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Martin
7/18/22, 8:47 PM
I can only agree with Soren. What a story. Now, if that's a true story, have you been personally involved? In any way, I'm sure you've been the cutest boy on earth!

7/18/22, 9:58 PM
@Martin Yep, this is a true story, near verbatim! What's not in the story is me going on a monologue about how I hate snow and watching the movie Ponyo six times in a row because, after each viewing, I had forgotten I'd watched it.
7/18/22, 7:18 PM
This is so cute, omg. Another smashing addition to Cupid, and it doesn't need any smashing to be adorable sweet. Aside from that, I'm going to be in Boulder for grad school... if you have any suggestions for good places to visit in the Denver/Boulder area, especially as a gay man, I'd be happy to hear them, haha.

7/18/22, 9:56 PM
@Soren Fitz You can't go wrong in this area, it's very gay friendly. MeowWolf for sure, just don't do too many drugs like me, and if you're here in the summer, go to the Niwot Rock and Rails festival on Thursdays. Great time. Most everything else you want to do is outside. Wear sunscreen!
7/18/22, 7:42 AM
This story reminds me of gay-cinema, there is such a deep emotion, a pain that's hard to express but you've managed to capture it so wonderfully. A wildly different take on the challege for sure, somehow you've managed to make this so grounded and real, and even the supernatural elements play into that. It's symbolic of their dynamic, they can merge bodies but there is a distance between them, and then the consequences of staying merged reflect how toxic it is to try to hold on to something that doesn't work. The ending is perfect for the narrative, there is pain, of course, but hope too, and isn't that what life is all about?

7/18/22, 10:31 AM
@Norismo Thank you, it's good to hear that the emotional parts worked. It's always the trickiest part about writing emotional pieces.
Bl Guy
7/17/22, 7:26 AM
Everything about this story is so so amazing... from the interactions to the lore, this has got to be my fav series in this site, like damn does it hit all the buttons. I'm not much into polyamory, but this throuple reaction is so cute and hot at the same time. I really wanna know how you're going to take it here. I love how Xander finally opened up, and having a dom-sub kinda thing where they actually love and care for each other rather than just abusing and treating as a plaything just makes it hotter and sexier for me. Also I'm guessing maybe Allan too has some connection with the parallel universe (I remember he had a dream of the apocalypse)
7/16/22, 5:09 AM
Thank you thank you thank you for writing more of this! I hope the next chapter comes out very soon. Incidentally, check out the novels by 'Nathan Burgoine. The last few chapters reminds me of his work.

7/16/22, 5:14 AM
@Auraseer11 Interesting, I actually follow him on Twitter but I haven't read any of his books yet. I just liked a lot of the tweets he made. As you can see this chapter is extremely large because I just couldn't break it up so it was really like two chapters in one. Hopefully the next chapter is a little bit more reasonably sized and won't take as long.
7/15/22, 10:27 PM
This story is so hot and fun! Thank you for bring it back and expanding it. I do remember the first time I read it. I was hard from beginning to end. It frustrated me so much that you stopped writing it. Glad to have this characters back. Keep on the great writing man!👍❤️😛

7/16/22, 5:13 AM
@BrzNLA Oh I'm glad you're still enjoying it despite it being more plot heavy recently!
7/15/22, 11:40 AM
Really enjoyed this story! I especially loved the build-up to Axel giving in. My favourite scene was probably Rivera's initial transformation over the phone. You write desire and need so well. I loved the combination of Axel's resistance and arousal about the transformation.

7/16/22, 2:02 AM
@time.to.occur I'm glad I pulled off Rivera's transformation! I was excited when I had that idea and it was fun to write. I'm going to have to learn from myself here. Desire and need are important themes for me throughout many of my stories, along with resistance and arousal, and I want to portray those authentically and arousingly. Thanks for reading!
7/15/22, 6:27 AM
That dinner! I laughed so hard, I revel in such hijinks :revolving_hearts:
7/15/22, 5:09 AM
Wow! So sizzling hot and sweet, and absolutely spell-binding! (sperm-binding?) Perfect -- so looking forward to more if Xander's Dad doesn't somehow stop it. Thanks so much. Such an awesome story!
7/15/22, 2:30 AM
Such a treat! I loved that we got to know Xander a lot more and that they're becoming a throuple. I really love the dynamics that begin to grow between them and that Xander accepts them both as boyfriends and has taken them out on a date. The fact that he owns them and decides what they wear is super hot, and still, he values and cares for them, which I absolutely relate to. Now, as we get into the lore, there was a lot going on and I now can't wait to see what happens next, why Xander's dad was so against this and what really is going on. A fantastic job expanding one of my favorite classic stories!

7/15/22, 4:12 AM
@Essex Well you're going to like the next chapter then. As far as Alex senior that I thought should be clear from this part: He knows that his son could personally start a nanotech apocalypse if he just can't keep his dick in his pants. And he has already had to do things to prevent that from happening in the past. He absolutely does not want that to happen to his friend's family.
7/14/22, 6:33 AM
This story is amazing <3 it’s definitely in my top 5 on this site. I read the first three parts some years ago ne now I’m so happy that you’re continuing it.

