Recent Comments

8/21/22, 6:40 AM
This is one of my favourite series. I hope to see where it goes. Thanks for writing and sharing :heart:
8/18/22, 6:02 AM
Fantastic chapter! Jack sounds so real, you've really done an amazing job in characterization. And just when things were about to get heated... you got them gaming together! So awesome! I love how Finn is slowly falling for insecure Jack but how Jack is the boss in-game. Which, incidentally, was also very interestingly fleshed out, cheers to that too! I hope you keep going, this is such a cute story, and Rada is sure to complicate it interestingly.

8/21/22, 1:52 AM
@Essex Knowing the characterization is working for people is really gratifying. I was a little worried the swerve works bother people but I'm uh... edging my readers. Look forward to a fun twist next part.
8/18/22, 4:09 AM
This story is the wish I didn’t know i needed. It rubs my lamp in all the right ways. I usually hate a slow burn but I love the focus on the characters so much that I am fine with letting you edge me. Thank you and I am excited for what comes next.

8/21/22, 1:51 AM
@Unruly Dogboy Thank you! Means a lot.
8/17/22, 8:08 PM
Really, really enjoying this. 😛😛😛

8/21/22, 1:51 AM
@NeedControlling thanks!
8/19/22, 7:21 PM
Still hoping that Vic asserts himself and takes control of his Daddy more

8/19/22, 8:09 PM
@Knighte If you pay attention Vic is definitely the one calling all the shots. He’s got Coach wrapped around his finger without Coach even knowing it.
Anonymous
8/19/22, 3:25 PM
You have the damn ability to suck me in (no pun intended) to your characters and their world VERY FEW authors I've read can make me feel. Seems like I am getting to KNOW these characters. Favorited story and looking for more chapters. Bravo!
8/19/22, 9:27 AM
Amazing story! The blend of rough, raw sex and sweet, gentle emotion is a delicious dish. :D And I know I carped about consent in previous comments, so I want to say that I really like that you included lines like “gave me permission with his eyes” in this tale. :) Hooray for your imagination!
Anonymous
8/19/22, 1:10 AM
I’m absolutely loving this story! You do a great job capturing the chemistry and other feelings between these guys. Can’t wait for more
8/18/22, 7:34 PM
The Himbo/Obmih dynamic is so good! This whole series is so good and wholesome, it's sugar to my soul!

8/18/22, 7:52 PM
@Twan Andersen I'm so glad you've been enjoying it :grin: Their dynamic is so fun to write!
8/18/22, 7:31 PM
This is the modern Scooby Doo I never thought I wanted, fantastic job as always!

8/18/22, 7:47 PM
@Twan Andersen The highest of praise :blush: