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5/6/22, 1:05 AM
Erotically creative and fun. One can't help picture it all vividly with every actor.
5/5/22, 5:45 PM
You have the awe-inducing ability of writing with an almost heteronymic style - the Norismo that writes Pokémon Himbo Sun could be a different person from the Norismo who wrote this. It shows just how _brilliant_ of a writer you are. The mixture of control and tenderness was done really, really well. Keep up the amazing work!

5/5/22, 11:01 PM
@Twan Andersen I hope you're looking forward to approving dozens more chapters in the dalton creek saga :grin:
Martin
5/5/22, 8:47 PM
You need to x-post that series to Cupid so we can rate on "Romance" as well!
5/5/22, 1:04 AM
besides getting dr. strange caught too?, why not get the guradians of the galaxy and hulk involved too?

5/5/22, 1:56 AM
@darkblade2814 I'm planning on all of them getting involved, including the Fantastic Four...I'm just not sure about the plot of the second part. I know I don't want the necklace to become super power that can convert everybody instantly. That's why the necklace teleported everybody out as Dr. Strange can counteract the effects and Strange shielded the other superheroes.

5/5/22, 1:58 AM
@tyl7897 one idea is that the necklace gains power for each person it affects, it still needs to grind until it can affect someone like Dr. Strange or Quill

5/5/22, 2:26 AM
@darkblade2814 Yeah, maybe...I'll message you on discord if you want? So we can discuss this further?

5/5/22, 9:02 AM
@tyl7897 yes we can

5/5/22, 5:53 PM
@darkblade2814 I messaged you!!

5/5/22, 6:04 PM
@tyl7897 okay
5/4/22, 7:10 PM
This was cute. Very awww.
zenZ
4/27/22, 7:52 AM
:100: This is one of my favs! Keep up the good work!!!!

5/1/22, 11:09 PM
@zenZ Thanks! More to come at some point! It's not written, but I *do* have an ending planned for this story.
5/1/22, 2:52 AM
I almost wish the cop got an eye full of naga eyes. But very well done.
5/1/22, 12:01 AM
Another great chapter! It is not easy to keep these kinds of stories exciting and not repetitive, but you do a fantastic job of developing the characters/relationship and adding new elements. Wrestling, tickling, light vore... I like it all.
SlutForHypno
4/30/22, 11:15 PM
Very Cute. I love how Xander is forming a genuine relationship with Janus and the different ways they have sex is always neat to see. I wonder how experimental Xander would be willing to get to the point of temporarily altering his own memories for a rp lol
bigsad
4/30/22, 10:41 PM
That whole portion in the tent was just- wow! I hope these two go on more adventures outside the apartment
4/30/22, 10:12 PM
Omg, read this in one sitting and. Can I say that first off, how OVERJOYED I am to come across a story the best interspecies romance between a human and NAGA. THANK. YOU. Just. Their PERSONALITIES. and. The MESH. The way the HYPNOSIS was implemented. The hot STEAMY ACTION. HGSGSGSGSGHHHS -foams at the mouth- YOU'RE DOING REAL GOOD. 👍🏾
4/30/22, 5:54 PM
You've done it, you managed to make vore wholesome! I'm so curious how the plot is going to develop!

4/30/22, 6:02 PM
@Norismo I am going to use it for the series description, "The story that managed to make vore wholesome"
4/27/22, 11:13 PM
Thanks for the comment!!! If you want to discuss ideas for this series, I'm all open!!! If any of you have twitter, you can message me @tyl7897!!!

Anonymous
4/29/22, 9:37 AM
@tyl7897 Ah, I wonder who will become the necklace next victim.
blu
4/29/22, 4:39 AM
This good and hot keep up the good work
4/29/22, 1:55 AM
Very good! Cannot wait for what is to come!
Anonymous
4/28/22, 10:07 AM
Are… is this… Muscle Twilight?

4/28/22, 2:56 PM
Oh god lol I didn’t think about the similarities. Going forward it won’t fall in line so much
4/28/22, 10:07 AM
Oh wow. What a weird wholesome ending! You definitely have a unique style. I can't help but think this would be a fun series, attaching and detatching, wacky hikinks ensue... :laughing:
4/28/22, 8:49 AM
Your imagination is incredible. This story is so whimsical and fun! Looking forward to reading part two right away!
4/27/22, 10:36 PM
So hot and so sweet! Loved it, great job.
4/27/22, 12:19 AM
Brilliant and exciting! Loving where this is going and can't wait for the next part. Thanks for sharing!
BasketButt
4/26/22, 1:48 PM
I liked this chapter but I LOVED the influence Tyler had over Sam. I can't wait to see Sam with Gabe now he's in his magically enhanced college body again. I would love to see Sam slutting it up on some mega cocks around campus or in the dorm before the end of the story now that he is "liberated." Just giving in to his big bottom lust for VERY BIG DIDCKS which feel SUPER GOOD IN STRAIGHT HOLES. LoL

4/26/22, 11:58 PM
@BasketButt Glad you liked it! If you enjoyed the Tyler/Sam dynamics last chapter, you might like another one of my stories, The Cook-off! https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10003481
4/25/22, 7:25 PM
Finally in the “read this” club. Yeah. 🤷🏼 It’s exceptional. Your attention to craft makes everything a joy for the eyes (and the mind) to follow. I loved the character dynamic. Finn’s perspective as he starts warming into the wish’s influence was ‘chef’s kiss’ dramatic-irony-done-well.

4/26/22, 2:39 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Thanks so much for reading!
4/26/22, 2:20 PM
JESUS CHRIST Nocturne!! Your usual (high) craft level, but now with a lore-gasm to boot. This is phenomenal work.

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Well thanks so much. I’m kind of thinking that this world building that I came up with is going to give it enough impetus to be about the length of a novella. I’m really looking forward to seeing what people think of the third part because I feel like now the story is starting to blend into a more clear direction.
4/8/22, 9:43 PM
This is fascinating, and very hot! I'm excited to see more of it when it's ready!

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@Dace oops I accidentally didn't reply directly to you before. Thanks much!
4/25/22, 7:59 AM
An even better sequel, that left quite the hooks to keep the reader intrigued. Like Martin said, the fucking was intense and superbly well-written. I wonder what is the issue with Xander's dad!
4/25/22, 7:58 AM
Now that was a very welcomed read. Excellent story, really, really well-written and hot as hell! Makes one wish they had had that back at school!
4/25/22, 4:34 AM
Our man Noam de Pluma recommended this story to me and I have to say, I'm into it! I'm glad it's already complete, and I'm excited to see the character development that the characters go through.