This is so good, man, really reminds me of Knothole High and stuff like that. Not many stories here that combine anthros (especially canines) with jocks and masculinization. This story is hitting all of my buttons, from the massive bulking up to the mental changes and jockification. I don’t know what you have planned, but I always enjoy seeing the transformation spread out over a longer period of time rather than one event, but this is still awesome.

Can't wait to read more!

Time for an updated summary of everything that is going on here: 1) Base Nick - Your classic straight* himbo: big, dumb, and kind. Can be a little full of himself, but kind to his friends, teammates, and roommate. Has a magic* dick that women are attracted to, and when fucking puts both partners in "the zone" and they black out/go on automatic; we don't know if this effects dudes. Listens to dudes (he respects/ with authority?) To such an extent that they can make him cum or change his way of thinking (though there is a chance something else magnifies this). Wants Darius to be in control of him. Might be into pup play. 1.1) Hypnotized Nick - Gwen's computer program has hypnotized him and is making him a douchy gay jock bro. He's becoming ruder, more controlling, and much more critical of everyone around him. Thinks he knows best and everyone, including Darius, should just listen to him and do as he says. Much more "dominant". Still wants to be with Darius. Unaware 1.2) Cursed Nick - Deborah has cursed him, possibly to be more of a dom top. When he us assertive he gains muscle. Teammates, opposing players, and his coach feel sick when they oppose him and are much more willing to back down and follow him. Ill effects might go away when they listen, and they seem more inclined to do so. Darius hasn't gotten sick from him yet. Still wants to be with Darius. Unaware 1.3) Puppy Nick - Gets joy out of listening to Darius, wearing his collar, and doing what he says. Generally kind and more willing to try to be a better person. Often says this is exactly what he wants and has consented to, but Darius has doubts. Can (currently) override alpha douche king. Aware 2) Base Darius - Gay guy, decently in shape with some muscle tone. Attracted to his roommate and worried about having so much control over someone. 2.1) "Hypnotized" Darius - Intended to make him a submissive gay beta. Broken from a combination of him already being gay and his father calling during the first dose. Immediately sends his computer away, so doesn't fets the 2-3 weeks of dosing Nick got. No known lasting effects. Aware 2.2) Cursed Darius - Deborah has cursed him, possibly to be more of a submissive bottom. She thought it would force him to listen to whatever she asked him to do, but doesn't seem to. He loses muscle when he is submissive to Nick, and Nick can force him to change his mind, including forgetting things. Unaware Am i missing anything so far? Looking forward to future chapters and being utterly shattered when Nick goes full on Alpha douche and loses himself, probably hurting Darius and effecting his mind as well.. (Hopefully followed by a happy ending, of course.)

So hot! Looking forward to more!

Great idea for a story! I hope to see where this grows; I mean goes.

Someone that can't be deceived is a nice textural variation. I love how distinct the dynamics and situation is with each different target and family in this story. No characters feel interchangeable at all. Really enjoying it.

Great story, looking forward to see where this goes. Thanks

I didn't like the structure at first. But it started winning me over. I think you took some story telling risks, and some writing risks too. In the end, I though it was a well told and unique story.

. > _"Fuck, it sucks that we won’t remember,” said Aidan as he stood up and stretched._ Oh, buddy, I don't think I will be forgetting this any time soon! :laughing: I guess I must be one of those in the audience who _"really paid attention"_ What to say. This was **so damn erotic!** The sheer unawareness, the mindless following, the relishing of power, the public display of sexual dominance and the normalcy of it all. Everything was exuding sex and domination. I'm sure Tanner knew **convincing Jiang would be fruitless and dissatisfactory**, so that's why he decided not to give that route the slightest of attempts. I like how the enigmatic pastor messed with the poor presumptuous boy making him the only person fully aware of this **nonsensical and depraved show**. I'm positive that it was not only to feed on Jiang's disconfort but also to send him a clear a message on who's in charge. It has to be a powerful display of authority when you are made to stay on your seat while a whole auditorium is forced to become **obedient puppets**, sexual exhibition included. As for me, I was fully excited and in complete awe at the whole scene! **Teacher/Student** relationships are close to incest in my ranking of kinks so this hit all the right buttons. Also, I love the insinuation that both Duffy and Mr. Sparks will be having uncomfortable and inexplicable fantasies about each other even after they forget the event. Now, I will be eager to see what Tanner has schemed for Jiang. The mysterious man has a brilliant mind for the wicked. But I'll be waiting patiently for the next installment. Good things are meant to take time, and I'm gonna use plenty savoring this hot scene you gave us :grin:

Another great addition to the series and a great setup for Jiang's story-line. As always, a fantastically hot piece that sets us up for even higher stakes. Keep it up!