—I wanted to keep things readable without revealing everything, but also providing what readers really needed. I hope to deliver with the next chapters!
9/22/21, 12:26 AM
The last scene really nails the balance between sweet and hot! I loved it!
9/20/21, 8:31 AM
Ah, just as good as I remember 😂. Definitely intrigued to see what happens next.

9/21/21, 10:44 PM
@Norismo Thanks for reading it again! And I’m always happy for comments. I’m looking forward to writing more and evolving this story in great directions. Thanks for the help, too!
9/20/21, 7:59 PM
I could not disagree more with the folks who feel like this story has lost its way. I am enjoying every chapter more than the last! The way the edits are spiraling out of control as Sam gets deeper and deeper into gay horny 24/7 territory is brilliant, and the worldbuilding and backstory you've created is masterful. I want to know more about the government(?) agency that's investigating this stuff, about the matching shawl crew who all used the magic textbook together, about the deeper ramifications of the existence of these reality altering objects. I love the slight turn it's taking toward the end game of Sam accepting turning gay, with Gabe nudging him with support, but I also love the resistance he continues to put up. I know it's partly hyperbolic chest thumping when he declares himself the straightest dude on campus, but I also like to believe it's true and exactly the reason he keeps getting whammied so fucking hard. The straighter the dude, the more the edits hit him, and Sam is straighter than anyone. ;) Anyway, I will keep reading this story for as long as you want to keep writing it!

9/21/21, 4:56 PM
Thanks! The next chapter is mostly the sex scenes set up in this one, but there's definitely more plot reveals on the way! @Curiosity
Gambit
9/21/21, 4:08 PM
OMG!!! what a tease. really enjoying the story line. Looking forward for the next chapter.
9/19/21, 9:50 PM
Super sexy and fun story. So many elements of it had me going "ooh yeah!" So yeah, great stuff. Looking forward to seeing more in the story. There is much here that hits the stop!

9/21/21, 3:40 PM
@Heru Kane I’m glad it hit the spot for you. It definitely hits it for me and I had a ton of fun writing it! I hope you enjoy all the rest, too.
Jonanator
9/19/21, 8:59 PM
Awesome story. My main question is, will Marco fall in love with Prince Ariel when he comes? I hope I don't have to wit to long to find out. Can't wait for the next chapter.

9/21/21, 3:11 AM
@Jonanator I’m glad you liked it! Things aren’t going to be resolved so easily, unfortunately—but I think it’ll be fun reading, and there won’t be long-term unresolved drama. I can’t wait to finish and publish the next one! (Except I can, because I have to in order not to write it badly.)

Jonanator
9/21/21, 3:22 AM
@Soren Fitz ok then. can't wait
Anonymous
9/20/21, 10:52 PM
Love Steve's oblivious transformation so far! Looking forward to part 3!
9/20/21, 11:32 AM
It would be so cruel and funny if Melanie had already been turned gay due to the earlier edits when Sam goes to date her. Although this makes me wonder a few things about this world. Obviously it leans towards making people gay, but how are bi and trans people affected?

9/20/21, 1:42 PM
More people realize that they're bi with experimentation being more common. I haven't thought much about how trans people would be affected since none of the characters are trans, but presumably they'd be more likely to be gay or bi in this reality. @RainbowMika91
Jonanator
9/16/21, 9:53 PM
Nice story. I loved it.

9/20/21, 12:05 PM
Thanks, @Jonanator

Jonanator
9/20/21, 12:07 PM
@BobbyBlobfish welcome. it was awesome. I hope to post today, so be on the lookout. Hope to see more Stories like this. I'm a huge fan of you.
9/16/21, 8:15 PM
First time rating on a GCS story, didn't know they have a romance rate instead of mind control. Love the story! 💙💙💙💙 winder how they will continue they relationship? did mermans have their equivalent to human sex? 🤔

9/20/21, 12:04 PM
@Math_Reez 💙 Now that I think about it, they were talking on whether or not they would have sex in that boat ending. At the time, I though a merman would have like a snake a retractable penis. Kelen would be a little weirded out but would have said to Aske that he could use his song to ease him at first. But now, I did my research. Most fishes have sexual organs under their bellies, but with a lot it grow during mating season. So maybe Aske would actually have something like that, but near where a penis is located. And during the reproduction, the female let her eggs fall into the sand (several thousands in one go!) while the male rub himself against the female, letting his sperms touches most of the eggs. So I guess during sex, Aske would humps against Kelen? But it would maybe feel sexual desire some parts of the year? Honestly, I tend to write relationships that are either sexual or romantic, weirdly enough. So I choose to not think too much about it, besides the "it would be weird, and Kelen would need to get used to it". One of the reason I had him think the relationship wouldn't necessarily works on the long term was actually the question of how they could have sex.
9/20/21, 6:47 AM
really like this so far good job i wonder if you're going to do anything for like sam alexander nova or maybe somebody like tim drake robin
9/18/21, 6:21 PM
Normally I don't explain easter eggs in my stories, but in case anyone wonders what song Alice's alarms are singing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R-FxmoVM7X4&ab_channel=TheArkive

9/19/21, 11:13 AM
@bluesuedewho i got it right away! definitely was not expecting an Electric Six reference in my erotica today.

