Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/23/22, 3:58 AM
i'm genuinely delighted by this series. while the sex is absolutely hot, your writing really shines particularly well in the characters and sense of humor. i'm so excited to see more!
Evan
6/22/22, 11:58 PM
This site is a great place to be able to give feedback on this sort of a story and so I shall eagerly do so. I loved this. Just as Time says, it hints at a broader universe but also allows the reader to focus on the here and now of the tattoo. All the while, curious about how the tattoo works. How it clearly jumped to Viraj. Wyatt is adorable and this story has a wonderful tenderness to it while still exploring a fun supernatural and sexy slutty nature. Spectacularly done. I'm very curious to where where you choose to take it.

6/23/22, 2:37 AM
Thanks so much for the feedback, @Evan! I *thought* I had the rest of the story more or less mapped out in my head, but now there’s a second, much longer version percolating thanks to the fact that Wyatt came into existence and became impossible to ignore while I was writing this instalment. I can still go the original way, but… we’ll see what I have the stomach for :sweat_smile:
6/23/22, 1:10 AM
This was an incredibly unique and surprisingly cute story, definitely not what I was expecting when I clicked on it.
Evan
6/22/22, 11:39 PM
I needed to edit this comment because I neglected to say that I have been eagerly anticipating the continuation of this story for quite a while, after having ravenously consumed all the previous chapters in rapid succession. Thus, I was delighted to learn it was posted. Thank you both for another great chapter. Now to the original comments: Such a web being woven. Distracting Marin was beautifully done, such a sensual and touching piece of writing. It is so very clear Calix cares for them. I do so enjoy how the two of you focus more on sense and feeling than the pure mechanics of sexual scenes. It makes each a delight. You both continue to unspool the threads while keeping a masterful hold of the tensions. Between factions like the crew and Anthix. Between Anthix and Rhys and just what will happen when the crew gets to talk with Jasper. How whatever happens reflects on the budding reconciliation between Anthix and Rhys. Who will find out what about what's been going on with Jasper and how that will appear without the full story? Rhys's caring for Jasper and his uncertainty as to whether he's being played is heartbreaking. As much as I want them to be well together, there is also the clear, honest connection with his old crew and Seth that - at the moment - looks mutually exclusive. The two of you create a twisted, thorny set of circumstances to navigate. The progression feels very natural and very clever ways of bringing information to the various parties and a nice continuation and fallout from Jasper and Rhys's expedition to the slums. The VR scene and its testing ground was nicely played. It felt very on theme and said a lot about the characters on both sides. I think it worked well to bridge a divide there more quickly than might have been done otherwise. Plus VR is fun. But damn you both, why can't Rhys and Jasper just be happy? :D
6/22/22, 7:44 PM
Totally love it! sniffing sweaty uniform must have made me go straight into heaven.
6/22/22, 3:41 PM
Jake is going to claim his own little toy in Cass…
Your closeted gay
6/22/22, 1:50 PM
I love that even though he is a demon, there's a romantic angle to it, and I hope this story explores it more
Anonymous
6/22/22, 3:24 AM
I've never commented on one of these before but the part > “Oh, master Flax” Misery looks me up and down “Is this to be a social visit?” The murky water gathers in her cheeks. Is she blushing?> I legit laughed out loud. That was gold. Solid writing
6/21/22, 9:41 PM
ohohoho the plot thickens!!! really loving this series
Anonymous
6/21/22, 8:06 PM
What am i gonna tell my wife XD XD XD
Anonymous
6/21/22, 6:38 PM
I can’t wait for the next chapter! Hopefully we’ll see more with the Coach…
Oct 30, 2021
6/21/22, 4:07 PM
This was a nice story, well-written.
6/21/22, 1:10 PM
Great story and great new chapter.
Anonymous
6/21/22, 2:26 AM
oh i'm having a fantastic time with this series. it's sexy, but also incredibly fun and lighthearted. mostly the characters so far are just making me smile immensely. thank you so much, and i'm looking forward to more!
Anonymous
6/21/22, 2:05 AM
It’s so hot! Looking forward to what happens next
6/21/22, 12:38 AM
And now the story gets complicated; Cassius was worried about Archimedes but Jake has now become something to worry about, something his magic cannot handle. Another enjoyable chapter; looking forward to the next!!!
6/21/22, 12:28 AM
This is super hot. I really like the idea of the 'father' or 'brother' guy getting out of jail a subby needy good boy for a gay guy. So yeah this is super hot.
Anonymous
6/20/22, 11:16 PM
One of my favorite stories ever
6/20/22, 9:39 PM
Aw, this was sweet. Also, I appreciate the physics rep—dunno if physics is your major, but I just graduated with my B.S. in it and I'm always happy to see people remember that physics students exist!
6/19/22, 6:40 PM
New fave series

6/20/22, 4:44 PM
@Bound_Up_Boy Thank you! :D
6/20/22, 4:43 PM
I feel like I should have called this chapter three is a crowd. Why are titles so hard?
6/20/22, 1:08 PM
This series is absolute perfection. Thank you very much, Elmara. Dumb, submissive tops and manipulative, horny Bottoms are the best coupling.
6/20/22, 1:14 AM
excited to see where this series goes!
6/20/22, 12:11 AM
I'm loving Archimedes running things and making Cassius angry at almost every turn. An enjoyable read; please keep going!!!
Zeke
6/20/22, 12:01 AM
Awesome! Can't wait to read the next chapter
6/19/22, 11:55 PM
Wow, just realized we aren't far from having #dumbjock as a story tag, more power to you and those who gets off on the tag. Personally I am more into turning nerds into dumbjocks like my name cursing them is my thing my story is no where near ready though.
Anonymous
6/19/22, 7:27 PM
This story is bonkers and i am here for it. LOVE Archy :D
6/19/22, 6:59 PM
Loving how Jacob is gone all the way into slavehood and how delightful Archie is. Cass is in for a ride and I can't wait.