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Slave Abdamelek
10/22/21, 6:53 PM
No. But since the Pharaoh's Army has grown into massive numbers, our collective mind easily permeates all men who are physically close to us. This is why they feel our feelings, and our greatest fear, that of the Enemy, quickly invades them, and intensifies with the thought of abandoning our Pharaoh's protection.
Anonymous
10/21/21, 5:58 AM
Amazing! Will we be seeing Sam in his pole dancing classes? And since there are two models in each class, plus tutoring, will we see him gaining knowledge through sex? I can also see him "accidentally" intentionally make an edit in the heat of the moment he would regret...if he didn't enjoy it too much!

10/21/21, 4:55 PM
Thanks! There will definitely be some pole dancing at some point. I honestly have more ideas than I can realistically fit into the planned story without derailing the plot. I'm thinking I'll probably write some "bonus chapters." I already have one in the works from Marc's perspective. @

10/22/21, 4:24 AM
@bluesuedewho Oh this really excites me! Can't wait to read!
10/19/21, 9:53 PM
Really great series, looking forward to seeing where this ends up!

10/21/21, 4:53 PM
Thanks! @HornyFurryCub
Team Gabe
10/16/21, 2:49 PM
Apologies if fanfic is not not up to snuff. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I heard Gabe snort with disgust as he slapped his laptop closed. “What’s the matter bro, your favorite DILF Dom site down?” I looked up from my statistics homework and saw a look of worry, his eminently kissable lips pursed and his manly brow pulled down in a frown. “Shut up, Sam – No, its just I am worried the last edit may have affected this guy Blue.” “Blue?” “It’s just a pen name, like in “Love, Simon” OK? He writes really good stuff, but since the Sexercise edit, it been, like forever since he’s updated and now …” “… and now your hero is a buffed-up sex machine too busy to update his website or whatever? Here, let me see.” I walk around our table for a closer look. Gabe didn’t sit back from his laptop so I had to straddle his massive thigh on tiptoe just to get between his knees, my ass clenching at the momentary heat coming off him. I looked the web page entries over and my brain flashed on Danny’s fat cock for a moment, then the magic started. “Bro, look, the range between updates remains unchanged at 26 and it’s only been 21 days since the last update, way below the current maximum 29.” I felt Gabe lean forward behind me, one massive pec directly behind my neck as he edged to the left to look closely. “Ok Spanky, you are right for once,” giving my butt a playful swat. “But look, the mean is already over 11, and it’s very distracting.” I flushed and said too quickly “Yes, 11 can be very distracting,” paused to bite my lip then continued “or it can become very distracted?” Gabe voice drops into the most toe curling octive, “Heh. Somebody needs to apologize for trying to use statistics to distract me.” I smile to myself as I turn around and get on my knees. “Yeah bro, I don’t know what I was thinking. Let me apologize, like, properly.”

10/21/21, 4:53 PM
Oh wow! This is an incredibly flattering comment! I love it! The next chapter has been mostly written for a long time, I've just been too distracted by IRL issues to wrap up some scenes in the middle. Another week, tops, and I should be done. @Team Gabe
10/14/21, 6:52 PM
I can't wait for the next section! Also, I wanted to ask about this edit: "Consistent and plentiful sexual activity stimulates a similar response to the body’s development, growth, and health as cardio, size, and strength training, in a way that allows one’s body to reach its peak physical state without ever peaking into excessive or unhealthy territory. The effectiveness of sex as exercise positively correlates with dick size." Does this mean everyone will become a jock? I would LOVE to see a world where all men are buffed up hunks and all women are amazons, as well as all into each other. It would be a dream come true :)

10/21/21, 4:51 PM
There will definitely be lots more buff people running around, but it won't be everybody. Just like you have to spend a lot of time in the gym to build muscle, this edit would let people build muscle with lots of time having sex. @RainbowMika91
10/20/21, 6:50 PM
Very hot. looking forward to more about the hunters storyline too!
10/20/21, 5:27 PM
I was looking Forward to this chapter and it did not Disappoint. Please keep writing this story, I love the writing style so much.
10/20/21, 4:45 PM
super sexy, has my favorite kink AND has an adorable romantic ending! yes i love this 10/10 will be cumming again!
10/20/21, 3:22 PM
cant wait for more! phenomenal story so far
Apr 4, 2017
10/19/21, 10:32 PM
I've been looking for this story for years! I read it ages ago, and it still hits the same way. It's hot, it's romantic, and it's truly just a magical gem of a story. Thank you, Papa Werebear!

