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5/20/22, 7:11 PM
Awesome. I love it. Can't wait for more!
5/20/22, 5:10 PM
Oh, what a wonderful story. You have some of the best characterizations I’ve ever read. And the kiss was more intimate than a thousand sex scenes. Isn’t that funny?…yes, this is an absolutely amazing tale. I hope you continue it, but the most important thing is that you write what YOU want to write! :)
R P
5/20/22, 2:33 PM
This is sweet and so lovely! I hope you do decide to write more about Jeremy and Ryder.
5/20/22, 2:11 PM
This sounds like it’s going to be great fun! I like how from the get-go it’s uncertain whether or not his wish actually came true, or if Ryder, like the MC, wanted to tell MC he loved him. I’m excited to see more.
5/20/22, 2:00 PM
This premise has a lot of potential, and I mean even outside this website, if you address the implications of this wish and how it can reflect on their relationship from now on. I think you should invest in it, I really liked this concept.
5/19/22, 7:10 PM
Nice way to bring the ring back

5/20/22, 12:58 AM
@darkblade2814 Thanks. I had a lot of other ideas this one just took hold easier.
R P
5/19/22, 9:57 AM
Love seeing the brothers get closer together, they have such a sweet and hot relationship dynamic!
R P
5/19/22, 1:08 AM
This is such a hot and fun story :) I hope we get to see more of Ariel and the THIK boys!

5/19/22, 4:06 AM
I'm glad you're loving it! I want to write more, I've just been busy with other projects. There's more of Talley Ohara in [Life Kinda Fucks](https://www.gaykinkystories.com/story/show/10004029) and its followup novella _Top Maker_, so if you decide to read it, hopefully it helps tide you over for a bit! @R P
5/18/22, 5:19 AM
As a huge fan of your work, I made sure to wait for the perfect time and place to read this latest installment, and I'm glad I did because there was some genuine emotion at seeing these two sweet boys end up hurting. I'm not worried about where you'll take the story or how it ends because you've already established your ability and power as an author, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

SC Walker
5/18/22, 9:32 PM
@Jack Thank you so much! Glad you feeling the emotions, and I appreciate your faith in me. Hope you enjoy what comes next.
5/18/22, 5:35 PM
"maybe he was one of the countless assholes that seemed to delight in making his day as shitty as possible?" Cathartic much? Hahaha, this was just so wonderful. I absolutely love the silliness, it's so wholesome and heartwarming, and Norismo is such a wonderful silly hero! When you unleash yourself into the silly and warm feelings, you shine so bright! Love this so far and I'll keep on reading to find what happens to Christmas! :hugs:
5/17/22, 11:35 PM
Absolutely wonderful! This is such a great parody of yourself and your themes. And everything is so emotional and dramatic you can't help but get dragged along. Hank Himbo is what we obviously expected but the manimals are such a wonderful new touch! One second Nori wants to flee and now he wants to save the pound and murder the instantaneously appeared antagonist. Emotions running wild is so much fun! Can't wait to keep reading all the rest.

5/18/22, 1:39 PM
@Essex I'm glad you liked it. It's such a fun series to write for sure :smile:
5/18/22, 12:11 AM
I'm a little sad by this chapter, but that means you did a great job at writing it. I'm looking forward to seeing the next couple chapters and am hopeful for their reconciliation. Who knew I would feel feelings in a porn-y website? Even so, you've set up a hot universe for Sammy and Luke to live in.

SC Walker
5/18/22, 2:00 AM
@Some Guy Haha guess I'm the master for luring you in with filthy fantasy porn and then sucker punching you with FEELINGS. Thank you so much :)

5/18/22, 11:43 AM
@Some Guy Lord above, I know what you mean. There have been other stories on here that generate genuine emotion for me: “Mindwipers,” dear Swizzington’s “Slave Academy,” and now this tale. Don’t get me wrong, the directly pornographic stories get me hot and heavy, and that’s awesome! But I never expected a fetish site to make me feel…such amazing writers, aren’t they? :)
5/17/22, 11:07 PM
Loving this story so much. This chapter was very well done. Looking forward to happier scenes and them making up, but gotta compliment how well you've presented everything so far. I'm super into Luke's big ass and self-lubing hole. The itch you describe is a hot concept, and I love how it's pushing him to explore. Hopefully he won't get in too much trouble before reconciling with Sammy.

SC Walker
5/18/22, 1:59 AM
@Razz TFs Thank you so much! High praise coming from you. Hehe, sorry to say that without Sammy around Luke is gonna get into a ton of trouble ;)
5/17/22, 9:34 PM
Hey @S. Q. Neemie. Is there any news on when we can expect a new chapter og hints of what is coming?
Evan
5/17/22, 11:48 AM
This is such a sad chapter. I feel really bad for Sammy. The way you write makes the characters' feelings really hit home. I hope they can mend soon and our dear protagonist realises a few things despite how oblivious he clearly is.

SC Walker
5/17/22, 9:07 PM
@Evan I'm really glad you're enjoying the ~feelings~ haha I wasn't sure how this chapter would be received since it's so light on porn.
5/17/22, 10:43 AM
I’ve been waiting for this…what a wonderful and heartbreaking chapter. You’re doing an amazing job representing how someone on the spectrum has a hard time picking up social cues. And the contrast between the beautifully romantic nature of the date and the harsh fight on the couch was brilliant, too. It’s also great that, rather than making Luke have a determined sexuality, he genuinely doesn’t know if he’s attracted to men; he comes across as more assuming he’s straight because he never thought otherwise, which is original (and I think more common than we think). Finally, as ever, I love how kissing is the ultimate sign of homosexuality among our people…not rough anal sex. Kissing. :p I’ve been there before (hookup with a “99% straight” guy who told me “nothing above the neck”). I hope that everyone here gets a happy ending…

SC Walker
5/17/22, 9:06 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you so much for this comment! I'm happy somebody really gets what I'm going for. And yes, you understand exactly where Luke is coming from. He has a pretty rigid, simplistic view of the world so in his mind "All jocks are straight -> I am a jock -> Therefore I am straight" simply by default. And yes, I think that's true for a lot of people, but especially for bi guys. Glad you liked the kissing! Since it's their first kiss I wanted to make it special.
5/17/22, 6:37 PM
Just reread this chapter and I love it still. Such sexy stuff. Looking forward to a 100% gay crew. Also looking forward to the hopefully fun stuff of rimming and anal sex. Oh and I hope Sid takes Frank's ass, and takes it hard. Hehe
Anonymous
5/17/22, 2:45 AM
This was hot! I really like the direction you’re going with this… I’m also really looking forward to the coach being introduced ;) Maybe Luke turns to him for advice in the next chapter?

SC Walker
5/17/22, 6:08 PM
Coach is coming up soon! Not in the next chapter but after that. ;)
5/17/22, 4:38 PM
I love the way this is going, hope to see another ipdate soon!
R P
5/17/22, 10:05 AM
This is such a sweet and hot story :) I hope things work out for Luke & Sammy in the end.
Arlo
5/17/22, 6:56 AM
This literally has every favorite aspect of mine, from the hypnosis to the kinks to the self-willing romance to the adorable, yet hot and sexy relation between them, I love this series so much, hope it continues on for a while
5/16/22, 3:54 PM
Love the idea of going up behind someone and just fingering and fucking them - I mean I would probably add some rimming first, hehe. But yeah this casual sex world - especially with its fucked silly component - is super hot. Love how he is a power top, his ass is not the point its his cock and the ass of others. I am curious about something, you mention him 'pushing through the second hole' and such, what is he fucking towards? Also, so maybe its just me, but I didn't realize that the gods give the power and its not like genetic, not sure what I think about that. But yeah, lots of fun, lots of potential, lots of fun, fantastic sex to be had!

5/16/22, 6:04 PM
There's no "towards" per se—it's just a tighter section of a guy's ass, with more sweet spots inside! The sweet spots are also fantastical, of course, but I thought it was a fun addition to the world. With respect to the gods, note that this is just what _Talley_ thinks is supposed to happen. What's actually going to happen is... well, i'd say "another story," but it's this story, as it's continued in _Top Maker_! I'm glad you loved it so much. I will say, though, that the other three chapters of this story involve Talley going from top to switch. The tops involved are hot, but they're not the POV. So it's up to you whether to get it or not. @Heru Kane
5/16/22, 3:26 PM
I might be biased given that I helped you edit this thing, but: I love it! Really excellent work sketching out Talley’s character, his motivations, and (of course) delivering a scorching-hot sex scene. To say nothing of the world-building, which is *chef’s kiss*. Very nicely done!

5/16/22, 4:49 PM
I absolutely loved worldbuilding for this story. There’s basically something new in every single chapter! The amount of ruminating this went through before it started going to you was, hoo, a lot. But thank you, too, for your phenomenal editing. @Noam de Pluma
Anonymous
5/16/22, 7:16 AM
Great story!
Anonymous
5/15/22, 8:55 PM
I hope we get to see more of your story Kods! I've been checking these past two months for an update and I seriously can't wait to see what you have in store for your story!
5/14/22, 6:38 AM
A wonderfully written fairy tale for the slutty, with heart. I love it! Can’t wait for more !

5/14/22, 12:57 PM
@Yunnick I'm glad it came through as exactly that, and there's so much more to come. Thank you for your feedback, we'll find out more soon.
R P
5/14/22, 4:27 AM
What a hot chapter! Love Sam getting rough with Wolf while he admit to himself what he really wants. Can’t wait to see more of both of them :)

5/14/22, 12:55 PM
@R P Thanks for the kind words! Sam is now on his way, if a bit confused. What does the future hold? Wolf has ran away, but Sam left his mark for sure, who knows when their paths will cross. Thanks for joining us for the ride!
5/14/22, 5:10 AM
So glad to see more! The 4some are in sync now, so I can't wait for what's next.
5/14/22, 3:51 AM
It is always great to get another chapter of this wonderful series!