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Arlo
5/17/22, 6:56 AM
This literally has every favorite aspect of mine, from the hypnosis to the kinks to the self-willing romance to the adorable, yet hot and sexy relation between them, I love this series so much, hope it continues on for a while
5/16/22, 3:54 PM
Love the idea of going up behind someone and just fingering and fucking them - I mean I would probably add some rimming first, hehe. But yeah this casual sex world - especially with its fucked silly component - is super hot. Love how he is a power top, his ass is not the point its his cock and the ass of others. I am curious about something, you mention him 'pushing through the second hole' and such, what is he fucking towards? Also, so maybe its just me, but I didn't realize that the gods give the power and its not like genetic, not sure what I think about that. But yeah, lots of fun, lots of potential, lots of fun, fantastic sex to be had!

5/16/22, 6:04 PM
There's no "towards" per se—it's just a tighter section of a guy's ass, with more sweet spots inside! The sweet spots are also fantastical, of course, but I thought it was a fun addition to the world. With respect to the gods, note that this is just what _Talley_ thinks is supposed to happen. What's actually going to happen is... well, i'd say "another story," but it's this story, as it's continued in _Top Maker_! I'm glad you loved it so much. I will say, though, that the other three chapters of this story involve Talley going from top to switch. The tops involved are hot, but they're not the POV. So it's up to you whether to get it or not. @Heru Kane
5/16/22, 3:26 PM
I might be biased given that I helped you edit this thing, but: I love it! Really excellent work sketching out Talley’s character, his motivations, and (of course) delivering a scorching-hot sex scene. To say nothing of the world-building, which is *chef’s kiss*. Very nicely done!

5/16/22, 4:49 PM
I absolutely loved worldbuilding for this story. There’s basically something new in every single chapter! The amount of ruminating this went through before it started going to you was, hoo, a lot. But thank you, too, for your phenomenal editing. @Noam de Pluma
Anonymous
5/16/22, 7:16 AM
Great story!
Anonymous
5/15/22, 8:55 PM
I hope we get to see more of your story Kods! I've been checking these past two months for an update and I seriously can't wait to see what you have in store for your story!
5/14/22, 6:38 AM
A wonderfully written fairy tale for the slutty, with heart. I love it! Can’t wait for more !

5/14/22, 12:57 PM
@Yunnick I'm glad it came through as exactly that, and there's so much more to come. Thank you for your feedback, we'll find out more soon.
R P
5/14/22, 4:27 AM
What a hot chapter! Love Sam getting rough with Wolf while he admit to himself what he really wants. Can’t wait to see more of both of them :)

5/14/22, 12:55 PM
@R P Thanks for the kind words! Sam is now on his way, if a bit confused. What does the future hold? Wolf has ran away, but Sam left his mark for sure, who knows when their paths will cross. Thanks for joining us for the ride!
5/14/22, 5:10 AM
So glad to see more! The 4some are in sync now, so I can't wait for what's next.
5/14/22, 3:51 AM
It is always great to get another chapter of this wonderful series!
5/13/22, 3:51 PM
I just read through this whole series right now, and it's great! I'm excited to see where things go, especially when the titular hunters get involved again

5/13/22, 4:54 PM
@gargayle Thanks! Then you're going to like the next chapter. :)
5/13/22, 4:00 PM
So close to their freedom and happy ending! Great job as always, Twan!
Anonymous
5/13/22, 12:32 PM
This was utterly amazing, I cannot wait for more
5/13/22, 11:50 AM
The plot thickens! I'm quite liking what I'm reading!

5/13/22, 12:04 PM
@Twan Andersen thank you Twan! Lots of things thicken and things finally start beginning (?)
5/13/22, 10:09 AM
I adore some smutty fanfic. Sequel, or series? :wink:
5/13/22, 9:31 AM
Nice
JaketheNerdyFox
5/13/22, 9:07 AM
Wow what a story, love all the fun coil details and was surprised to see it turn into such a dramatic scenario. Very fun :3
5/13/22, 2:33 AM
A brilliant chapter overall, with a heartfelt, sweet and wholesome last part. Loved this, and you did a brilliant job.
5/13/22, 2:17 AM
This was the hottest, wholesomest hypno story, and it was so well done! Grats Twan!
Jonanator
5/13/22, 12:42 AM
Can't wait for more.
bigsad
5/12/22, 10:32 PM
The coils to the vore to the tentacles? Pushes all the right buttons. Plus some neighbor drama? I think this was your best chapter yet.
5/12/22, 7:31 PM
Welcome to the club of authors! The idea of your story is very nice, but please consider using Grammarly and a proofreader from the Discord to improve the language! Still, loved the idea!

5/12/22, 9:19 PM
@Transformheaven thank you, i will try to used it!
5/12/22, 6:42 PM
Upping the ante perfectly. A perfect mix of sweet and spooky, as all the best fairy tales.
5/12/22, 6:25 PM
Another awesome chapter. Loving the fact that Xander is so shy about what he feels and how Janus is so dedicated in helping him out.
5/12/22, 4:21 PM
Loved this and looking forward to reading the rest. Janus is so sweet!
5/12/22, 4:12 AM
I like this series tremendously! Thanks for writing it! A few little grammar comments: Your prepositions (on, in, etc.) are confusing. Secondly, I know you are doing this in 3rd person, but sometimes its unclear as to whose perspective we are in with reading further in the paragraph.

5/12/22, 3:01 PM
@tankonpoint Thanks for your comment! Oh yeah, prepositions are a bane of me since English is not my native language and the "on/in/at" is usually confusing to me, sorry about that. I will check how to make the perspective clearer in the future. Thanks!
5/12/22, 8:06 AM
This story gives off the best, sweetest, sexiest, and most importantly, exciting vibes. I love this little universe you built and you keep building with suspense and exciting reveals. Can't wait for more!
5/11/22, 8:54 PM
Time, this is absolutely unreasonably _pretty_, and I found myself drawn inexorably through the story by the writing. I’ve half a mind to continue reading—though I’m busy, so I don’t know—there’s so much here I look forward to unpacking. You did marvellously.

5/12/22, 3:08 AM
@Soren Fitz Ahh, thank you so much! I'm glad you felt drawn in -- I hope you do decide to continue, when time allows. There are some parts with hypnosis you may want to skip (that's fine so long as you have the context around them), but I think there's a lot more that you would probably enjoy between Sawyer and Lock.
5/12/22, 1:28 AM
As always, you've done an amazing job. Love this chapater, and the love between each brother is as palpable as always. Can't wait for the next part.
5/11/22, 10:12 PM
God you are such an amazing writer. Brilliant chapter!!