7/15/22, 4:11 AM
@jade Thanks. It would be nice if I could just focus on one of my series but I'm working on too many things all at once so they're coming out erratically paced!
7/13/22, 6:24 PM
Was so excited to see another chapter of this. It did not disappoint! Thank you for continuing it!
7/13/22, 6:03 PM
Really, *really* looking forward to this continuing! 😍
7/13/22, 10:35 AM
Amazingly written, amazingly plotted, amazingly *everything*. I love this series so damn much.

7/13/22, 1:16 PM
@Twan Andersen Oh thank you! This part ran a lot longer than I wanted to because I ended up having to include material that was supposed to go into the next part. It just didn't break well otherwise.
7/13/22, 9:12 AM
The best story has returned! I was beginning to worry that you might have abandoned this story or that we would have to wait a long time because of your new series. Thanks for continueing. Hoping for Tanner and the pastor to have a talk again soon. My favorit part of the story.
7/12/22, 11:34 PM
I've been waiting for exactly this: "“Huh?” Himbo and Obmih asked." So much fun, and a mystery man! Who could he be? Congratulations, Nori old chap! :monocle_face:

7/13/22, 6:44 AM
@Essex thank you kindly my good fellow :monocle_face:
7/13/22, 6:36 AM
Fucking amazing, wish I had a daddy to make me cum like that.
7/12/22, 10:04 PM
Oh my! This was so sweet! I loved it! :sparkling_heart: I think this chapter definitely clarifies the path. In easy cinematic terms, Tanner twists regular bonds into lustful and humiliating ++porn movies++ while the spirit in the cat turns those porn movies into beautiful and steamy ++rom-coms++. What's funny is that I truly enjoy both! I guess Tanner resonates with my inner perv while the other spiritual creature touches my most romantic side. This kind of felt like a fairy tale, actually. Set in the heart of a forest, where the knight in shining armor rushes unstoppable through the woods, finds his loved one thanks to the invisible forces of destiny, releases him from his pain, and then realizes how beautiful and irreplaceable they are to each other, sealing their eternal love with a kiss of true love (and some good old finger-fucking :fire:). I wasn't expecting a chapter, and I wasn't expecting THIS chapter. I kind of gave up on witnessing more happy turns like Ethan's when Devon didn't get one right after being abused by his father. But I get it now! Tony had to have his life _Tannerized_ before they both could have their torments lifted. Once again, thank you for the chapter! I'm eager to see what other (mis)adventures this magic creatures have in store for the youth group.

7/13/22, 12:52 AM
@Piko oh wow, nice. I love your description of things. I have to admit I like this sort of thing more than the demon one, though my all time favorite chapter is the one with the rimming and the father and son. hehe But yeah your description is interesting and cool.
7/12/22, 9:12 PM
This was hot and fun and sexy. Nice work!
7/12/22, 8:15 PM
So excited for more of this! One of my favorite stories on the entire site!
7/12/22, 7:21 PM
Undoubtedly the best slice of life story around here And Obmih has definitely become my favourite. I can't wait for more! I wonder what that man's name is though...

7/12/22, 7:31 PM
@Twan Andersen A mystery indeed :smile:
Flamefox23
7/12/22, 3:11 AM
That was a hot story.

7/12/22, 4:31 AM
@Flamefox23 I'm glad you thought so! I was a little worried that some of the hotness would get lost behind the drama. I'm glad it still shined through, and hopefully blended well?
7/11/22, 6:38 PM
Male lactation? Muscle growth? Slow, delightful corruption? Did I write this story? This was absolutely wonderful! Thank you for such a beautifully fleshed out tale.

7/11/22, 7:39 PM
@absman420 Aaaa! Thank you so much. I know I sacrificed some attention from readers for the sake of the length I gave it, but I didn't feel I could do justice to the emotional or corruptive journey without each of the scenes here. I'm glad you appreciated all the love and fleshing out I gave it. It's really such a treat when a known (and illustrious) author like yourself finds and likes one of my stories. I'm grinning my ears off. If you happen to know anyone else who might like this kind of thing, please spread it around if you want to! But don't feel obligated. Thanks again for the glowing compliments =D
7/11/22, 8:30 AM
where is ch 5??? i thought i saw it was released?

7/11/22, 10:14 AM
@Kinkypup Hey, you're right it was, but i was in the middle of moving house so i feel like i rushed it. Its not really up to my standard atm so im gonna re-do and post later
Bl guy
6/25/22, 6:12 PM
I really like where this story's going... it seems like Xander's also falling for Allan and I want him to realize his feelings...

7/8/22, 6:14 PM
@Bl guy Well not to be a terrible tease... No wait actually that's exactly what I'm about to do... Wait until you read part 5, which is hopefully coming by the end of this month.

