Recent Comments

5/20/22, 8:58 PM
I've said it before and I'll say it again, but you're jostling for the top spot for 'most compelling erotic writer around' (along with Nutiper and some others, naturally). You've got a potent ability to put pen to paper and make _anything_ hot: case in point, I'm not a fan of DILFs, but your take on them is sizzling. The new dynamic it brought to Sam & Gabe's relationship (as well as Sam himself), and the way you explore the ramifications it has... well, frankly, I'd be extremely interested in seeing a more fleshed-out story from you that delves into that side of things. Perhaps flipping the concept, and exploring the butterfly effect of amending small things in a person's past? But I'm digressing! 5 stars across the board as usual. Well done!

5/22/22, 7:00 PM
@kuro Thanks for the compliments! Honestly, DILFs aren't really my thing either! It just made sense for the characters so I decided to have fun with the idea and put my spin on it. You can expect more reality-changing stuff from me in the future, including a few more chapters of this story.
Anonymous
5/8/22, 8:52 AM
Sooo hot, everytime I read these stories I picture Sam like this https://mobile.twitter.com/MateoBlancoXXX got the ass you describe perfectly. Already cant wait for the next chapter

5/22/22, 6:56 PM
@ Glad you're enjoying the story!
Anonymous
5/22/22, 5:35 PM
Hot
bigsad
5/22/22, 3:25 PM
I’m sad to see this story end, but I am very happy with the ending! I can’t wait to see what you make next!
5/22/22, 2:45 PM
The ending was so sweet and wonderful, but now i'm a bit sad it's over! :sweat_smile:
R P
5/21/22, 3:37 PM
Damn this is hot. Love the rough but still tender first time with Ben :)
5/21/22, 12:38 PM
This is a very nice start and I’d love to read more too.
Jay
5/21/22, 7:15 AM
This was a really sweet story and a joy to read! Hope it all works out well for Ryder & Jeremy :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
5/21/22, 2:07 AM
I enjoy a romance-only story on the site, and I enjoyed the set up for the start of Ryder and Jeremy's burgeoning relationship. Please continue their story!
Martin
5/20/22, 8:36 PM
A very lovely story. And so far it doesn't need any MC aspect. I'd actually prefer if Ryder is truthful and was always secretly in love with Jer, Comet or not! Please keep going with this!

5/21/22, 12:24 AM
@Martin i like the idea that the wish just brought their emotions to light rather than manufactured them. There are a couple of stories on this sight with that premise and i always enjoy them
May 19, 2022
Anonymous
5/20/22, 11:19 AM
Why are these protags so easy to drag into signing a contract without having a lawyer review it first? I mean, I get it, deal with the devil and all, but I've always been of the mindset that the best way to beat a devil of detail is to bring a decent lawyer to the game. Oh, now I'm getting ideas for how you can have Peter get buyer's remorse and ask a lawyer for help with finding a loophole or exit clause. Of course, they say that law's one DEVIL of a profession, so why not turn it into spiritual litigation?

5/20/22, 8:10 PM
Hahaha well if they read the contract like a normal person, the story wouldn’t be interesting eh 😜 thanks for the comment! Hope you enjoyed the story <3

Anonymous
5/20/22, 8:16 PM
@Grant Spiral Rest assured, this only means you get to make things interesting for him after the fact! Imagine having Peter ask the company's in-house counsel to help with the contract, only for him to get a lecture on "I represent the company, not you, and if I help you with this I could be disbarred." Then he has to find HIS OWN LAWYER, maybe one of the guys who fucks him on a recurring basis in his new life, and wouldn't ya know it, he just happens to practice employment and labor law and represent employees! Maybe work a bit of "alternative payment methods" in there, and you could set up quite the dramatic confrontation between Peter and Hendrick as they fight over which laws should control his life!
5/20/22, 7:11 PM
Awesome. I love it. Can't wait for more!
5/20/22, 5:10 PM
Oh, what a wonderful story. You have some of the best characterizations I’ve ever read. And the kiss was more intimate than a thousand sex scenes. Isn’t that funny?…yes, this is an absolutely amazing tale. I hope you continue it, but the most important thing is that you write what YOU want to write! :)
R P
5/20/22, 2:33 PM
This is sweet and so lovely! I hope you do decide to write more about Jeremy and Ryder.
5/20/22, 2:11 PM
This sounds like it’s going to be great fun! I like how from the get-go it’s uncertain whether or not his wish actually came true, or if Ryder, like the MC, wanted to tell MC he loved him. I’m excited to see more.
5/20/22, 2:00 PM
This premise has a lot of potential, and I mean even outside this website, if you address the implications of this wish and how it can reflect on their relationship from now on. I think you should invest in it, I really liked this concept.
5/19/22, 7:10 PM
Nice way to bring the ring back

5/20/22, 12:58 AM
@darkblade2814 Thanks. I had a lot of other ideas this one just took hold easier.
R P
5/19/22, 9:57 AM
Love seeing the brothers get closer together, they have such a sweet and hot relationship dynamic!
R P
5/19/22, 1:08 AM
This is such a hot and fun story :) I hope we get to see more of Ariel and the THIK boys!

