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5/11/22, 8:54 PM
Time, this is absolutely unreasonably _pretty_, and I found myself drawn inexorably through the story by the writing. I’ve half a mind to continue reading—though I’m busy, so I don’t know—there’s so much here I look forward to unpacking. You did marvellously.

5/12/22, 3:08 AM
@Soren Fitz Ahh, thank you so much! I'm glad you felt drawn in -- I hope you do decide to continue, when time allows. There are some parts with hypnosis you may want to skip (that's fine so long as you have the context around them), but I think there's a lot more that you would probably enjoy between Sawyer and Lock.
5/12/22, 1:28 AM
As always, you've done an amazing job. Love this chapater, and the love between each brother is as palpable as always. Can't wait for the next part.
5/11/22, 10:12 PM
God you are such an amazing writer. Brilliant chapter!!
Azuri Foxcoon
5/11/22, 8:27 PM
I loved all of if. The reenacting of the encounter…the love…the drama, all so very wonderful. It’s very good. I always love reading your stories! Keep it up ❤️
5/11/22, 8:01 PM
I loved the main introduction of the villain, and the role play too. So sad this series is drawing to a close.
5/11/22, 7:56 AM
A hidden gem like this is exactly what Book Club was made for.

5/11/22, 1:56 PM
@Norismo Thank you! That means a lot to me! This is a story that wrote itself into a very different direction than I expected!
5/10/22, 8:20 AM
Your characterisation is on point. I hate the mother quite completely, and she only had a few lines! I will definitely be checking out the rest of this series.

5/10/22, 12:32 PM
@Norismo thank you for reading! The mother is just... we'll see very soon. Thinks should begin getting interesting and fun soon, and I'm glad you're in for the ride.
5/10/22, 3:41 AM
Great job! Looking forward to this story, and glad you decided to start writing.

5/10/22, 12:27 PM
@GruffGinger a great compliment coming from you! You know I'm a fan. The full story is pretty much cooked up, not I just need to write it down. Thanks for reading, and welcome for the ride.
5/9/22, 5:06 PM
Oooh this is already quite the strong start! I can't wait to read what happens next.

5/9/22, 5:09 PM
@Twan Andersen surprised to find your comment! Thank you for reading, let's see what happens.
5/9/22, 12:37 PM
Another great chapter!

5/9/22, 12:56 PM
@ConversionEnthusiast thamk you so much, Brother. Hail Pharaoh

5/9/22, 1:12 PM
@Slave Darius Hail Pharaoh! May many blades strike down the hidden enemy. Once they reveal themselves so shall we.

5/9/22, 1:30 PM
@ConversionEnthusiast and may the ones who are stricken down whilst in their bondage receive the gift of life from our Father and rise again to serve Him.
Evan
5/9/22, 7:37 AM
Quite a start. It is aching to know these three men had found someone to confide themselves in and find a comfort in life at a very alienating time. And yet, it seems it did not go well. The story and behaviours read very believably like the era. I am brought to mind of some period pieces I've seen and I so easily see the well-to-do splashing money about to keep separated and proper. And the way they address one another. Stiffly formal and last names as what they call one another. I enjoyed the call-out that the intent from Lock was not formality and propriety but a barrier. The emotion is so raw in all of it. From the unveiling of his own desires and denials to the clear heartbreak of loss. It is a difficult read and yet so wonderfully written. Not to mention, a cruel mystery of what happened teasing one to push through that woe in morbid curiosity.

5/9/22, 1:05 PM
@Evan Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story! It's one I love a lot even though it's a bit of a misfit. I worked hard to research the language of the era. I wanted to get at that confusion and sincere desire and denial of self. I hope I'm not being too cruel in spurring you forward and that you'll enjoy the rewards along the way 💖
5/9/22, 8:54 AM
Hey there, I know this was suppose to be a sexy story but I just ended up feeling so sad for Sam and was so sad that Sam couldn't have such a great man like Mark in his life to father him through his 20s and early 30s. You have done an amazing job writing your characters. I really connected with both of them. I guess that's why I felt more sad than horny hahaha

5/9/22, 12:29 PM
@James Heller thanks for your kind words! Sam just got started on his journey, and I can promise he will find what he needs along the way. I hope to take you along for the ride.

