Love this! This was super hot and sexy.

Hot story! Love the mantra of repeating “Hair hair hair” as he grows hairier. Will it be continued?

I love this story so much! The naïveté of the dad and son, and the implication that they both have the itch. Can’t wait for them to explore more ways to take care of it. Keep up the good work!

Hope we get to read more of this! 😁

You do a great thing of building anticipation as all the different gods visit these young guys, while also making the eventual outcome feel natural and inescapable! Thanks for another amazing, lore-rich hot-as-hell chapter!

Really loved the progression of how his mind slipped and his body changed to the suggestions of the anthro! I love a slow burn like that and the descriptions were phenomenal. I don’t know if you took inspiration or if you read Nex Anima Canis’ story before but it had a vibe similar to his old stories settled in school (that’s a big compliment!). Loved the corruption aspect of the transformation and the details of how big he was changing and growing! I hope to read more of your stories in the future!

I think this is one of my favorite stories ever. Axel and Tao are so well-written, and the way you slowly unveiled their world kept me hooked. Also, I really enjoyed the veteran bits - it almost seems like you might have some military experience yourself. I hope you win the cumpetition!

I love your style and I'm eager to see more work from you here. Both of your pieces fit in well with the themes of the sites, your writing is great and the approach is so hot. The bullying wasn't favoured by me either but it very starkly showed how much he was being changed by Dyl. Even if the bullying was just in his head, a memory that wasn't real but informed his new jock powerful-canine self. I am telling myself that his old friends aren't to be trusted either. Little troublemakers, the lot of them. I am sure they'll get detention themselves soon so won't have a chance to experience any actual bullying from him. A totally different personality as well as body. His mind slowed down. The way that was done, by telling him things like how he'd been in detention before because he'd cheated on the test because he's a bit slow like many of his kind. That was awesome. I got the feeling Dyl was trying to pull the right levers and push the right buttons to get Anthony to emerge. Given his comment at the end about finally having it happen it was like he was frustrated with the resistance or difficulty but in the end he won. Almost like they were playing a game of chess with our main character throwing up defenses and pawns and Dyl taking his pieces a different route until... Checkmate. The mind and body transformation totally out of the main character's control was so good. It's also got a great background worldbuilding going on. Questions and potential for the universe. The principal who I suspected at the start was actually the same principal but with a new coat of paint and brain - But we don't have any evidence of whether he's just a regular replacement and the instigator of all this canine takeover or if Dyl was behind it all and got to the head of the school first to smooth the path. The ability for Dyl to change fellow students into different fellow students. This has a (less scary, more hot) feel of the teen movies where aliens take over the school via body control or copying or whatever. I like this version much better. Especially the subtlety of the detention method. Good students convinced it's a mistake, showing up to sort it out and then losing themselves. Will the remaining humans be able to avoid becoming like the others. A life of a canine subservience to Dyl? Let's hope not.

Aaaaa I can't believe it took me so long to read this! It was as beautiful and heartwrenching as I expected. I could feel Clement's pain as I watched Andrew in the club with Brian. The flashbacks you used were just perfect, always right on time, and slowly building up Andrew's past and what led to his feelings today. It pained me that Andrew couldn't vocalise what the actual reasons were that he wouldn't open up, wouldn't share. I also thought that you did a _very_ good job of making this a "lived-in" world as a friend once said to me. You take a bit of time to explain how merging works; you explain some of the consequences—and I can immediately predict how Sergio actually feels about Brian, and suspect that Sergio really dislikes Brian but is stuck with him as with an abuser. (I also have a general preference for transformations like this that are only temporary, so you can build a real, sensible world around them. So that was extra fun.) All in all, awesome worldbuilding, exceptional story, beautiful character development. A smashing addition to Cupid.

I wish! This is my first play in years. Last time I wrote a full play was in high school. I was the only one in my year who didn’t get produced, so it’s been my dream to be the first of my peers to get produced outside of school.