10/20/21, 5:12 AM
@Gasuda I am very glad you found it again! Thank you always nice to get feedback!
10/19/21, 11:15 PM
Hot, funny, and disturbing. Kinda conflicted about this one, obviously I knew there was something pretty sinister going on with Xander but it turned out to be pretty bad. I hope Allan can save Cody from becoming a zombie, he's such a sweet guy he just doesn't deserve that.
Conversion Enthusiast
10/19/21, 4:43 AM
I'm intrigued by the snake scales! it seems like rejection of the light automatically makes one an enemy of the pharaoh although i also cant tell if he just imagined it. i suppose ill have to wait and see but i liked this chapter! the army grows!
10/18/21, 10:07 PM
I keep coming back to this one. Tanner is a really great antagonist. Definitely a wolf in designer clothing. My favorite part of this chapter is him disappearing from all the Argyles while still taking in and influencing the show. I do have to say that I wasn't a fan of Kent. It's totally my own issues rearing their ugly heads, so take my opinion with a pinch of salt. I, personally, would have rather seen him taken down a peg or two for being a less than ideal father. Overall, though, I'm liking how each chapter gets a little bit more intense, as if Tanner's power is growing. Your descriptions of environment and characters are very well done. And I'm definitely intrigued as to what the other force that visited Blake in the other chapter is up to. (Also, I see what you did with Tanner's last name and it makes me chuckle.)
Anonymous
10/17/21, 5:07 PM
i love this story so much
10/16/21, 10:02 PM
Super excited to see this romantic dom dynamic get spicy, thanks for posting!
10/16/21, 5:26 PM
this is great, keep going please
10/16/21, 4:19 PM
Man, this was hot. And it’s not only that it’s got all of my favorite kinks, your writing prowess is especially shining in this one. It’s amazing how many great things you’re giving us with this story. Like, you’re giving us atmospheric settings that make you feel as if you were actually there. You’re giving us believable characters with unique personalities, whose traits are unraveled through their words and actions rather than from the narrator’s description of them. You’re giving us different voices, ranging from the prude and collected narrator on Pastor Johnson’s chapters to the wild and unfiltered one on the Argyle’s part. You’re giving us men with believable roles: from Kent the messy and frustrated father, Sam the protecting and encouraging older brother, to Ethan the rebellious teenage middle son who secretly wants to be just like his hero of a brother. You’re giving us hot character mental transformations, covertly directed by *Pastor* Tanner’s persuasive ways, while managing to preserve the core personality of each individual. I don’t have words to express how delightful it is to read things like this. It’s not about the sex, it’s about the perversion, the bending of morals, the road down depravity, the exploitation of the characters' existing goals, traits and needs to transform them into sinful sex obsessed creatures. Also, Tanner has rapidly become one of my most favorite characters in the MC universe. He’s able to be nice and scary, to make people feel reassured or ashamed, to elevate or dethrone them, to encourage or humiliate them, and to completely change the way the wind blows with just a few words, all for the sake of his selfish hunger for major corruption and depravity. Thank you so much for creating this series. Really. I’m having a great time! I’m looking forward for the next installments :D
10/16/21, 3:03 PM
You said I'd like this chapter and, yeah, that was hot as fuck haha. Can't wait to see how Robert fits in (hopefully literally) with the boys. Thanks for posting!
leonardo
10/16/21, 12:20 PM
Great story, an unescapable fate for Robert
Anonymous
10/16/21, 11:24 AM
scorchio!!!
10/16/21, 8:15 AM
Wonderful! My favorite focus for mind control stories is the seduction, the inexorable loss of control one step at a time, with the submissive often well aware but unable to effectively save himself. i am happily off to read the next chapter!
10/16/21, 7:48 AM
Holy *shit* that was intense. Looking forward to more as it comes!
10/16/21, 12:07 AM
Been eagerly awaiting this. Amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter.
10/15/21, 10:02 PM
Awww, this was such a sweet little story. Selfishly, I want to say it was too short. Loved it.
10/15/21, 9:04 AM
That was incredible. I loved it and so well written. Looking forward to the next chapter.
10/15/21, 8:35 AM
this just gets better with each chapter. the inclusion of Sam was a nice surprise I can see one dad fucking his boy and one dad getting fucked on the future,let's see if my predictions are right
Jonanator
10/15/21, 3:57 AM
hotttt. Can't wait for more. This is oned of my favorites
10/15/21, 3:41 AM
Excellent writing on a fantastic story. Yes, more chapters please!
Jonanator
10/15/21, 3:38 AM
Loved this chapter. This is one of my favorite stories. Hope more is coming.
10/15/21, 2:25 AM
This was the hottest chapter yet. Looking forward to Tanner's visits to the other families.