5/9/22, 12:31 PM
@Essex I'm excited to join you for the ride. Thank you for writing your stories, we appreciate it!
5/9/22, 12:39 AM
So Good! Great development and nice surprises. The avatars falling in love just like that was so sweet and perfect. And the plot then thickens and I can't wait for the next chapter.
5/8/22, 7:29 AM
I love the way you write, I can see it all like I was watching Stanley Kubrick's 2001: A Space Odyssey. Congratulations, this is one of the most intriguing stories I've ever read and I can't wait to see more.

5/8/22, 6:37 PM
@Papa Werebear Thanks man! I really appreciate your feedback!
5/8/22, 6:43 AM
Hot but a bit rushed in the end, was hoping for a bit slower transformation. But I really enjoyed the mpreg in the end, too.

5/8/22, 4:35 PM
@Essex Thank you for the response! I will admit that when I get close to an ending I get a bit excited.
5/8/22, 3:17 PM
A part of me REALLY wanted Sam AND his two muscle tower friends to get fucked stupid by Mr.Taylor lol
5/8/22, 12:13 AM
Ah, that part did get lost, hiw jack get locked out of the b and b if later chapters say he lived with his mom Then again least of intentionally fuzzy details Small town gay circle of firemen...who fear pda? South is weird. News at 7
5/7/22, 7:05 PM
What a great, great great, story! Love the idea, the characters, the ship design, the sex. Such a great idea and such a great story/chapter. Also I totally like the characters, and would totally enjoy seeing Frank getting fucked. hehe So yeah, great stuff. So cool.

5/7/22, 8:46 PM
@Heru Kane Thanks for the inspiration! Like we discussed on the Discord there's lots of potential in this vein and I'm hoping to tap some! Glad you liked!
5/7/22, 8:10 AM
Hot 🔥

5/7/22, 5:27 PM
@Sentinel thank you
5/7/22, 1:51 PM
Not only is the story excellently crafted, but the world building and lore begin to shine. The story is undoubtedly sexy and our protagonist is just such a treat. I liked the shift in focus and that Finn is on the edges but not yet back into focus. The djinn consciousness was a very interesting surprise, but most of all, you started talking in gaming/mmo language and you totally got me there! I hope you continue building this up as it has a lot of promise for fun.
5/7/22, 7:48 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. So happy that you have plans for continuing this story. Definitely enjoyed the exploration of how djinns and their powers work in this universe. I would certainly enjoy a spin-off chapter that explores what other djinns have done if you ever wanted to take a break from the main story-line. Can't wait to see more!
5/6/22, 4:43 AM
Yay! The boys found their place and Jack found how to have fun with toys. And having said that, how fantastic is it that the story evokes such tenderness and brings forth such emotion? In the end they found love in their sharing of themselves in the way that works for them and reality shifts to allow it. Brilliant.

5/7/22, 7:33 AM
@Essex Thank you so much for your continued support! Jack of Hearts of loads of fun to write for sure!
5/6/22, 5:44 AM
wow
5/6/22, 4:27 AM
Loved it! Scheduled orgies, how dreary! Loved how entangled Jack and Daniel have become that even with changes they come back together. And as Jack is the Sheriff with a harem, Jack is the Fire Chief of a gay poly commune. As always, hot and sweet at the same time. A boner and the fuzzies all in one package (?).
5/6/22, 1:05 AM
Erotically creative and fun. One can't help picture it all vividly with every actor.
5/5/22, 5:45 PM
You have the awe-inducing ability of writing with an almost heteronymic style - the Norismo that writes Pokémon Himbo Sun could be a different person from the Norismo who wrote this. It shows just how _brilliant_ of a writer you are. The mixture of control and tenderness was done really, really well. Keep up the amazing work!

5/5/22, 11:01 PM
@Twan Andersen I hope you're looking forward to approving dozens more chapters in the dalton creek saga :grin: