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6/25/22, 9:56 PM
Absolutely loved this.
Martin
2/4/22, 10:43 PM
Interesting beginning ...

Jonanator
2/4/22, 10:50 PM
@Martin Thanks for the comment. The idea really came to me out of nowhere to do this story. I did have a bit of inspiration with it. I typically watch Asian shows on Rakuten Viki, and they do have some shows that deal with a fantasies like this, but between a male and female, so I just made my own story. I'll probably post the next chapter tomorrow, in between my coverage of the Winter Olympics.

Bl guy
6/25/22, 1:31 PM
@Jonanator Yeah the premise really felt like a Chinese drama to me, and I love it... there are so many interesting stories with male and female leads which I wish were M/M, eager to see where you're gonna take it here from.
6/25/22, 1:14 PM
Great job as usual! Well written and hot as always. Looking forward to the finale
6/25/22, 3:50 AM
Was this story hidden for a while? I remember going to search for it and never being able to find it. Hits so much buttons. So happy to have read it again. Can't wait to read where it goes. Thank you!

6/25/22, 11:44 AM
@GiveInToTheMusk I published it a few years ago and didn't complete it, after my hiatus I decided to republish it and finish it, final chapter (unreleased so far) is coming out later tonight.
Evan
6/25/22, 2:39 AM
Well, one question answered. How very fun that Reed and Saint's powers work on one another too. The ending to this chapter sure was unexpected. I hope Avril enjoys living in the daddies' back yard in the future. The tantalizing control of the two daddies staying away from Chris's ass is so we'll done. I loved hearing that they are planning to take such good care of him as their boy, and give him fun with friends from college to help his movie making career as well. Even with ulterior motives clear, the care and sensuality and control over Chris is so very hot. Eager for another dose.
6/25/22, 12:28 AM
Masterful, Twan. You've hit all my buttons. Honestly can't wait for more. Keep it up!
12/8/19, 12:40 AM
Incredible stuff here. Absolutely my favorite kind of story. Only two things I'd add: Id love more from Topher's POV during the sessions with Daddy, I love knowing their internal monologue. Please be gentle with the dog stuff. Nothing pulls me out of a hot erotic story more than animal neglect or abuse. I know these daddies are hot but please don't let Topher neglect his dog, that just makes me sad. And the Daddies would be significantly less hot if one of them starts kicking around Topher's dog.

6/24/22, 8:38 PM
Me too@bak2jak. Animal, child and elder abuse pulls me out of the story . My thoughts remain with the animal

6/24/22, 10:03 PM
@Stroppy Author As I said in the comments, the.part where Topher neglected his dog was removed. There will be no animal abuse nor anything remotely similar.
Evan
6/24/22, 5:20 PM
Their friendship is really sweet and what dumb joke doesn't want a best friend to drain his balls whenever he's horny. Win win.
6/24/22, 4:27 PM
Updated part 2. For those who might be wondering, regarding the comments: I removed a mention of Topher having forgotten to feed his dog.
6/24/22, 10:25 AM
Great story! Love a good brat turned good boy.
6/24/22, 12:00 AM
Needed to write in to say how much I enjoy this series - it's playful and fun while still being intensely erotic, and the mini-sex/love triangle is really hot. The normalized sexuality of the world is also always refreshing. Looking forward to the next installment!

6/24/22, 9:05 AM
@getPMPD Thank you so much! I really enjoy writing it.
6/24/22, 7:30 AM
Wow! Domineering Daddy is one of my favourite tropes for sure. Now to wait for chapter 2 😁
Old man kisser
6/23/22, 10:36 PM
"Reed said, handing Ian a piece of paper, using that opportunity to get closer to him." Typo? or was tophers first draft name Ian?

6/24/22, 6:18 AM
@Old man kisser it was indeed, thank you for noticing, I fixed it!
Evan
6/24/22, 4:33 AM
Such a sweet story. I loved the happy ending.
Evan
6/24/22, 3:39 AM
So Viraj's mind constantly going back to Wyatt was art imitating life? I spent a lot of their time in the bleachers searching for a sign Wyatt was getting his own tattoo. And if the way they were interacting would inform it. Say, attached to his cock and leasing him to desire fucking and those seeing it craving to feel it in them. Inverse to Viraj's wanting to be fucked and having the glimpses want to poke him. Whether you continue course, do something new or weave some combination, I know it will be great and can't wait to read it.

6/24/22, 3:58 AM
@Evan the bearer of the tattoo will get like 3/10 obsessed with the person who saw it - a mild compulsion to do the deed with him. The person who saw it ramps up to 10/10 obsessed pretty quick. Things don’t always work the same though, as I alluded to with Kendrick. Also, Viraj is a bottom quite apart from the tattoo. That it landed in his ass was a happy coincidence for him :smile:
Evan
6/24/22, 3:32 AM
What a work of art. It begins with hoping Topher find some of the affection and protection he was leaving in his life so far with Reed and Saint. A teasing, slow build of feeling the boy out. Then the hotness. So sensual, so evocative with senses engaged. When the trap is sprung there comes that tiny tension. Uncertainty of just how caring Reed is after all. Loved the warmth and musk making Topher compliant. Outstanding sexual scenes. Highly charged with hypnosis elements to boot. My buttons were well and truly pressed. And all connected and deep with the focus on their bodies and surrender. Gaining so much more for the choice of their acts not including penetrative sex this time. I would love to see more of this and Reed's power. Is Saint also special in the same or a different way? Did the roommate know something, feeling Topher to be careful, or was it a general concern situation. Loved this. Thank you for an awesome story.
Evan
6/23/22, 4:38 AM
What a joy to not only get a new chapter but an extra long one. I was particularly grateful not to end on evil interlude. Pete is adorable. How lucky for Sam to have received a himbo instruction manual, and other guides by such well respected experts in their fields. The elation and love you convey between Sam and his boys is palpable and warms my heart every time. I love how they are all finding their places and being free to be themselves and love together as a family. Nothing bad is allowed to happen. The surreal fairy tale nature is fun as well. Thank you for writing a hot and romantic series. I am dying to know more about the arrangement with the fey and whether Mark it's still about our a prospective daddy partner to keep the rambunctious boys in order. Just who is stocking groceries??? Can't wait for more.

