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Martin
6/28/22, 10:26 PM
Wonderful!
Jonanator
6/28/22, 7:55 PM
Nice story.
6/28/22, 7:22 PM
So frickin' cool!! I knew this was coming! But mereboy moment had me both turned on and hoping a bus would drop over him. But now he found Sam!! Loved this so much!
6/27/22, 9:24 AM
I thought this was a very touching story, you can see what's led to Andrew being the way he is even if you want to yell at him until he comes to his senses. It's very sad, I understand the desire to safeguard your emotions to avoid being vulnerable... but at the same time that strangles any hope for intimacy and meaningful connection. I'm glad that the story ended with the possibility for growth, even if Andrew hurt himself and others along the way. The idea of long-term merging leading to addiction is an interesting one, fodder for a future story perhaps?

6/28/22, 6:35 PM
@Zhuge_Lin I'm not super into addiction and the like, but if someone wants to write a story in the same universe they are welcome to.
6/27/22, 12:07 PM
I absolutely loved this story! It was heartbreaking to see how things not intended to hurt someone actually have a profound effect in their lives that is carried forever. Words are powerful, especially with kids. Then, of course, there's Brian, such an archetype for the toxicity in our very own community and I love that you went with a toxic gay man instead of the misogynist like the cliche dictated for most. In the end, there's no magic solution, but the fact that Andrew finally lets go and opens up gives us, and Clement, the glimmer of hope we need. Kudos, this is a really great and touching story.

6/28/22, 6:34 PM
@Essex Thanks a lot. :)
6/27/22, 12:47 PM
This is it. This is the one—the true winner of the contest, in my opinion. Because it showcases the toxicity among our own people: stupid stereotypes of masculinity and topping, the division of the “haves” (tops) and “have nots” (bottoms), the oozing masculinity that poisons our friend groups. The magical touches are a great way of adding a fantastic twist, but it is the grounding of the tale in true emotion, psychology, and room for growth and change that makes it a truly amazing story. Thank you for this gift.

6/28/22, 6:34 PM
@Feed Your Head Thanks a lot for this praise. :)
6/28/22, 2:15 AM
Great story! Well written with very developed characterization. Interesting choice of character names; I recognized the connection with a certain author and illustrator.

6/28/22, 6:33 PM
@Hypnoguy67 I have to admit, I am not sure which author and illustrator you mean. I picked the names based on meanings, not other people.
6/28/22, 6:29 PM
I knew it! I knew it, I knew it, I knew it! Perfect. Slice of Life saga now please
6/28/22, 6:26 PM
As always, Jese is my favorite hypnotized boy, and your story does a masterful job at letting us into his mind, experiencing his confusion and how his mind slowly bends to everything his master is programming him to do, feel and think. I can never read your stories in one go, cause once you get going, I need a break every few paragraphs. No one does the hypno mind-state like you. This one was probably one of the funnest as well. For a moment, I thought Herald was getting both Jessy and Randy, the whole inclusion of the bear was super hot. As always, can't wait for the next adventure with Jese. Kudos!
6/28/22, 4:34 PM
Aaah, Jese. My favourite protagonist. Such a slut at heart, but he doesn't know it. Just needs a guiding hand.