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Jonanator
5/13/22, 12:42 AM
Can't wait for more.
bigsad
5/12/22, 10:32 PM
The coils to the vore to the tentacles? Pushes all the right buttons. Plus some neighbor drama? I think this was your best chapter yet.
5/12/22, 7:31 PM
Welcome to the club of authors! The idea of your story is very nice, but please consider using Grammarly and a proofreader from the Discord to improve the language! Still, loved the idea!

5/12/22, 9:19 PM
@Transformheaven thank you, i will try to used it!
5/12/22, 6:42 PM
Upping the ante perfectly. A perfect mix of sweet and spooky, as all the best fairy tales.
5/12/22, 6:25 PM
Another awesome chapter. Loving the fact that Xander is so shy about what he feels and how Janus is so dedicated in helping him out.
5/12/22, 4:21 PM
Loved this and looking forward to reading the rest. Janus is so sweet!
5/12/22, 4:12 AM
I like this series tremendously! Thanks for writing it! A few little grammar comments: Your prepositions (on, in, etc.) are confusing. Secondly, I know you are doing this in 3rd person, but sometimes its unclear as to whose perspective we are in with reading further in the paragraph.

5/12/22, 3:01 PM
@tankonpoint Thanks for your comment! Oh yeah, prepositions are a bane of me since English is not my native language and the "on/in/at" is usually confusing to me, sorry about that. I will check how to make the perspective clearer in the future. Thanks!
5/12/22, 8:06 AM
This story gives off the best, sweetest, sexiest, and most importantly, exciting vibes. I love this little universe you built and you keep building with suspense and exciting reveals. Can't wait for more!
5/11/22, 8:54 PM
Time, this is absolutely unreasonably _pretty_, and I found myself drawn inexorably through the story by the writing. I’ve half a mind to continue reading—though I’m busy, so I don’t know—there’s so much here I look forward to unpacking. You did marvellously.

5/12/22, 3:08 AM
@Soren Fitz Ahh, thank you so much! I'm glad you felt drawn in -- I hope you do decide to continue, when time allows. There are some parts with hypnosis you may want to skip (that's fine so long as you have the context around them), but I think there's a lot more that you would probably enjoy between Sawyer and Lock.
5/12/22, 1:28 AM
As always, you've done an amazing job. Love this chapater, and the love between each brother is as palpable as always. Can't wait for the next part.