9/20/21, 1:41 AM
And I certainly didn't expect to write one when I started this story! @Dcguy
9/19/21, 7:58 AM
I love how random and bizarre this story gets sometimes. The weirder the better for me! The stormbringer dick was just *chef's kiss*

9/20/21, 1:40 AM
Glad you're enjoying it! @Norismo
9/19/21, 10:16 PM
They keep mentioning the horny water, but they've stopped accidentally drinking it! Gabe doesn't seem too distracted as Sam is, even though it is a burden for him. If Sam wants to blow him more, he might want to sneak him a few glasses ;)
9/7/21, 12:03 PM
I don't think I have ever read such an amazing turn around from a story that started out with a bully. I was bullied as a kid. Incredibly hot and thought provoking!

9/19/21, 4:56 PM
@Cutlerfan I am so sorry that you experienced that, but I hope this was a more hopeful story for you! I don't know how other "bully" stories tend to go, but redemption is my biggest and most beloved theme, so this one went just as I intended. Also, I'm definitely over the moon that it's both hot and *thought-provoking.* Smut can be art too! Let the world know! Glad you enjoyed.

9/19/21, 6:54 PM
Oh yes, it was a very hopeful story! @Soren Fitz
9/9/21, 2:44 AM
I really enjoyed this! Loved how you incorporated some growth, and I really appreciate the depth you went in the storylines for the characters you created. Very fun read!

9/19/21, 4:57 PM
@Razz TFs Heh, I know my audience! (I think!) I thought people would enjoy the growth bits, and it was fun to add them in. I'm always intending to give the characters in my stories depth and meaning, even when they're also being subjected to the smuttiest of outcomes, so I'm glad that shined through, and I'm hoping to keep doing that in future, even smuttier stories, heh. Thanks for the comment, and I'm happy you had fun!
9/6/21, 9:12 PM
Such an incredibly hot, well-written story! You're a gifted writer. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

9/19/21, 4:54 PM
@Hypnoguy67 I'm glad you enjoyed it! I know it's not usual GSS fare, so it's good to hear things like "wonderful" anyway.
Anonymous
9/19/21, 3:36 AM
i was gonna wait until the whole thing was done to start this, but it looked too exciting and i couldn't help myself. and man, i'm glad i jumped in!! i think i just have too soft a spot for plot, really, especially slightly wild ones. and this story is doing a great job depicting a wishes-gone-wrong scenario that starts really ripping reality apart. there's a sort of worldbuilding through destruction that i really enjoy here. i also have a soft spot for sam's progression. he doesn't feel like a regular guy being thoughtless to me so much as like. somebody who's had so many compounding mental changes that continue to bump into each other that he's not really... capable of thinking things through so to speak. it's not an iq drain practically, but functionally that's what happens when you're extremely sexually keyed up all the time and haven't been able to adjust to fundamental changes to your psyche. and so it makes him more likely to rush into things which makes the whole situation worse. and if there's one thing i like in reality bending stories, it's Difficult Cycles To Work Your Way Out Of. I understand the other feedback and think they would also make for very interesting versions of this story, but personally I like where this is heading a lot. Really excited for part 2 of the chapter, and for the rest of the story in general!!!

9/19/21, 4:06 AM
Thanks! I think that's a really good explanation of how Sam's probably thinking (or failing to think). The next chapter will post sometime next week! @
9/19/21, 2:11 AM
This story is much more chaotic than most stories I prefer, but I actually really like it! It's so different with all the wild unpredictability. To me, it really makes it fun and sexy. Marc is my favorite character and I just want to slap Sam and make him give in to the massive, kind muscle stud. But it is hard to get over those long-built up rivalries in your mind. And the fact that so many edits seem to be making Marc even more powerful in various ways, I love it! My only nitpick, I would really appreciate some sort of indication of just how BIG Marc and Gabe are. Sam constantly comments on how big and muscular they are, can we get a stat or two? Height and/or weight? Or the size of their cocks? :) Thanks for a great and unique story.

