LOVE this series BUT I do hope Luke and sammy become a couple. Its the romantic in me LOL His dream had me worried it was Very HOT and it is a fantasy in a fantasy world. Amazing writing!!!

I love the idea of a gay sailor moon ripoff. Very nicely written too! Are we going to see more magical boys in the future? I hope there will be many more chapters.

Oh I hope Sammy and Luke end up together

I refresh this daily in hopes of a new chapter...

It’s been a while since I looked at this last (gotta love my editor’s privilege of having had quite the sneak peek months in advance), and I’d forgotten what a great job you did at making this a very spiritual experience. The tapping into each other’s focus is a fantastic detail that just deepens the experience for both of them, and the sex is (per usual) blisteringly hot. Well, well, well done!

Fun fact: the crime of sodom was not homosexuality, but homophobia, it was mis-written at some point

This is absolutely amazing so far. Love a POV controlled story

So worth the wait! Love love love this story! And loved the ending! Happy Talley Accepted who he was in the end! And I hope him and Riki have a lot of fun the future! Can’t wait for him to return and kinda hope he uses his magical instant fuck hormones more! Would love to see the state that puts people in! But over all loved it dude!

What a chapter! There are a lot of threads coming together. So much double-talk too, whether intentional or unknowingly. With Marin leading Jasper to a meeting with his friends thinking they were just getting to know one another. Rhys and Anthix pointing out strangeness in Jasper's taking to pet life and a very believable interpretation of why for Rhys given neither knows of the meddling with Jasper's mind. Every time Rhys considers that Jasper could be using him - that we know isn't the case - my heart hurts just like his does. If only he could have seen that interaction in the roof garden. But could he believe it wasn't all an act with the crew in on it. That's the trouble with trust, isn't it? I am both excited by and dreading the plan to discover and prove that Jasper has had his mind altered. It's true but he's just so happy and I fear Rhys is going to get the blame from Anthix, the crew, and Jasper. Not only that but Rhys fearing that Jasper only loves him because he was programmed to and not because there was genuine affection there even before the memory machine and subsequent training. Hopefully he can remember their early interactions before the training took hold. I think that's my biggest apprehension. Naturally, conflict is where drama happens but I just want them all to be happy and get along. So, again, excited and dreading the tension and aching hearts of what I imagine may happen. The crew infiltrating the school labs will be interesting too. Can they pull it off? Jasper's plan was great if only Rhys hadn't recognised him so it should work even better with these unknowns. Except Iskios, since they met in the slums. But then, what are the chances Rhys is visiting the campus again when a heist is going down. I really love that Jasper can feel happy where he is and still feel he's doing good with Rhys for the place he came from. Julian being the one most pissed off is deliciously amusing to me given it was his appearance that helped train Jasper into this mindset in the first place. That must be a little confusing for Jasper even though he consciously knows it wasn't really Julian. There's so much more to talk about but it's just gushing. Sex scenes with bonding, acceptance, exhibitionism, tenderness. Then there's all the delicious character stuff to enjoy. So good. Thank you both for another chapter. Loved it.

I am curious about a few things. One, when is this story coming back for another chapter and will it have an ending? Two, what is the ratio of straight to bi to gay now? I feel like there is almost no straight people but the changes I thought made 30% of people gay, but maybe I remembered wrong. Three, I know this is probably the wrong site to ask this, but with the sexercise edit, can we see how more of the women are getting buff as well? Finally, is Sam going to end up gay/bi or is he always going to be this "straight" person with a heavily altered conception of straight? Great work as always, though I can't wait for the next chapter.