Recent Comments

6/21/22, 1:10 PM
Great story and great new chapter.
Anonymous
6/21/22, 2:26 AM
oh i'm having a fantastic time with this series. it's sexy, but also incredibly fun and lighthearted. mostly the characters so far are just making me smile immensely. thank you so much, and i'm looking forward to more!
Anonymous
6/21/22, 2:05 AM
It’s so hot! Looking forward to what happens next
6/21/22, 12:38 AM
And now the story gets complicated; Cassius was worried about Archimedes but Jake has now become something to worry about, something his magic cannot handle. Another enjoyable chapter; looking forward to the next!!!
6/21/22, 12:28 AM
This is super hot. I really like the idea of the 'father' or 'brother' guy getting out of jail a subby needy good boy for a gay guy. So yeah this is super hot.
Anonymous
6/20/22, 11:16 PM
One of my favorite stories ever
6/20/22, 9:39 PM
Aw, this was sweet. Also, I appreciate the physics rep—dunno if physics is your major, but I just graduated with my B.S. in it and I'm always happy to see people remember that physics students exist!
6/19/22, 6:40 PM
New fave series

6/20/22, 4:44 PM
@Bound_Up_Boy Thank you! :D
6/20/22, 4:43 PM
I feel like I should have called this chapter three is a crowd. Why are titles so hard?
6/20/22, 1:08 PM
This series is absolute perfection. Thank you very much, Elmara. Dumb, submissive tops and manipulative, horny Bottoms are the best coupling.
6/20/22, 1:14 AM
excited to see where this series goes!
6/20/22, 12:11 AM
I'm loving Archimedes running things and making Cassius angry at almost every turn. An enjoyable read; please keep going!!!
Zeke
6/20/22, 12:01 AM
Awesome! Can't wait to read the next chapter
6/19/22, 11:55 PM
Wow, just realized we aren't far from having #dumbjock as a story tag, more power to you and those who gets off on the tag. Personally I am more into turning nerds into dumbjocks like my name cursing them is my thing my story is no where near ready though.
Anonymous
6/19/22, 7:27 PM
This story is bonkers and i am here for it. LOVE Archy :D
6/19/22, 6:59 PM
Loving how Jacob is gone all the way into slavehood and how delightful Archie is. Cass is in for a ride and I can't wait.
Anonymous
6/19/22, 6:44 PM
This series is amazing
6/19/22, 12:06 PM
Hey @S.Q. Neemie. I really miss this story. Hope you will continue it soon.
6/19/22, 11:32 AM
I need a Jon in my life because this relationship is just PERFECT
6/18/22, 11:14 PM
I like that the demon is not your stereotypical one but a nice one; demons come in all shapes, sizes, and alignments. It's always good to see a good-aligned demon.

6/19/22, 7:27 AM
@New Guy in Town Chaotic good maybe XD
Martin
6/18/22, 8:50 PM
I'm not that far into the story yet (it's rather long in case you didn't notice)... and as much as I appreciate this being on Cupid as this site is seriously underappreciated, I fear that this gem might be overlooked by too many people there. I wouldn't mind if it would be x-posted to Spiral, as transformation is a major topic on Spiral. And this story seems to be absolutely appropriate because of that...

6/18/22, 9:52 PM
@Martin Thank you for the suggestion! I'll go ahead and crosspost it there!
6/18/22, 8:36 AM
My vote for a title is. “The demon in me” lol get it. Anyway great story hope you continue.

6/18/22, 5:36 PM
@Mrdick I might actually use this as a chapter title. Thank you!
6/18/22, 4:36 PM
I would be thrilled to see a continuation of this universe, even if not these exact characters. I would also like to see what happens from here with these characters.
Anonymous
6/18/22, 3:49 PM
Would love to see a sequel this was a lot of fun and cute!
6/18/22, 4:09 AM
Well written and engaging. Most erotica on this site and others is akin to pulp fiction (pulpy friction?) This has more of a literary voice and engages both of the reader's heads.

6/18/22, 3:21 PM
Thanks, @scudder! As this was written for time.to.occur’s _PLOTHOLE: Queer Porn ++With++ Plot_ compilation, I really worked to elevate it above “hey, this is fapping material” level. Glad it connected with you.
6/18/22, 12:39 AM
Enjoyed this! Would love to see more from this world
6/17/22, 6:31 PM
This was a real treat! I'd love to read more of these characters if you're ever up to it. I kinda wanna know how outsiders react to their superheros becoming more and more slutty

6/17/22, 11:37 PM
@gargayle Thank you so much! We've definitely got more planned with these and other characters!
6/17/22, 10:42 PM
Im right at the beginning, but could this be spilt into multiple chapters on the website?

6/17/22, 11:36 PM
@KinkyNickInSea Hey! Thank you for the suggestion! Yes, it could have been but we chose to post it this way because the sex is in the second half of the story. We know it's long, but we hope you'll give it a shot anyway! GKS has a pretty robust bookmarking system that you can bookmark any paragraph from.
6/17/22, 3:29 PM
I'm not sure the title fits the story when it seems like everything turned out for the best. I do so love a happy ending.

6/17/22, 3:43 PM
@goodbiforever 100% agree, i struggle with titles tbh. Any suggestions?

6/17/22, 10:30 PM
@PuffDeamon I like "How I Became Possessed by a Demon," myself He doesn't have his body taken over, as one would expect from the phrase. Instead he ends up a possession OF the demon. So it's kind of intentionally misleading and mildly punny.

6/17/22, 11:25 PM
@goodbiforever I like a punny name. I considered calling it simply demon slave, hoping that the reader would assume Jakob get's to own a demon slave instead of becoming a demon slave himself. Titles are hard XD
Anonymous
6/16/22, 2:28 AM
Loved the entire thing. Great work

6/16/22, 3:00 AM
Thank you! I’ve got the rest of the story percolating about somewhere in the back of my head. One of these days I’ll bring it to the front of my head, and from there to a computer screen near you.

Anon
6/17/22, 10:59 PM
@Noam de Pluma thanks I can't wait!