5/19/22, 4:06 AM
I'm glad you're loving it! I want to write more, I've just been busy with other projects. There's more of Talley Ohara in [Life Kinda Fucks](https://www.gaykinkystories.com/story/show/10004029) and its followup novella _Top Maker_, so if you decide to read it, hopefully it helps tide you over for a bit! @R P
5/18/22, 5:19 AM
As a huge fan of your work, I made sure to wait for the perfect time and place to read this latest installment, and I'm glad I did because there was some genuine emotion at seeing these two sweet boys end up hurting. I'm not worried about where you'll take the story or how it ends because you've already established your ability and power as an author, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

SC Walker
5/18/22, 9:32 PM
@Jack Thank you so much! Glad you feeling the emotions, and I appreciate your faith in me. Hope you enjoy what comes next.
5/18/22, 5:35 PM
"maybe he was one of the countless assholes that seemed to delight in making his day as shitty as possible?" Cathartic much? Hahaha, this was just so wonderful. I absolutely love the silliness, it's so wholesome and heartwarming, and Norismo is such a wonderful silly hero! When you unleash yourself into the silly and warm feelings, you shine so bright! Love this so far and I'll keep on reading to find what happens to Christmas! :hugs:
5/17/22, 11:35 PM
Absolutely wonderful! This is such a great parody of yourself and your themes. And everything is so emotional and dramatic you can't help but get dragged along. Hank Himbo is what we obviously expected but the manimals are such a wonderful new touch! One second Nori wants to flee and now he wants to save the pound and murder the instantaneously appeared antagonist. Emotions running wild is so much fun! Can't wait to keep reading all the rest.

5/18/22, 1:39 PM
@Essex I'm glad you liked it. It's such a fun series to write for sure :smile:
5/18/22, 12:11 AM
I'm a little sad by this chapter, but that means you did a great job at writing it. I'm looking forward to seeing the next couple chapters and am hopeful for their reconciliation. Who knew I would feel feelings in a porn-y website? Even so, you've set up a hot universe for Sammy and Luke to live in.

SC Walker
5/18/22, 2:00 AM
@Some Guy Haha guess I'm the master for luring you in with filthy fantasy porn and then sucker punching you with FEELINGS. Thank you so much :)

5/18/22, 11:43 AM
@Some Guy Lord above, I know what you mean. There have been other stories on here that generate genuine emotion for me: “Mindwipers,” dear Swizzington’s “Slave Academy,” and now this tale. Don’t get me wrong, the directly pornographic stories get me hot and heavy, and that’s awesome! But I never expected a fetish site to make me feel…such amazing writers, aren’t they? :)
5/17/22, 11:07 PM
Loving this story so much. This chapter was very well done. Looking forward to happier scenes and them making up, but gotta compliment how well you've presented everything so far. I'm super into Luke's big ass and self-lubing hole. The itch you describe is a hot concept, and I love how it's pushing him to explore. Hopefully he won't get in too much trouble before reconciling with Sammy.

SC Walker
5/18/22, 1:59 AM
@Razz TFs Thank you so much! High praise coming from you. Hehe, sorry to say that without Sammy around Luke is gonna get into a ton of trouble ;)
5/17/22, 9:34 PM
Hey @S. Q. Neemie. Is there any news on when we can expect a new chapter og hints of what is coming?
Evan
5/17/22, 11:48 AM
This is such a sad chapter. I feel really bad for Sammy. The way you write makes the characters' feelings really hit home. I hope they can mend soon and our dear protagonist realises a few things despite how oblivious he clearly is.

SC Walker
5/17/22, 9:07 PM
@Evan I'm really glad you're enjoying the ~feelings~ haha I wasn't sure how this chapter would be received since it's so light on porn.
5/17/22, 10:43 AM
I’ve been waiting for this…what a wonderful and heartbreaking chapter. You’re doing an amazing job representing how someone on the spectrum has a hard time picking up social cues. And the contrast between the beautifully romantic nature of the date and the harsh fight on the couch was brilliant, too. It’s also great that, rather than making Luke have a determined sexuality, he genuinely doesn’t know if he’s attracted to men; he comes across as more assuming he’s straight because he never thought otherwise, which is original (and I think more common than we think). Finally, as ever, I love how kissing is the ultimate sign of homosexuality among our people…not rough anal sex. Kissing. :p I’ve been there before (hookup with a “99% straight” guy who told me “nothing above the neck”). I hope that everyone here gets a happy ending…

SC Walker
5/17/22, 9:06 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you so much for this comment! I'm happy somebody really gets what I'm going for. And yes, you understand exactly where Luke is coming from. He has a pretty rigid, simplistic view of the world so in his mind "All jocks are straight -> I am a jock -> Therefore I am straight" simply by default. And yes, I think that's true for a lot of people, but especially for bi guys. Glad you liked the kissing! Since it's their first kiss I wanted to make it special.
5/17/22, 6:37 PM
Just reread this chapter and I love it still. Such sexy stuff. Looking forward to a 100% gay crew. Also looking forward to the hopefully fun stuff of rimming and anal sex. Oh and I hope Sid takes Frank's ass, and takes it hard. Hehe
Anonymous
5/17/22, 2:45 AM
This was hot! I really like the direction you’re going with this… I’m also really looking forward to the coach being introduced ;) Maybe Luke turns to him for advice in the next chapter?

SC Walker
5/17/22, 6:08 PM
Coach is coming up soon! Not in the next chapter but after that. ;)
5/17/22, 4:38 PM
I love the way this is going, hope to see another ipdate soon!