Bl Guy
7/11/22, 8:17 AM
@Nocturne13 Can't wait to read chapter 5, this story's got me hooked both for how hot it is and also cause the actual story and the developing relationships between the characters is soo good, there are very few stories where you can find both of these... take your time and deliver a masterpiece like you always do
Evan
7/10/22, 9:31 PM
Incredible! What a fantastic story. Just on its own it is magnificent and as an entry for Toxic Masculinity it's a wonderful and imaginative take on it. Shining even brighter given the requirement of the theme. The gradual build, the resistance and tension of avoiding Tao spreading his milk to others was wonderful and had me invested. His succumbing was probably inevitable but HOW that happened was glorious. Mentally more than physically. But both were perfect. The Axel eventually figuring out he and Tao love each other and his overcompensation is costing them happiness. Frantically trying to avoid being changed by a stranger. Wanting it to be Tao. So romantic and hot. Then the conclusion of their accepting each other and growing and pounding. Even when they lose their minds for a fortnight, they stick together. Very sweet. Puck is a mystery. And the two weeks of mindless horny fucking and feeding to change others is hot too. But also mysterious. Why two weeks. Why do they change back. How do they feel afterward. What happens to others changed during the two weeks, being already past 12. Instantly mindless bulls to join the rest? I also find the worldbuilding on this subtle but intriguing. Nut butter sounds like it has cum in it. The military fucking for conquest and dominating each other both for contest and for fun. Loved this. Well done!

7/11/22, 6:53 AM
@Evan The number of times I’ve read this comment in sheer delight embarrassed me. But I am proud to be proud of my work, and grateful that you loved it! You saw everything I was going for, you appreciated the little tidbits of worldbuilding I left—that’s my signature, I feel, is blending subtle worldbuilding into a story that can handle those extra hints—and you hit the nail on the head with nut butter. Yes, it involves cum. I hope I accomplished the effect of making the world feel like a real one, in which these characters live—even if some of its facts are surprising and not yet explainable, like the sex-based military. And Puck. Please, if you can, spread this around—I’m posting pretty late in the contest, and I can use all the ratings I can get. But don’t feel obligated. A review like this was enough to make me feel pride in my own work, and that’s enough reward for me!
Meddler Incs
7/10/22, 7:04 PM
Amazing story! (Also, _Puck_?!? What is that fae doing in this story universe!? :rofl: :raised_eyebrow: :monocle_face:)

7/10/22, 7:45 PM
@Meddler Incs I'm glad you enjoyed it! Puck is meant to be a teaser of the deeper lore behind the events of this story. I'm still spinning that out in my other stories on this site; he's been referenced in one story I've published and will have another mention later. I thought it'd be a fun little tidbit, and I left it until the end, so I hope it wasn't distracting =P

7/10/22, 8:34 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Oh no, it was a perfect monkey wrench! That right amount of jarring that polished off the rest of the story. I like stuff like that. :satisfied:
6/19/22, 3:57 PM
This is one of the HOTTEST stories I have ever read in this site and in my life in general. As someone who grew up watching anime and reading manga, I have always wanted to see an erotic story about magical boys in super tight and skimpy clothing, with hot bodies, big assess and who always end up getting fucked by allies and villains alike - so you nailed every single thing on my checklist here. Also, the dirty talking and transformation of the magical boys into unapologetic sluts is so fucking hot. I always knew I wanted to see super slutty, whore like magical boys and you just delivered it to me. This story got me off so well last night and I got incredibly hot with Araci calling Max “Superslut”. Is there any way this could actually be his official superhero name? That would be really sexy to see, only if it’s just how he is called online by people… Also, kudos to you for Araci, I’m Brazilian and I loved all the references to my country. I can’t wait to see the other Magical Boys who will get into the group and turned into slutty heroes and also can’t wait to see the reaction of people as well when they start noticing their saviors getting more and more slutty and exposed as the story goes. Cheers dude, please don’t take too long to post another chapter, I already know I’ll reread this a lot till you do!

7/8/22, 4:16 AM
@Elmara I have just read your bio and saw that you are nonbinary, so I’d like to apologize for calling you dude and any other misgendering I might have done in my haste to praise your story. Was just checking out to see if there was an update when I saw your bio. Hope you’re well!

7/9/22, 1:45 AM
@Elmara Thank you so much for this comment and your enthusiasm for this story! "dude" is totally fine to call me, and we just didn't have the chance to answer because of timing! Actually, we have one more long scene to write before we'll be ready to edit and then share the next parts! We'll be introducing another Magical Boy~! So glad that we're hitting those buttons and love that you get to enjoy Araci as a Brazilian! <3 Superslut would make a great press nickname for Max!
7/6/22, 1:50 AM
I check this story out everyday to see if there’s an update ;) can’t wait for more!

7/9/22, 1:35 AM
@Elmara <3 <3 <3
7/9/22, 12:32 AM
I had to wait all week to have the time to really sit down and read this chapter. I'm so happy to see where you've lead us, and seeing Paul and his boys reunited. I love that prices were payed, even those that hurt, but it just gives everything so much more depth. You are writing a Saga, and you know I'm in for the ride. I hope to keep reading so much more and loving the nod to the the other initiate I was hoping to get to see again. Kudos!