6/24/22, 2:10 AM
@Evan Thank you so much for your amazing comments! I'm so glad that you're enjoying yourself and the fun and joyful tone of this crazy modern fairy tale. Pete is so immensely fun to write, and I'm glad that he comes through as a fun to read character as well. Sam is building his family, and they each have found what they needed to leave terrible situations behind. Chosen family is gonna remain a big theme, and fun surprises will come along the way to the end. Sam is indeed doubly blessed as the kitchen gets stocked, his outfits are set out for him and the beds are made, and even fortuitously necessary books arrived just in time. What's going on indeed? How much magic is at play here? Maybe Sam should do some reading too, but he clearly has been swamped! As for nothing bad happening, the Evil Mother would have words with you about that. Just wait and see if she's done! I'm working on the new chapter and hope to have it ready soon, so until then, thanks, and hope you continue to enjoy the ride!
Anonymous
6/23/22, 11:20 PM
the macrophiles want more tiny jake!
6/23/22, 10:01 PM
Another great story, and touching upon many of my kinks, so a new favorite to add to the list. Kudos, Twan!
6/23/22, 9:10 PM
You just made my day!
6/23/22, 6:46 AM
What if Cassius summons Archy the same way Jacob did?

6/23/22, 8:07 PM
@Subboy-00 Cassius would never allow that to happen. He's overly causious and even draws invisible trap circles to keep demons under control at all times in case he misdraws the original. But if he wanted to be under Archys control he could do it on purpose, and that would pretty much make him helpless. Sorry it took so long to reply, the typo in the question confused me XD
6/23/22, 7:54 PM
After a two-year hiatus, this series is coming back, this time with an ending!
Anonymous
6/23/22, 3:58 AM
i'm genuinely delighted by this series. while the sex is absolutely hot, your writing really shines particularly well in the characters and sense of humor. i'm so excited to see more!
Evan
6/22/22, 11:58 PM
This site is a great place to be able to give feedback on this sort of a story and so I shall eagerly do so. I loved this. Just as Time says, it hints at a broader universe but also allows the reader to focus on the here and now of the tattoo. All the while, curious about how the tattoo works. How it clearly jumped to Viraj. Wyatt is adorable and this story has a wonderful tenderness to it while still exploring a fun supernatural and sexy slutty nature. Spectacularly done. I'm very curious to where where you choose to take it.

6/23/22, 2:37 AM
Thanks so much for the feedback, @Evan! I *thought* I had the rest of the story more or less mapped out in my head, but now there’s a second, much longer version percolating thanks to the fact that Wyatt came into existence and became impossible to ignore while I was writing this instalment. I can still go the original way, but… we’ll see what I have the stomach for :sweat_smile:
6/23/22, 1:10 AM
This was an incredibly unique and surprisingly cute story, definitely not what I was expecting when I clicked on it.
Evan
6/22/22, 11:39 PM
I needed to edit this comment because I neglected to say that I have been eagerly anticipating the continuation of this story for quite a while, after having ravenously consumed all the previous chapters in rapid succession. Thus, I was delighted to learn it was posted. Thank you both for another great chapter. Now to the original comments: Such a web being woven. Distracting Marin was beautifully done, such a sensual and touching piece of writing. It is so very clear Calix cares for them. I do so enjoy how the two of you focus more on sense and feeling than the pure mechanics of sexual scenes. It makes each a delight. You both continue to unspool the threads while keeping a masterful hold of the tensions. Between factions like the crew and Anthix. Between Anthix and Rhys and just what will happen when the crew gets to talk with Jasper. How whatever happens reflects on the budding reconciliation between Anthix and Rhys. Who will find out what about what's been going on with Jasper and how that will appear without the full story? Rhys's caring for Jasper and his uncertainty as to whether he's being played is heartbreaking. As much as I want them to be well together, there is also the clear, honest connection with his old crew and Seth that - at the moment - looks mutually exclusive. The two of you create a twisted, thorny set of circumstances to navigate. The progression feels very natural and very clever ways of bringing information to the various parties and a nice continuation and fallout from Jasper and Rhys's expedition to the slums. The VR scene and its testing ground was nicely played. It felt very on theme and said a lot about the characters on both sides. I think it worked well to bridge a divide there more quickly than might have been done otherwise. Plus VR is fun. But damn you both, why can't Rhys and Jasper just be happy? :D
6/22/22, 7:44 PM
Totally love it! sniffing sweaty uniform must have made me go straight into heaven.
6/22/22, 3:41 PM
Jake is going to claim his own little toy in Cass…
Your closeted gay
6/22/22, 1:50 PM
I love that even though he is a demon, there's a romantic angle to it, and I hope this story explores it more
Anonymous
6/22/22, 3:24 AM
I've never commented on one of these before but the part > “Oh, master Flax” Misery looks me up and down “Is this to be a social visit?” The murky water gathers in her cheeks. Is she blushing?> I legit laughed out loud. That was gold. Solid writing