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10/16/21, 12:07 AM
Been eagerly awaiting this. Amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter.
10/15/21, 10:02 PM
Awww, this was such a sweet little story. Selfishly, I want to say it was too short. Loved it.
10/15/21, 9:04 AM
That was incredible. I loved it and so well written. Looking forward to the next chapter.
10/15/21, 8:35 AM
this just gets better with each chapter. the inclusion of Sam was a nice surprise I can see one dad fucking his boy and one dad getting fucked on the future,let's see if my predictions are right
Jonanator
10/15/21, 3:57 AM
hotttt. Can't wait for more. This is oned of my favorites
10/15/21, 3:41 AM
Excellent writing on a fantastic story. Yes, more chapters please!
Jonanator
10/15/21, 3:38 AM
Loved this chapter. This is one of my favorite stories. Hope more is coming.
10/15/21, 2:25 AM
This was the hottest chapter yet. Looking forward to Tanner's visits to the other families.
10/14/21, 11:45 PM
One of the hottest stories I have ever read. PLEASE keep them coming.
10/14/21, 11:44 PM
An exciting highly erotic story. This father should join the pastor as a parent rep. in the church boy's club. Hope Tanner continues to influence the behavior of the club members: including group masturbation [led by the pastor], perhaps some 'fun' in the church rest-room, the development of some individual kinks & perversions among the different boy's, heavy exhibitionism, 'piss'-play, extreme size worship & humiliation of the un-hung boy's, etc: lots more heavy swearing, smoking...just total perversion & corruption !!!!!
Jonanator
10/14/21, 9:12 PM
you should do another chapter to this.
10/14/21, 8:14 PM
This story gets hotter with every chapter!
Anonymous
10/14/21, 5:33 PM
This is sooooo hot. The way Tanner corrupts the father and brothers is so sexy. Thank you so much for this great addition to the series.
10/4/21, 3:47 PM
Love this series! I keep checking back since I can't wait for the next part. loving the corruption element and can't wait to see what else is in store!

10/4/21, 4:32 PM
@Kurtis311 Hey, thanks man...feeling a little down about writing in general and this story in particular, and your comment was really well-timed to give me a shot of enthusiasm and self-confidence. Really appreciate it.

Anonymous
10/9/21, 6:09 PM
@S. Q. Neemie Just spent the last few days reading your stories, lol, and I love them! You really nailed what I love about incest and corruption kink.

10/14/21, 1:48 PM
@ Hey, dude, really glad you enjoy them. They've been fun to write. :)
10/6/21, 10:07 PM
Saw you were a little down on this story and a lot of people going anti-Tanner here in the comments and thought I'd drop by and offer some encouragement. I've been a reader of this site for a long time (only have one story written, how do you get ANY writing done when you're turned on?! I'm literally a professional writer and my dick just goes "then just write that they have sex and say the end so you can touch yourself dude" basically every time I try to write a fantasy down) and my favorite stories are the ones that serve as metaphors for queerness. I don't know about you, but I thought I was straight until I hit puberty and my own personal Tanner came along and showed me, over and over, how very wrong I was. This is one of, if not the hottest stories on this site for me. If it was real life, or a non-erotic story, I'd be anti-Tanner too, he's a psychopath. But as fantasy? Let me tell you, I was actually a little disappointed to find out in this chapter that there's ANY sort of chance he loses. I love how he seems to derive power from embarrassment and humiliation, and the way he forces his victims' minds to justify everything he puts them through but lets them keep that nagging sense that something's NOT QUITE RIGHT HERE. The scene where he's got all of the boys kissing and play-wrestling like boy band porn twinks then REMINDS them of how much they shouldn't be doing it is one of the sexiest, most honestly RELATABLE mindfucks I've ever read here. I especially loved how Ethan gave in almost right away, all Tanner had to do was poke at his need to be seen as cool. And that little note of hope in Devon's voice as he hesitantly ASKS Tanner if they can keep kissing in secret? Perfection. So yeah, this is buttering you up a bit, but man I love what you've done with this story so far. And if Tanner has to lose (and he probably does, that "dead wife" comment is a real heel turn, even for an already established villain,) I hope it doesn't happen for a long, LONG (hard) time. And if I could possibly offer one teeny suggestion? I think the sacred circle needs to learn the power of sexing themselves up, wearing more revealing clothes. In public. But that's just a suggestion. I LOVE this story.

10/14/21, 1:46 PM
@SillyBoyz Hey, thanks man, I really appreciate it. I couldn't have written the next chapter without encouragement. Here's hoping it doesn't disappoint!
10/13/21, 5:24 AM
An interesting plot twist.

