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12/8/19, 12:40 AM
Incredible stuff here. Absolutely my favorite kind of story. Only two things I'd add: Id love more from Topher's POV during the sessions with Daddy, I love knowing their internal monologue. Please be gentle with the dog stuff. Nothing pulls me out of a hot erotic story more than animal neglect or abuse. I know these daddies are hot but please don't let Topher neglect his dog, that just makes me sad. And the Daddies would be significantly less hot if one of them starts kicking around Topher's dog.

6/24/22, 8:38 PM
Me too@bak2jak. Animal, child and elder abuse pulls me out of the story . My thoughts remain with the animal

6/24/22, 10:03 PM
@Stroppy Author As I said in the comments, the.part where Topher neglected his dog was removed. There will be no animal abuse nor anything remotely similar.
Evan
6/24/22, 5:20 PM
Their friendship is really sweet and what dumb joke doesn't want a best friend to drain his balls whenever he's horny. Win win.
6/24/22, 4:27 PM
Updated part 2. For those who might be wondering, regarding the comments: I removed a mention of Topher having forgotten to feed his dog.
6/24/22, 10:25 AM
Great story! Love a good brat turned good boy.
6/24/22, 12:00 AM
Needed to write in to say how much I enjoy this series - it's playful and fun while still being intensely erotic, and the mini-sex/love triangle is really hot. The normalized sexuality of the world is also always refreshing. Looking forward to the next installment!

6/24/22, 9:05 AM
@getPMPD Thank you so much! I really enjoy writing it.
6/24/22, 7:30 AM
Wow! Domineering Daddy is one of my favourite tropes for sure. Now to wait for chapter 2 😁
Old man kisser
6/23/22, 10:36 PM
"Reed said, handing Ian a piece of paper, using that opportunity to get closer to him." Typo? or was tophers first draft name Ian?

6/24/22, 6:18 AM
@Old man kisser it was indeed, thank you for noticing, I fixed it!
Evan
6/24/22, 4:33 AM
Such a sweet story. I loved the happy ending.
Evan
6/24/22, 3:39 AM
So Viraj's mind constantly going back to Wyatt was art imitating life? I spent a lot of their time in the bleachers searching for a sign Wyatt was getting his own tattoo. And if the way they were interacting would inform it. Say, attached to his cock and leasing him to desire fucking and those seeing it craving to feel it in them. Inverse to Viraj's wanting to be fucked and having the glimpses want to poke him. Whether you continue course, do something new or weave some combination, I know it will be great and can't wait to read it.

6/24/22, 3:58 AM
@Evan the bearer of the tattoo will get like 3/10 obsessed with the person who saw it - a mild compulsion to do the deed with him. The person who saw it ramps up to 10/10 obsessed pretty quick. Things don’t always work the same though, as I alluded to with Kendrick. Also, Viraj is a bottom quite apart from the tattoo. That it landed in his ass was a happy coincidence for him :smile:
Evan
6/24/22, 3:32 AM
What a work of art. It begins with hoping Topher find some of the affection and protection he was leaving in his life so far with Reed and Saint. A teasing, slow build of feeling the boy out. Then the hotness. So sensual, so evocative with senses engaged. When the trap is sprung there comes that tiny tension. Uncertainty of just how caring Reed is after all. Loved the warmth and musk making Topher compliant. Outstanding sexual scenes. Highly charged with hypnosis elements to boot. My buttons were well and truly pressed. And all connected and deep with the focus on their bodies and surrender. Gaining so much more for the choice of their acts not including penetrative sex this time. I would love to see more of this and Reed's power. Is Saint also special in the same or a different way? Did the roommate know something, feeling Topher to be careful, or was it a general concern situation. Loved this. Thank you for an awesome story.