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5/8/22, 12:13 AM
Ah, that part did get lost, hiw jack get locked out of the b and b if later chapters say he lived with his mom Then again least of intentionally fuzzy details Small town gay circle of firemen...who fear pda? South is weird. News at 7
5/7/22, 7:05 PM
What a great, great great, story! Love the idea, the characters, the ship design, the sex. Such a great idea and such a great story/chapter. Also I totally like the characters, and would totally enjoy seeing Frank getting fucked. hehe So yeah, great stuff. So cool.

5/7/22, 8:46 PM
@Heru Kane Thanks for the inspiration! Like we discussed on the Discord there's lots of potential in this vein and I'm hoping to tap some! Glad you liked!
5/7/22, 8:10 AM
Hot 🔥

5/7/22, 5:27 PM
@Sentinel thank you
5/7/22, 1:51 PM
Not only is the story excellently crafted, but the world building and lore begin to shine. The story is undoubtedly sexy and our protagonist is just such a treat. I liked the shift in focus and that Finn is on the edges but not yet back into focus. The djinn consciousness was a very interesting surprise, but most of all, you started talking in gaming/mmo language and you totally got me there! I hope you continue building this up as it has a lot of promise for fun.
5/7/22, 7:48 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. So happy that you have plans for continuing this story. Definitely enjoyed the exploration of how djinns and their powers work in this universe. I would certainly enjoy a spin-off chapter that explores what other djinns have done if you ever wanted to take a break from the main story-line. Can't wait to see more!
5/6/22, 4:43 AM
Yay! The boys found their place and Jack found how to have fun with toys. And having said that, how fantastic is it that the story evokes such tenderness and brings forth such emotion? In the end they found love in their sharing of themselves in the way that works for them and reality shifts to allow it. Brilliant.

5/7/22, 7:33 AM
@Essex Thank you so much for your continued support! Jack of Hearts of loads of fun to write for sure!
5/6/22, 5:44 AM
wow
5/6/22, 4:27 AM
Loved it! Scheduled orgies, how dreary! Loved how entangled Jack and Daniel have become that even with changes they come back together. And as Jack is the Sheriff with a harem, Jack is the Fire Chief of a gay poly commune. As always, hot and sweet at the same time. A boner and the fuzzies all in one package (?).
5/6/22, 1:05 AM
Erotically creative and fun. One can't help picture it all vividly with every actor.
5/5/22, 5:45 PM
You have the awe-inducing ability of writing with an almost heteronymic style - the Norismo that writes Pokémon Himbo Sun could be a different person from the Norismo who wrote this. It shows just how _brilliant_ of a writer you are. The mixture of control and tenderness was done really, really well. Keep up the amazing work!

5/5/22, 11:01 PM
@Twan Andersen I hope you're looking forward to approving dozens more chapters in the dalton creek saga :grin:
Martin
5/5/22, 8:47 PM
You need to x-post that series to Cupid so we can rate on "Romance" as well!
5/5/22, 1:04 AM
besides getting dr. strange caught too?, why not get the guradians of the galaxy and hulk involved too?

5/5/22, 1:56 AM
@darkblade2814 I'm planning on all of them getting involved, including the Fantastic Four...I'm just not sure about the plot of the second part. I know I don't want the necklace to become super power that can convert everybody instantly. That's why the necklace teleported everybody out as Dr. Strange can counteract the effects and Strange shielded the other superheroes.

5/5/22, 1:58 AM
@tyl7897 one idea is that the necklace gains power for each person it affects, it still needs to grind until it can affect someone like Dr. Strange or Quill

5/5/22, 2:26 AM
@darkblade2814 Yeah, maybe...I'll message you on discord if you want? So we can discuss this further?

5/5/22, 9:02 AM
@tyl7897 yes we can

5/5/22, 5:53 PM
@darkblade2814 I messaged you!!

5/5/22, 6:04 PM
@tyl7897 okay
5/4/22, 7:10 PM
This was cute. Very awww.
zenZ
4/27/22, 7:52 AM
:100: This is one of my favs! Keep up the good work!!!!

5/1/22, 11:09 PM
@zenZ Thanks! More to come at some point! It's not written, but I *do* have an ending planned for this story.
5/1/22, 2:52 AM
I almost wish the cop got an eye full of naga eyes. But very well done.
5/1/22, 12:01 AM
Another great chapter! It is not easy to keep these kinds of stories exciting and not repetitive, but you do a fantastic job of developing the characters/relationship and adding new elements. Wrestling, tickling, light vore... I like it all.
SlutForHypno
4/30/22, 11:15 PM
Very Cute. I love how Xander is forming a genuine relationship with Janus and the different ways they have sex is always neat to see. I wonder how experimental Xander would be willing to get to the point of temporarily altering his own memories for a rp lol
bigsad
4/30/22, 10:41 PM
That whole portion in the tent was just- wow! I hope these two go on more adventures outside the apartment
4/30/22, 10:12 PM
Omg, read this in one sitting and. Can I say that first off, how OVERJOYED I am to come across a story the best interspecies romance between a human and NAGA. THANK. YOU. Just. Their PERSONALITIES. and. The MESH. The way the HYPNOSIS was implemented. The hot STEAMY ACTION. HGSGSGSGSGHHHS -foams at the mouth- YOU'RE DOING REAL GOOD. 👍🏾
4/30/22, 5:54 PM
You've done it, you managed to make vore wholesome! I'm so curious how the plot is going to develop!

4/30/22, 6:02 PM
@Norismo I am going to use it for the series description, "The story that managed to make vore wholesome"
4/27/22, 11:13 PM
Thanks for the comment!!! If you want to discuss ideas for this series, I'm all open!!! If any of you have twitter, you can message me @tyl7897!!!

Anonymous
4/29/22, 9:37 AM
@tyl7897 Ah, I wonder who will become the necklace next victim.
blu
4/29/22, 4:39 AM
This good and hot keep up the good work
4/29/22, 1:55 AM
Very good! Cannot wait for what is to come!
Anonymous
4/28/22, 10:07 AM
Are… is this… Muscle Twilight?

4/28/22, 2:56 PM
Oh god lol I didn’t think about the similarities. Going forward it won’t fall in line so much
4/28/22, 10:07 AM
Oh wow. What a weird wholesome ending! You definitely have a unique style. I can't help but think this would be a fun series, attaching and detatching, wacky hikinks ensue... :laughing: