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7/5/22, 3:30 AM
I loved this! It touched on one of my favorite sub-genres which is hot dudes who get so insanely horny that they throw themselves at ugly/undesirable guys. That's always turned me on. Well done!
7/5/22, 1:35 AM
"It would probably rip a hole in the fabric of the time-space continuum and that was a level of crisis that he just wasn’t emotionally prepared to deal with at the minute." I can relate to this! A soulbound former murderous Roman emperor? A baking competition? Stakes are higher than ever! Can't wait for what comes next and Vivian being humiliated anew.
7/4/22, 11:45 PM
Really can't wait to see where this goes. We've come full circle and what comes next is a mystery. Kudos, as always.
blu
7/4/22, 4:16 AM
Great story can't wait to know what will happen next
7/3/22, 8:58 PM
This reminded me very much of William Styron's "Darkness Visible: A Memoir of Madness" - his recollection of one of his particularly dark depressions. But what really hit home about your was the mention of parents. I'm well over 60 and I'm still discovering unwanted attributes that's inherited from my very dysfunctional parents. I guess that's one aspect that makes your story so worthy - to ignite our personal memories that allow us a deeper connection to the narrative. Excellent work.

7/3/22, 10:35 PM
@nycboot thank you so much for saying so. I’ll have to read that book. The parental aspect of it was crucial, and Sabin’s monologue about being the worst was verbatim something I dealt with. Nothing more impactful than the truth and that’s why I felt it worked perfectly for the piece. I really appreciate you saying it’s worthy.
7/3/22, 8:14 AM
Looking forward to reading more of this. 😏

7/3/22, 10:42 AM
thanks for the support @NeedControlling i hope you'll enjoy where I'm going with this
Martin
7/3/22, 5:38 AM
Hot and cute!

7/3/22, 10:41 AM
thanks for the support @Martin :D
7/3/22, 4:59 AM
I look forward to every update! Love this series!
7/3/22, 2:14 AM
I met a few of your friends on the server today. You came highly recommended. I concur in this judgement. This story is not my normal fetish. However, it was well told and I can not wait to see what you do for an encore. Hope to see you on the server soon. Thanks.
7/3/22, 2:09 AM
I met you on the discord server. This story is very good. I smiled that a smiled worked. I agree that a transformation is not necessary here. I’m glad I don’t have to wait a month to see how this story progresses. Xander I’d say is very trusting. What other unknown creatures do you give your spare room too. 😂