10/13/21, 5:29 AM
@Cutlerfan as long as you don't call me M. Night Ramalamadingdong, we're good. 😂

10/13/21, 6:25 PM
@Uncle Arctos No, I like a bit of a twist but nothing as extreme as M. Night's work.
10/13/21, 1:50 AM
Whit and Sid are incredibly hot, but mean as fuck and scary. I got a chuckle at the thought of either of them showing up to work as a 500 lbs. hulk - I don't think that's going to fly! I wonder whether Sid will leave Whit as an emaciated zombie or absorb him completely the way Whit was planning to do to him. Of course I feel sorry for their victims, Bobby in particular. Jimmy, well. Jimmy needs to *do something*. Of course this chapter was about Sid and Whit, but so far Jimmy has really just been acted upon. As a protagonist, he's coming off like the Twilight girl. That's assuming he's meant to be the protagonist! Maybe this story is about Sid and Whit - the story did start with Whit after all.

10/13/21, 5:16 AM
@amul Ass to a 500 lb Whit and going to work, well when you're high on that muscle growth you don't think about reality even if you should. Let's just say the medallion is fulfilling their desires and maybe the rush of getting everything you want has them a little addled. How many bad decisions are made when you're high on something because you thought it was a good idea at the time? Fear not gentle readers all will be revealed.

10/13/21, 10:01 AM
@Uncle Arctos Well yeah, I probably would offer my ass to a 500 lbs. Whit. I'm only human, after all. ;-) Can't wait to see what happens next!
10/12/21, 9:19 PM
Awesome story,hope there's more.
10/12/21, 2:29 AM
Very nice story. No matter how much a cunt Charlie was in his past life, I can't tolerate the idea of cursing someone to turn into a dog and having their only thought be "I'm a bad dog". That fucking broke my heart.
10/12/21, 12:48 AM
The term "fuckboy" is anachronistic for the period you portrayed here. I know you're playing in a slightly adjacent alternate universe. I just provide this information as an FYI. It's a good idea to nail down little dialogue details like this when you are going to time jump a story. It can really help sell a jump, or possibly confuse it. Almost all of the curse words that we use now existed in the 70s, 80s, and 90s but people used them less. The further back you go the less frequently they were used and the more shocking they were to the ear.
10/12/21, 12:35 AM
The dog arguing through the kids toy was hilarious but from the perspective of the barista it would have been terrifying. Also, intelligent people take it seriously when a dog communicates (through available means) that they do not like you.
10/11/21, 11:15 PM
What a great pup story. Most, if not all, dog transformation stories are against their will (not complaining). However, you broke that mould by telling a perfect story of transformation and romance, tender but also dark with Charles' past human side. It ended beautifully. 5 Woofs.
10/11/21, 3:43 AM
Damn! This story had me hard right at the beginning! Excellent descriptive writing, Sir. Your attention to detail draws you into the story and keeps you there, lusting for more. I read on for more hairy muscle domination.....
Anonymous
9/25/21, 11:43 AM
waiting for sam and marc have more moments together

9/25/21, 8:35 PM
They get some scenes in the next chapter! @

10/9/21, 7:54 PM
Yay!!!!@bluesuedewho

10/11/21, 12:32 AM
@bluesuedewho yesssss
Anonymous
10/9/21, 6:06 PM
Was just reading this again and this is insanely hot! I can't stop reading it. The way Tanner corrupts Pastor Peter gets me going every time I come back to it.
10/8/21, 11:08 PM
As you know I respect this story and loved it so far. That said, this chapter of jumping back and forth was confusing. I have a slight clue of what's going on (Charlie the dog is Charles the douchebag?) So many first person narratives. I'm glad other readers understood and enjoyed.
Martin
10/5/21, 9:38 PM
Such a cute and hot story... one both feels sad and happy for Nate at the same time :)

10/6/21, 12:39 PM
It’s always an honour when you read my stories, heh. I’m glad you liked it! More is coming, and Nate’s story has some unfolding to do. @Martin
Jonanator
10/5/21, 11:49 AM
nice Story. hope there is more coming.

10/6/21, 9:26 AM
Hi @Jonanator, thanks for your comment - I'm gonna take a bit of a break for now, let my brain cook up some new ideas. But I'll be back when I have a new story! In the meantime, @MisterXIX and I will, at some point continue with our co-written story "The Devil by My Side"!

Jonanator
10/6/21, 10:45 AM
@HunkLover ok, no problem 🙂
10/2/21, 1:35 AM
Another 5 star rating in every category!!! Such a hot and tender story. I was so scared when he went into the bookstore, he would lose Charlie. I panicked when he panicked thinking the worse. And I think something is up with that bookstore. And many thanks for the shout out in your comment above.

10/6/21, 9:46 AM
I think you might be onto something there, @PupScout! Plus, you deserved the shoutout - love your stories!
9/29/21, 12:17 AM
Bravo! What a great story. I love the dog calling cock his "tail." Sweet, hot and innocent. 5 Woofs.

10/6/21, 9:44 AM
Thanks @PupScout! I'll be aiming to get more 5 Woof ratings!