9/19/21, 2:38 AM
Thanks, it's planned chaos, I can assure you! And I'm enjoying adding edits pumping up Marc into an irresistible force of nature. I'm *terrible* with picturing what specific height/weight combos look like. I know what the characters look like it my head, but my brain doesn't naturally think to assign specific stats. I imagine they're not *impossibly* huge, just pushing the edge. Don't hold me to these numbers, but rough ballpark, above 6' 6" but under 7', and over 250 lb but under 300 lb? Cocks maybe between 11 and 13 inches long? @dredlifter

9/19/21, 3:40 AM
@bluesuedewho Thanks for the insight! I do bodybuilding myself so I love stats. I completely understand your on the weight. Truthfully, as muscular guys get taller and taller their weights increase a lot faster than you would think. A really big 6'6 bodybuilder would weigh around 300 lbs. A 6'6 muscle jock would be around 250-270. For the sake of your story, just sticking with heights is more than sufficient to help us fill in the gaps, thank you! I also enjoy things like relating their heights to objects. A typical door is 6'8. If they have to duck through the door that gives us an idea of how huge they are! If you ever want some help determining height and weights for big guys in your future stories I'd be happy to help on request! :)

9/19/21, 4:05 AM
Thanks! That's very helpful for someone like me who loves muscle, but is bad with both spatial awareness and measurements. I really like stats when characters are into stats (I can recall reading some really hot measuring scenes) but I don't have much real world experience to inform myself! I figured my weights were more likely to be off than heights. I know muscle is significantly heavier than fat, so a big muscular guy is going to weigh a lot more than height/weight tables would suggest. @dredlifter
9/19/21, 3:00 AM
I've been really drawn to this story, I enjoy the somewhat chaotic progression of the reality edits, the ways that the poorly conceived edits bounce off each other. Many of the individual edits are very very sexy, and I even enjoy the subtle way we're being introduced to the idea that Sam is getting kind of stupid. So I disagree with the more negative comments. But I seriously wish there were more moments of actual, gay, penetrative sex, between two gay men. I'm with everyone else who is eagerly awaiting Sam and Marc finally fucking, but I wish you would slow down a bit, let some of the changes breathe a bit and show us how these wild changes impact Gabe and tertiary characters. The pole dancing major was a fun and sexy idea, but hurrying past this for more and more changes and hurtling toward plot development is a mossed opportunity - this is just one example. Would you ever consider chapters or longer asides that are not from Sam's perspective?

9/19/21, 3:18 AM
Thank you! The chaos is definitely intended to be a feature! Sam was a bit dense at the beginning -- it's not so much that he's getting dumber as the story progresses, he just has lots of sexy distractions from edits. Penetrative sex is going to happen soon (although Sam will still insist that he's "straight"). Some changes, like the pole dancing edit serve multiple purposes! In this chapter, it's meant to show that Sam's edit had immediate unintended consequences, but that change will also definitely ripple forward into future chapters! Sam's pole dancing major is a major feature in a future installment. On the subject of asides, I have at least two "bonus" chapters in drafts, one from Marc's perspective. No ETA on those, but they're in the works! @brium
9/19/21, 3:00 AM
What a lovely surprise to see another chapter of this story! I'm quite intrigued by the plot that's developing. What's up with the black suits? What kind of magic does Alice have? What happened to Gabe at the end? I personally love how much more complex the plot outside the two guys has gotten, while Gabe and Sam are continuing to edit the book without a care in the world. I do kind of hate how we don't find out Gabe's edits right away, though. I want to know what he changes, but I guess that's the problem (if you can call it a problem) with following the perspective of only one character. One of my favorite things about this was the description of just how infatuated Sam is becoming with Marc. Especially the description of Marc's bicep. Yum. I could picture it so clearly in my mind. I also liked Marc's "disguise." It felt very Clark Kent and it makes me want Sam to be his Lois Lane. I'm still hoping they get together. Or if nothing else, that Marc gets a happy ending. He's so sweet and I might be more invested in his story than I should be. The only complaint I have, really, is that even though the chapter ended with a nice cliffhanger, something felt missing. I can't put a finger on what, though. I think it might have been a lack of sex? Either way, great chapter, and I eagerly await more.

9/19/21, 3:11 AM
Thanks! Next chapter will be out soon and answer at least one of those questions! It will also be heavier on the sex (I realize this chapter just has some masturbation/light oral). Maybe I should have left the whole chapter in one chunk, it was just *so* long and had so many different scenes that I thought it would be a good idea to let the plot reveals breathe a bit. Maybe let readers speculate a bit. The next chapter (and sex scene) will be soon! @Proteus
9/19/21, 2:27 AM
love it. dive more into the mind control aspect of the necklace.